Kya buri shaiy hai daam ki khushboo.....Sadiq Rizvi

by Sadiq Rizvi on January 08, 2012, 01:40:18 PM
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Zulf-e-mushkeeN se shaam ki khushboo
Huyee mahsoos kaam ki khushboo

Rooh ko aatey jaatey milti hai
Zindagi ke pyaam ki khushboo

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam
Namaber laaya naam ki khushboo

Rahnumai ka kaam karti hai
Unke jaye-Qayaam ki khushboo

Dare-maikhana per khada hai Shaikh
Jaisey leta ho jaam ki khushboo

SaaNs latey hi kaash mil jaati
Muddaaye-kalam ki khushboo

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
Kya buri shaiy hai daam ki khushboo

Ahedey-maazi ki yaad hai 'Sadiq'
sookhey pattoN mein aam ki khushboo

.........................Sadiq Rizvi
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«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2012, 01:44:17 PM »
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Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on January 08, 2012, 01:40:18 PM
Zulf-e-mushkeeN se shaam ki khushboo
Huyee mahsoos kaam ki khushboo

Rooh ko aatey jaatey milti hai
Zindagi ke pyaam ki khushboo

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam
Namaber laaya naam ki khushboo

Rahnumai ka kaam karti hai
Unke jaye-Qayaam ki khushboo

Dare-maikhana per khada hai Shaikh
Jaisey leta ho jaam ki khushboo

SaaNs latey hi kaash mil jaati
Muddaaye-kalam ki khushboo

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
Kya buri shaiy hai daam ki khushboo

Ahedey-maazi ki yaad hai 'Sadiq'
sookhey pattoN mein aam ki khushboo

.........................Sadiq Rizvi


good one............! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2012, 02:28:30 PM »
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 Applause
 wah wah.....bahut khoob sadiq sahab...
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«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2012, 07:56:07 PM »
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Bahut khoob,Sadiq saheb.Maqte ne waqai maazi ki yaad dilaa dee :
 
    Lucknow   yaad   aa   gaya   Humko ,
    Har taraf bikhri  Aam  ki  khushboo

                                  -Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2012, 08:30:55 PM »
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Hasam Saheb aadaab
nwazish karm shukraa
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2012, 10:54:55 PM »
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Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on January 08, 2012, 01:40:18 PM
Zulf-e-mushkeeN se shaam ki khushboo
Huyee mahsoos kaam ki khushboo

Rooh ko aatey jaatey milti hai
Zindagi ke pyaam ki khushboo

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam
Namaber laaya naam ki khushboo

Rahnumai ka kaam karti hai
Unke jaye-Qayaam ki khushboo

Dare-maikhana per khada hai Shaikh
Jaisey leta ho jaam ki khushboo

SaaNs latey hi kaash mil jaati
Muddaaye-kalam ki khushboo

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
Kya buri shaiy hai daam ki khushboo

Ahedey-maazi ki yaad hai 'Sadiq'
sookhey pattoN mein aam ki khushboo

.........................Sadiq Rizvi

Har jumla duba qabil-e daad ki khusboo men
Har khayal gehra qabil-e yaad ki mehk se

Waah! Wah!... Bahut ache Sadiq Sahab.. bahot khoob..

Abul aSad


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2012, 05:41:18 AM »
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aapke kalaam ki khushboo se tar hogayaa hoon baaut bahu mubaarakbaad
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2012, 07:07:02 AM »
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bht achi ghazal hai janaab
daad daad
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«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2012, 07:54:17 AM »
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Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on January 08, 2012, 01:40:18 PM
Zulf-e-mushkeeN se shaam ki khushboo
Huyee mahsoos kaam ki khushboo Applause Applause

Rooh ko aatey jaatey milti hai
Zindagi ke pyaam ki khushboo Applause Applause

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam
Namaber laaya naam ki khushboo Applause Applause

Rahnumai ka kaam karti hai
Unke jaye-Qayaam ki khushboo Applause Applause

Dare-maikhana per khada hai Shaikh
Jaisey leta ho jaam ki khushboo Applause Applause

SaaNs latey hi kaash mil jaati
Muddaaye-kalam ki khushboo Applause Applause

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
Kya buri shaiy hai daam ki khushboo Applause Applause Applause

Ahedey-maazi ki yaad hai 'Sadiq'
sookhey pattoN mein aam ki khushboo Applause Applause

.........................Sadiq Rizvi

Vaah vaah Sadiq Sir
masoomiyat aur sanjeedgi se bhari is ghajal ke kya kahne.. Har sher laajavaab hai..
duayeN aapke liye..Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2012, 12:36:21 PM »
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Daad se shaad ho ke 'Sadiq' ne
Payee hai KHUSH-KALAAM KI KHUSHBOO
mkv saheb Abul Asad saheb Sirfira saheb adil bechain saheb
Dr. Saini saheb & Mr.ratin virgo ka shukr-guzaar hoon jinhoN ne apna qeemti waqtt meri ghazal pe sirf kiya.Thank you.
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2012, 08:24:08 PM »
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azeezam sadiq rizvi sahab ,, Assalamwalekum ..

Apki ghazal ne der tak apne hisar me rakha ..mai kaafi mustafeed howa ..Go ke apki ghazal shahkaar hai ...Apse Ahle ilm hazrat se bazm ki tajjaliyat me mazeed izafa hua hai ..Meri dad khubool kare.N ...Taham eak chiz apse puchni so puch raha hun ..Khiyal na kare.N

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
Kya buri shaiy hai daam ki khushboo

Lafz tabdeel ka wazn FELUN Hai ke MAFOOL..Bara-e-maherbani Batayen ..Chunke jahan tak maine parha hai Iska wazn mafhool hi hai ...Ap bahetar bata sakte hainm ...Eak baar phir meri dad khubool karen..

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam ? is misre lafz nama hai ke naam...IS sher ko nasr me dekhne par khuch ye guma ho raha hai ke Misra-e-oola me lafz tha Fel-e-maazi hai jabke misra -e-saani lafz laaya Maujoda halaat pe dalalat karta hai ...bara-e-maherbani rahenumai farhm kar sikhne ka mauqa de.N,,,,,,,Allah Apko khush rakhe ....

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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2012, 12:59:12 PM »
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Sadiq Sahab,

Waah waah kya kahney aapke kalaam
kee khushboo ne aakhir bula hee liya
liya yoindia par.

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2012, 06:13:39 PM »
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Qadeer saheb salamat raho

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
(Fayelatun mufayeln fa1lun ke wazan per Yeh Ghazal Bahrey-khafeef  hai iss liye harfe-sakin jo gira diya gaye hai uske saath tabdeel failun hai jo ki urooz ki sharah mein jayez hai

Doosra Aitraaz

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam
Namaber laaya naam ki khushboo
Misra-e-oola me lafz THA Fel-e-maazi hai ke" aapne apne aamad ki khaber to naheeN dee thee (haal mein)phir aap achanak  kaise waarid hogaye" Iska matlab hai Past ki baat present mein ho  rahi hai.Mera khayaal hai ke iss example se aap satisfy ho gaye honge.
Khuda hafiz
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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2012, 06:40:53 PM »
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Qadeer saheb salamat raho

Dosti zahr mein huyee tabdeel
(Fayelatun mufayeln fa1lun ke wazan per Yeh Ghazal Bahrey-khafeef  hai iss liye harfe-sakin jo gira diya gaye hai uske saath tabdeel failun hai jo ki urooz ki sharah mein jayez hai

Doosra Aitraaz

Na koi nama tha na koi pyaam
Namaber laaya naam ki khushboo
Misra-e-oola me lafz THA Fel-e-maazi hai ke" aapne apne aamad ki khaber to naheeN dee thee (haal mein)phir aap achanak  kaise waarid hogaye" Iska matlab hai Past ki baat present mein ho  rahi hai.Mera khayaal hai ke iss example se aap satisfy ho gaye honge.
Khuda hafiz



Mahutram Sadiq Rizvi sahab Tasleemat ,,Apka khat Masool howa go ke massarat ka baaic bana Jazak Allah  ,,

Shukriyah Apne rahe raushnai ata ki ...

Dua go

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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2012, 07:23:12 PM »
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Qadeer saheb

Aap ko umr meri lagjaye
Bus yahi har ghadi dua hai meri

Salamat-o-dilshaad rahiye
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