Kya Kahiye !!

by deepika_divya on September 09, 2009, 03:41:00 PM
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Nasiyat-e-Zindgai mili har Manzil har raah par, Kya kahiye !
Hui mujhse bhi khatayee.N bahoot, Hun bashar Kya kahiye !!

Bolandiyo.N ko choona hai, yea Azam tha Dil mai bahoot,
Miley har qadam pe wo dushman e ghar, kya kahiye !!

Nakaamiyo.n se ye aakhri umeed bhi na toot jaye kahin
Haaye ke in nakhudaao.n ka qeher, kya kahiye!!

Wahi hain roz o shub aur wahi tishnagi e jaan bhi hai
Nahi hai to bas wo teri qatil nazar, kya kahiye!!

Bhatakete rahe dar ba dar liye qaza e shikwa "Divya"
Bas unko hi hui na kisi tour bhi khabar, kya kahiye!!

!!Divya!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2009, 03:59:11 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Divs, definitely one of your best creations  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2009, 04:49:01 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah bahoot khoob Divya!!! bahoot khoob!!! 
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2009, 05:39:59 PM »
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superb Sophi ji..........itna pyaara likha hai aapne k kya kahiye Usual Smile Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2009, 07:13:41 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Sophi ji very beautiful gazal mindblowing creation.excellent
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2009, 08:19:12 PM »
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really one of the best creations of your
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«Reply #6 on: September 10, 2009, 02:59:27 AM »
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Wahi hain roz o shub aur wahi tishnagi e jaan bhi hai
Nahi hai to bas wo teri qatil nazar, kya kahiye!!

Wah Divya... bahut khoob dear  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: September 10, 2009, 07:18:39 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 09, 2009, 03:41:00 PM
Nasiyat-e-Zindgai mili har Manzil har raah par, Kya kahiye !
Hui mujhse bhi khatayee.N bahoot, Hun bashar Kya kahiye !!

Bolandiyo.N ko choona hai, yea Azam tha Dil mai bahoot,
Miley har qadam pe wo dushman e ghar, kya kahiye !!

Nakaamiyo.n se ye aakhri umeed bhi na toot jaye kahin
Haaye ke in nakhudaao.n ka qeher, kya kahiye!!

Wahi hain roz o shub aur wahi tishnagi e jaan bhi hai
Nahi hai to bas wo teri qatil nazar, kya kahiye!!

Bhatakete rahe dar ba dar liye qaza e shikwa "Divya"
Bas unko hi hui na kisi tour bhi khabar, kya kahiye!!

!!Divya!!

kay baat hai.....sophi ji....
UNKI TASVEER--LAAL GULAB HAATH MEIN LIYE,
NAZREN JUKAYEN IS ADAA KA_KYA KAHIYE..

MERA TASVEER KO DEKHNA, AUR MERA QATAL HO JAANA,
UNKE IS QATILAANE ANDAAZ KA_KYA KAHIYE..

ROZ SAPNON MEIN AANA,MERI DULHAN BANJAANA,
KABHI HAQEEKAT MEIN NA AANA,MUJHE TADFAANA_KYA KAHIYE..

MERA ROZ UNKI AANKHON MEIN DOOB JAANE KA MAN KARTA HAI,
UNKA,APNE PYAAR KA SAMUNDAR DIKHANA,AUR MUJHE PYAASA CHOD CHALE JAANA_KYA KAHIYE..

BATAKTE RAHE GAYA DAR BA DAR,JAB SE TUJHKO DIL HAI DIYA "DIVYA"
CHAH KAR BHI MUJHKO,TERA YUN HI AAZMAANA_KYA KAHIYE..
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2009, 10:44:03 AM »
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1.      diyaa hai dil agar usko, bashar hai kya kahiye ?
        huwa  raqeeb to ho,  naamaabar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ bashar = man/human being, raqeeb = opponent,
          naamaabar = messenger ]

2.      yeh zid, ki aaj  na aave aur aaye bin  na rahe
        qaza se shikwa hamaiN kis qadar hai kya kahiye ?

        [ qaza = fate/destiny, shikwa = complaint ]

3.      rahe haiN  yoN  gah-o-be_gah  ki koo-e-dost ko ab
        agar na kahiye ki dushman ka ghar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ gah = time, koo-e-dost = friend's/lover's street ]

4.      zah-e-karishma ki yoN  de rakhaa hai  hamko fareb
        ki bin kahe hee unhaiN sab KHabar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ zah = child, karishma = wonder/miracle, fareb = deception ]

5.      samajh ke karte haiN baazaar meiN woh pursish-e-haal
        ki  yeh  kahe  ki  sar-e-rehguzar  hai,  kya  kahiye ?

        [ pursish = enquiry, sar-e-rehguzar = on the road ]

6.      tumhaiN naheeN  hai sar-e-rishtaa-e-wafa  ka KHayaal
        hamaare haath meiN kuchch hai, magar hai kya, kahiye ?

7.      unhaiN sawaal pe zoam-e-junooN hai, kyoN laDiye ?
        hame jawaab  se  qata'a-e-nazar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ zoam = pride, junooN = madness/frenzy,
          qata'a = break/intercept, qata'a-e-nazar = to ignore ]

8.      hasad  sazaa-e-kamaal-e-suKHan hai, kya keeje
        sitam, bahaa-e-mata'a-e-hunar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ hasad = envy/malice, sitam = oppression, bahaa = value/price,
          mata'a = valuables ]

9.      kaha hai kisne ki 'GHalib' buraa naheeN lekin
        siwaay iske  ki aashuftaa_sar  hai kya kahiye ?

        [ aashuftaa_sar = mentally deranged ]


Mirza Ghalib
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2009, 07:56:54 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Divya.. Behad Khubsoorat Gazal Likhi Hai aapne.. Alfaazon ko Jis Khubsoorati se Sajaaya hai aapne.. wo Kaabil-e-Tareef Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2009, 04:24:44 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 09, 2009, 03:41:00 PM
Nasiyat-e-Zindgai mili har Manzil har raah par, Kya kahiye !
Hui mujhse bhi khatayee.N bahoot, Hun bashar Kya kahiye !!

Bolandiyo.N ko choona hai, yea Azam tha Dil mai bahoot,
Miley har qadam pe wo dushman e ghar, kya kahiye !!

Nakaamiyo.n se ye aakhri umeed bhi na toot jaye kahin
Haaye ke in nakhudaao.n ka qeher, kya kahiye!!

Wahi hain roz o shub aur wahi tishnagi e jaan bhi hai
Nahi hai to bas wo teri qatil nazar, kya kahiye!!

Bhatakete rahe dar ba dar liye qaza e shikwa "Divya"
Bas unko hi hui na kisi tour bhi khabar, kya kahiye!!

!!Divya!!







Really Sophi very beautifull ghazal aise hi likhti rahiye daad qubool kare.n apne is khoobsurat kalaam ke liyn
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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2009, 04:28:08 PM »
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Quote from: Funny_Soul on September 10, 2009, 10:44:03 AM
1.      diyaa hai dil agar usko, bashar hai kya kahiye ?
        huwa  raqeeb to ho,  naamaabar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ bashar = man/human being, raqeeb = opponent,
          naamaabar = messenger ]

2.      yeh zid, ki aaj  na aave aur aaye bin  na rahe
        qaza se shikwa hamaiN kis qadar hai kya kahiye ?

        [ qaza = fate/destiny, shikwa = complaint ]

3.      rahe haiN  yoN  gah-o-be_gah  ki koo-e-dost ko ab
        agar na kahiye ki dushman ka ghar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ gah = time, koo-e-dost = friend's/lover's street ]

4.      zah-e-karishma ki yoN  de rakhaa hai  hamko fareb
        ki bin kahe hee unhaiN sab KHabar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ zah = child, karishma = wonder/miracle, fareb = deception ]

5.      samajh ke karte haiN baazaar meiN woh pursish-e-haal
        ki  yeh  kahe  ki  sar-e-rehguzar  hai,  kya  kahiye ?

        [ pursish = enquiry, sar-e-rehguzar = on the road ]

6.      tumhaiN naheeN  hai sar-e-rishtaa-e-wafa  ka KHayaal
        hamaare haath meiN kuchch hai, magar hai kya, kahiye ?

7.      unhaiN sawaal pe zoam-e-junooN hai, kyoN laDiye ?
        hame jawaab  se  qata'a-e-nazar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ zoam = pride, junooN = madness/frenzy,
          qata'a = break/intercept, qata'a-e-nazar = to ignore ]

8.      hasad  sazaa-e-kamaal-e-suKHan hai, kya keeje
        sitam, bahaa-e-mata'a-e-hunar hai, kya kahiye ?

        [ hasad = envy/malice, sitam = oppression, bahaa = value/price,
          mata'a = valuables ]

9.      kaha hai kisne ki 'GHalib' buraa naheeN lekin
        siwaay iske  ki aashuftaa_sar  hai kya kahiye ?

        [ aashuftaa_sar = mentally deranged ]


Mirza Ghalib


wah wah
Ghalib ji ki shayari padkar accha laga
Humaare beech share karne ka shukriya Funny_soul ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2009, 09:00:00 PM »
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SOPHI JI
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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2009, 04:50:07 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 09, 2009, 03:59:11 PM
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Bohot Khoob Divs, definitely one of your best creations  icon_thumleft

Thankyou so so much Talat di.. That for all your Lovely appreciation.. Thank you once again !
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Quote from: Pooja on September 09, 2009, 04:49:01 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah wah bahoot khoob Divya!!! bahoot khoob!!! 

Thank you so much Pooja di.. For all your lovely wordings.. thank you !
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