Kya Zaroori Hai Badan Ki Yoon...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on July 31, 2011, 08:07:53 AM
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meethe alfaaz ki jazbaat pe barish karna
bha gaya dil ko mere uska nawaazish karna

fitrate-husn men shamil hai sitam aashiq par
fitrate-ishq sitam sah ke hai naazish karna

maine jab uski saheli se kaha haNsne lagi
raat ko chhat pe mile, usse guzarish karna

dil to dil hai woh adaaoN pe bhi aa sakta hai
kya zaroori hai badan ki yooN numaaish karna

jisne ummeed ka aaeena kuchal daala ho
usse bekaar hai dil, pyaar ki khwahish karna

main to shayar hooN kiya nazm tujhe maine 'Raqeeb'
"koyee aasaaN naheeH auroN ki sataaish karna"

                              ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2011, 08:36:08 AM »
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bhot alllllllllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2011, 09:30:51 AM »
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chitralsony ji,

Thanks a lot for reply.

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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2011, 09:47:00 AM »
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Satish ji,pyaari ghazal hai...
'Main ne jub usski saheli se kahaa...'
                       ka  jawaab nahii.n .
                                      Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2011, 09:55:34 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Bahut bahut shukriya ghazal padhne, pasand
karne aur jawab dene ke liye.

Jis she'r ka aapne zikr kiya hai kaafee
controversy men raha, kisi ne kah diya
ki cheapness lagti hai, baad men kayee logon
ne ise achchha bataya main khud bhi confuse ho
gaya...any way thanks a lot.

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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2011, 11:59:29 AM »
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bht bht khoob satish ji......
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2011, 12:05:55 PM »
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manzil-e-ishq ji,

bht bht din ke baad aapka comment
padhne ko mila, achchha laga, shukriya..

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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2011, 12:46:48 PM »
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meethe alfaaz ki jazbaat pe barish karna
bha gaya dil ko mere uska nawaazish karna

fitrate-husn men shamil hai sitam aashiq par
fitrate-ishq sitam sah ke hai naazish karna

maine jab uski saheli se kaha haNsne lagi
raat ko chhat pe mile, usse guzarish karna

dil to dil hai woh adaaoN pe bhi aa sakta hai
kya zaroori hai badan ki yooN numaaish karna

jisne ummeed ka aaeena kuchal daala ho
usse bekaar hai dil, pyaar ki khwahish karna

main to shayar hooN kiya nazm tujhe maine 'Raqeeb'
"koyee aasaaN naheeH auroN ki sataaish karna"

                              ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob Satishji

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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2011, 01:08:22 PM »
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khwaish ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..

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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2011, 01:25:49 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on July 31, 2011, 08:07:53 AM


meethe alfaaz ki jazbaat pe barish karna
bha gaya dil ko mere uska nawaazish karna

fitrate-husn men shamil hai sitam aashiq par
fitrate-ishq sitam sah ke hai naazish karna

maine jab uski saheli se kaha haNsne lagi
raat ko chhat pe mile, usse guzarish karna

dil to dil hai woh adaaoN pe bhi aa sakta hai
kya zaroori hai badan ki yooN numaaish karna

jisne ummeed ka aaeena kuchal daala ho
usse bekaar hai dil, pyaar ki khwahish karna

main to shayar hooN kiya nazm tujhe maine 'Raqeeb'
"koyee aasaaN naheeH auroN ki sataaish karna"

                              ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


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bahut khoob. satish ji aap hindi aur english ko ek hi post mein likhein jisse . aapko zyada appreciation milegi. aap ko padhne waale iss tarh divide ho jaate hain
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2011, 03:24:21 PM »
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boht khoob shukla ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2011, 04:19:16 PM »
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Buzrugwaar aadab ,,


apki ghazal nahi balke nagina hai jisko parhke suroor ata hai aur dil se besahakta daad nikalti hai ,,nazron se lab phir lab se zahen phir dil tak raasta taai kiya hai apki is shaandaar o jaandar ghazal ne ,, taham eak jaga khuch uljhan ho rahi hai ,,tu suncha kyun na apse puch lo.N ye sirf o sirf mere ilm me izafa karne ke liye kahe raha hun ap khiyal na kare.N chunke maidane sukhan me banda mubtadi o talib-e-ilm se ziyada khuch nahi ,,,aisi sanglak bhr me aisi rawan ghazal khal khal hi parhne ko milti hai ,,,,bus apke eak sher pe nazar ruk gaai ,,

jisne ummeed ka aaeena kuchal daala ho
usse bekaar hai dil, pyaar ki khwahish karna

Misra-e-saani kya taaqide lafzi ka shikar nahi ,, lafze hai jubke maujooda halat pe dalalat karta nazar aa raha hai ,,lekin na jaane kyun mujhe lag raha hai ke sher ko poora karne me shaair alfazon pe apni giraft barqarar na rakh saka ,,,,,

umid hai ke ap rahenumai farham kar sikhne ka mauqa denge ...


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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2011, 12:07:10 PM »
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Sheba Ji,

Jawab dene kabahut bahut shukriya..

Roman aur Devnagri men ek saath post
karne kee koshish karoonga page zara
bada ho jata hai isliye socha alag
alag hee rahne doon, dekhta hoon...

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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2011, 12:10:38 PM »
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Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya.

Bhavishya men bhi aise hee sneh banaye rahen.

Abhaar,

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