Kyaa patah, suntey-sunaatey hi shafaq ho jaaye?

by abdbundeli on May 05, 2009, 09:15:29 AM
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Qareeb aaou, jigar-o-dil sey bagaawat na karo!
Habeeb aaou, jigar-o-dil sey bagaawat na karo!

Tamaam raastey jaatey hain sanamkhaaney ko;
Sanam key raastoun sey ab to raqaabat na karo!

Yeh wasl-e-khaas hai, aagosh-e-sanam hai haasil;
Hijra kee baat lamhah-e-dour-e-Ibaanat na karo!

Hifaazatoun kei naqaaboun mein rahey ho dahroun:
Ab to kuchh bol do: jazboun kee hifaazat na karo!  

Lafz-dar-lafz keemiyaagaree sawaaloun kee,
Dooriyaan aur badhhaa dey na; salaabat na karo!

Kyaa patah, suntey-sunaatey hi shafaq ho jaaye?
Jakhm-e-pinhaan hai numoodaar: nadaamat na karo!

Chhupaa rakhaa hai kyaa haseen un uyoonoun mein?
Ataa ho deed–e-zeest, ‘abd’, zahaadat na karo!

                                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 09:24:55 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji, Sach Kahoo.n to bahut gehri baatein likhte hai aap, aapki shayri padne ke baad bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  notworthy  notworthy

God bless u

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2009, 11:24:17 AM »
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bahut umda.......bahut khub
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2009, 11:43:45 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 05, 2009, 09:15:29 AM

Qareeb aaou, jigar-o-dil sey bagaawat na karo!
Habeeb aaou, jigar-o-dil sey bagaawat na karo!

Tamaam raastey jaatey hain sanamkhaaney ko;
Sanam key raastoun sey ab to raqaabat na karo!

Yeh wasl-e-khaas hai, aagosh-e-sanam hai haasil;
Hijra kee baat lamhah-e-dour-e-Ibaanat na karo!

Hifaazatoun kei naqaaboun mein rahey ho dahroun:
Ab to kuchh bol do: jazboun kee hifaazat na karo!  

Lafz-dar-lafz keemiyaagaree sawaaloun kee,
Dooriyaan aur badhhaa dey na; salaabat na karo!

Kyaa patah, suntey-sunaatey hi shafaq ho jaaye?
Jakhm-e-pinhaan hai numoodaar: nadaamat na karo!

Chhupaa rakhaa hai kyaa haseen un uyoonoun mein?
Ataa ho deed–e-zeest, ‘abd’, zahaadat na karo!

                                            - abd bundeli


A beautiful creation, like always.... Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2009, 12:06:29 PM »
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subhan allah abd sahab badi hi nayab ghazal likhi hai apne bahoth dinoo baad padne ka sharf hasil howa qaqsar ko bada hi lutf aya janab .. kya hi beshqimti matla dhonda hai janab ..allah apko lambi umr de .. khush raho muskurate raho app !!

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2009, 12:17:48 PM »
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Abd ji bohat khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2009, 02:18:41 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 05, 2009, 09:24:55 AM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji, Sach Kahoo.n to bahut gehri baatein likhte hai aap, aapki shayri padne ke baad bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  notworthy  notworthy
God bless u
 Shally.
Shally ji! Shukriyah a alaawaa aur kyaa kah saktaa hun?
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2009, 02:20:00 PM »
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Quote from: mrigank on May 05, 2009, 11:24:17 AM
bahut umda.......bahut khub
Thanks mrigank ji!
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2009, 02:20:59 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 11:43:45 AM
A beautiful creation, like always.... Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
Shukriyah Celmira bitia!
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2009, 02:24:08 PM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 05, 2009, 12:06:29 PM
subhan allah abd sahab badi hi nayab ghazal likhi hai apne bahoth dinoo baad padne ka sharf hasil howa qaqsar ko bada hi lutf aya janab .. kya hi beshqimti matla dhonda hai janab ..allah apko lambi umr de .. khush raho muskurate raho app !!
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Qadeertoopchi ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah daad aur duaa dono key liye!
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2009, 02:25:49 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 05, 2009, 12:17:48 PM
Abd ji bohat khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks honeyrose  ji! A lot many thanks!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2013, 03:29:12 AM »
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 Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2013, 01:54:32 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 23, 2013, 03:29:12 AM
Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Loads of thanks! Your interest in my works is most welcome!
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2013, 02:00:32 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 05, 2009, 09:15:29 AM

Qareeb aaou, jigar-o-dil sey bagaawat na karo!
Habeeb aaou, jigar-o-dil sey bagaawat na karo!

Tamaam raastey jaatey hain sanamkhaaney ko;
Sanam key raastoun sey ab to raqaabat na karo!

Yeh wasl-e-khaas hai, aagosh-e-sanam hai haasil;
Hijra kee baat lamhah-e-dour-e-Ibaanat na karo!

Hifaazatoun kei naqaaboun mein rahey ho dahroun:
Ab to kuchh bol do: jazboun kee hifaazat na karo! 

Lafz-dar-lafz keemiyaagaree sawaaloun kee,
Dooriyaan aur badhhaa dey na; salaabat na karo!

Kyaa patah, suntey-sunaatey hi shafaq ho jaaye?
Jakhm-e-pinhaan hai numoodaar: nadaamat na karo!

Chhupaa rakhaa hai kyaa haseen un uyoonoun mein?
Ataa ho deed–e-zeest, ‘abd’, zahaadat na karo!

                                            - abd bundeli


Wonderful ghazal abd bundli sb
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2013, 09:30:31 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on April 23, 2013, 02:00:32 PM
Wonderful ghazal abd bundli sb

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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