KyoN bhulaane ki baat karte ho.....MKV

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KyoN bhulaane ki baat karte ho
Tum to din raat mujhpe marte ho

Bheed meN door rahte ho mujhse
Saath chalne se mere darte ho

Waaqiya bhoolta naheeN mujhko
Pyaar se haath jab pakadte ho

YuN na gamgeen ho meree khaatir
Tum meree jaan meN  hi baste ho

Jindgee kee talaash kartaa huN
Meri baahoN me jab simatte ho

Khwaab poore ‘Mukesh’ ke  kar do
Door rahkar ke aaheN bharte ho
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2012, 09:23:27 AM »
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Bahut sunder ghazal kahee hai agar Sheba ke lafzon men kahoon to " main esaa samajhtaa hoon ki ye meree ghazal hui." bas isse ziyaadaa aur taareef kyaa karoon aur haan aaj tum us maqaam par ho jahaan main tumhe dekhnaa chahtaa thaa god bless you keep it up.
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2012, 09:34:12 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2012, 09:35:36 AM »
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KyoN bhulaane ki baat karte ho
Tum to din raat mujhpe marte ho

Bheed meN door rahte ho mujhse
Saath chalne se mere darte ho

Waaqiya bhoolta naheeN mujhko
Pyaar se haath jab pakadte ho

YuN na gamgeen ho meree khaatir
Tum meree jaan meN  hi baste ho

Jindgee kee talaash kartaa huN
Meri baahoN me jab simatte ho

Khwaab poore ‘Mukesh’ ke  kar do
Door rahkar ke aaheN bharte ho


veriiiiiiiiiiii        naaaaaaaaaice -----mkv
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2012, 11:27:07 AM »
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Beautiful , Mukesh ji . Allah  kare  zor e kalaam  
aur  zyaada . Ameen  .  Bahut   mubarak.
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2012, 11:45:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar Mukesh ji.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... !!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2012, 11:49:32 AM »
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waaaah bahut khub mukeshji

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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2012, 04:33:32 PM »
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Bahut sunder ghazal kahee hai agar Sheba ke lafzon men kahoon to " main esaa samajhtaa hoon ki ye meree ghazal hui." bas isse ziyaadaa aur taareef kyaa karoon aur haan aaj tum us maqaam par ho jahaan main tumhe dekhnaa chahtaa thaa god bless you keep it up.
Surendra Sir
Shabda naheeN hain mere paas shukriya kahne ke liye. bahut badee baat kah dee aapne.
Pata nahee mai abhi bhi is laayak hun ya naheen par aapke shabdo ne ek bharosa aur aatmaviswaas jaroor diya hai. shayad mai akela chal chakta hun yaha se girunga to uth bhee jaaunga..
aapka aur hasan sir ka haath sir par hai to darna kya..
Par manjil bahut bahut door hai.
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2012, 04:49:55 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2012, 05:39:35 PM »
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KyoN bhulaane ki baat karte ho
Tum to din raat mujhpe marte ho

Bheed meN door rahte ho mujhse
Saath chalne se mere darte ho

Waaqiya bhoolta naheeN mujhko
Pyaar se haath jab pakadte ho

YuN na gamgeen ho meree khaatir
Tum meree jaan meN  hi baste ho

Jindgee kee talaash kartaa huN
Meri baahoN me jab simatte ho

Khwaab poore ‘Mukesh’ ke  kar do
Door rahkar ke aaheN bharte ho

Bahut bahut khoob Mukesh ji :
Jindagee ki talaas karta,
Meree bahoN me jab simatte ho.

Bahut accha laga khaas taur pe..
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«Reply #10 on: August 06, 2012, 06:04:25 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Mukeshji

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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2012, 06:46:54 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob mkv ji... Usual Smile

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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2012, 03:18:15 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2012, 01:53:02 PM »
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bahut sundar
shukriya nandbahu jee
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veriiiiiiiiiiii        naaaaaaaaaice -----mkv
shukriya Khamosh jee
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