kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe .....

by Bulla Ki Jaana on May 06, 2005, 03:56:10 PM
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ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe

bekhudi ka sabab yaar puchhte hain
ham haal-e-dil sabse chhupaate rahe

har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2005, 04:49:30 PM »
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Quote from: "Bulla Ki Jaana"
ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe

bekhudi ka sabab yaar puchhte hain
ham haal-e-dil sabse chhupaate rahe

har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe
wah...kya khoob likha hai,wonderful.
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2005, 06:32:57 PM »
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Shukriya ..... ye jaan ke achchha laga ki aapko lines pasand aayin.
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2005, 07:16:45 PM »
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ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe

bekhudi ka sabab yaar puchhte hain
ham haal-e-dil sabse chhupaate rahe

har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe


WOW, sooooooooo wonderful......simply amazing
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2005, 01:25:34 AM »
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sayari meri par har bol pehchan hai teri .
dil hai mera par har dhadkan hai teri......
jindgi hai meri , par ab woh amanat hai teri..
Sambhal ke rakh na use warna reh jayegi tu akeli...
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2005, 04:56:13 PM »
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ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe


ye line apne bahut khub likha hai...main abhi new hoon is mehfil me.

arz kiya hai....
                Apana samajh kar hum tumhen chahten rahen,
                ye mera bhram tha....hum maante rahen.
                 Na miloge tum phir bhi manta nahi dil.
                 Mannat tumhen paane ki magate rahen hum.
bye tk care
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2005, 06:22:45 PM »
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Shukriya kismis .... waise main bhi naya hoon aap ki terah is mehfil me .. achha laga ye jaan kar ki aapko kuchh achchha laga ....

Aapki lines badi achhi thin .. off the cuff tha as I feel .. its good ..... I am not good in that so I cant reply in similar fashion .. so I chose to use prose for responding to your beautiful poetry... keep it up. and welcome to The Mehfil.
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2005, 06:30:42 AM »
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ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe

bekhudi ka sabab yaar puchhte hain
ham haal-e-dil sabse chhupaate rahe

har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe



wowwwwwwwwwww bahut khoob bulla ji
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2008, 01:43:09 PM »
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Quote from: Bulla Ki Jaana on May 06, 2005, 03:56:10 PM
ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe

bekhudi ka sabab yaar puchhte hain
ham haal-e-dil sabse chhupaate rahe

har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe


kamaal kia hai aap neh bulla ji.



CHODD KEY GAYE ISS JAHAN MEH
HUM YUHI HAR PAL AAS BANATEY RAHEY

MAJBOORI TOH DEKHO ISS DIL KI
TANHAYI MEH BHI SAPNEY SAJATEY RAHEY

MILEY JOH KHUDA TOH USSEY POOCHEY
KU YEH KHEL AAP KARATEY RAHEY

NA THI MOHABBAT USEY HUMSEY
KU YEH GHARONDA AAP SAJATEY RAHEY



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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2008, 04:57:13 PM »
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Quote from: Bulla Ki Jaana on May 06, 2005, 03:56:10 PM
ab tak ham yehi sochte rahe
kyon ham aapko bulaate rahe

aayenge nahi aap maloom hai magar
saari raat kyon yaad aap aate rahe

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe

bekhudi ka sabab yaar puchhte hain
ham haal-e-dil sabse chhupaate rahe

har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe

wah wah wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob!!kaya kamal ka likha hai apne!!! Thanks Jas, yah thread baher laane ke liye!!

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe


har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2008, 04:57:42 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on November 30, 2008, 01:43:09 PM

kamaal kia hai aap neh bulla ji.



CHODD KEY GAYE ISS JAHAN MEH
HUM YUHI HAR PAL AAS BANATEY RAHEY

MAJBOORI TOH DEKHO ISS DIL KI
TANHAYI MEH BHI SAPNEY SAJATEY RAHEY

MILEY JOH KHUDA TOH USSEY POOCHEY
KU YEH KHEL AAP KARATEY RAHEY

NA THI MOHABBAT USEY HUMSEY
KU YEH GHARONDA AAP SAJATEY RAHEY



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com

bahoot khoob Jas ji!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2008, 05:26:52 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob!!kaya kamal ka likha hai apne!!! Thanks Jas, yah thread baher laane ke liye!!

hamare ashqon me asar raha na baaki
aap gaye aur ham aansoo bahate rahe

dard furqat ne kuchh diya is qadar
tanhaai me din apna beetaate rahe


har aahat pe laga aap aaye hon jaise
har baar yehi soch jharokhe pe aate rahe




Thanks Pooja

wah wah wah. kya baat kahi aap neh pooja, nahi hai aap sa koi dooja.



NAZREY BICHANA MERI MAJBOORI HO GAYI HAI
PYAR MEH ASHQ BAHANA MERI MAJBOORI HO GAYI HAI
SAB KUCH TOH TUMPAR LUTA CHUKEY HAI SANAM
GAMOH SEY RISHTA BANANA MERI MAJBOORI HO GAYI HAI


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«Reply #12 on: December 01, 2008, 05:27:20 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 01, 2008, 04:57:42 PM
bahoot khoob Jas ji!!


tHANKS POOJA


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