Kyun itna sitam dhaate ho.................................Aqsh

by aqsh on December 04, 2012, 10:42:16 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 04, 2012, 12:14:39 PM »
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Wah bahot khoob. Achha kalaam hai.
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«Reply #16 on: December 04, 2012, 12:53:27 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... aapki andaaz-e-bayaani bahut khoob hai....!!!
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«Reply #17 on: December 04, 2012, 01:05:51 PM »
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 nice
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«Reply #18 on: December 04, 2012, 03:11:25 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: December 04, 2012, 06:10:51 PM »
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Bahut bahut daad is khoobsurat ghazal ke liye
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«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2012, 03:34:59 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on December 04, 2012, 12:14:39 PM
Wah bahot khoob. Achha kalaam hai.
thank you so much riyaz ashna jee
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«Reply #21 on: December 05, 2012, 03:35:23 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 04, 2012, 12:53:27 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... aapki andaaz-e-bayaani bahut khoob hai....!!!
thanks hriday jee
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«Reply #22 on: December 05, 2012, 03:35:55 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 04, 2012, 01:05:51 PM
nice
thnx @ livingbytheday
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«Reply #23 on: December 05, 2012, 03:36:21 AM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on December 04, 2012, 03:11:25 PM
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thanks so much kaushal
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«Reply #24 on: December 05, 2012, 03:37:12 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 04, 2012, 06:10:51 PM
Bahut bahut daad is khoobsurat ghazal ke liye
Applause Applause
thank you soooooooooooooooooo much mukesh jee apke comments bahut mayne rakhti hai mere liye
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«Reply #25 on: December 05, 2012, 09:02:28 AM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... behad khoob aur umdaa khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee... Puri kalaam hi qabil e daad
hai... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: December 05, 2012, 09:05:00 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 04, 2012, 10:42:16 AM
KyuN itna sitam, mujhpar dhaate ho
Dilakar yaad apni, khud hi bhool jaate ho

Toot jaate hai hum, andar hi andar
Jab kisi aur ko dekhkar, muskuraate ho

Kaun hai woh shaks, jiske chehre par
Apni zulphoN ka saaya, bikhraate ho

Raat guzarne tak, neendh nahiN aati
Kiski tasveer, seene se lagaate ho

Samet lo mujhe, kahiN bikhar na jaooN mai
Bas ek baar keh do, tum bhi yaad aate ho

Ati sundar dear
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«Reply #27 on: December 05, 2012, 09:57:04 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #28 on: December 05, 2012, 10:16:41 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 05, 2012, 09:02:28 AM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... behad khoob aur umdaa khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe jee... Puri kalaam hi qabil e daad
hai... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
thank you so much parwaaz jee
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«Reply #29 on: December 05, 2012, 10:17:22 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on December 05, 2012, 09:05:00 AM
Ati sundar dear
thnx suman jee
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