kyuN na khoo_Ne jigar ke

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Haazreen e mehfil ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Zindagi ab bikhar na jaauN meiN
had se apni guzar na jaauN meiN

roz ik aaina dikhaate ho
daikh lo tum, saNwar na jaauN mein

tar_ke tal_luq bhi ik samandar hai
sochta huN, utar na jaauN meiN

roz ka aana jaana mushkil hai
dil mai tere, thehr na jaauN meiN

teri saaNseiN hayaat hai meri
jhoot boluN to, mar na jaauN meiN

kyuN na khoo_Ne jigar ke bhi aslam
pee ke aansu, nikhr na jaauN meiN




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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2010, 11:57:31 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 12, 2010, 10:25:31 PM
Haazreen e mehfil ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Zindagi ab bikhar na jaauN meiN
had se apni guzar na jaauN meiN

roz ik aaina dikhaate ho
daikh lo tum, saNwar na jaauN mein

tar_ke tal_luq bhi ik samandar hai
sochta huN, utar na jaauN meiN

roz ka aana jaana mushkil hai
dil mai tere, thehr na jaauN meiN

teri saaNseiN hayaat hai meri
jhoot boluN to, mar na jaauN meiN

kyuN na khoo_Ne jigar ke bhi aslam
pee ke aansu, nikhr na jaauN meiN

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Aap ko yaha dekha toh laga........humko iss ghar me jantaa hai koi....

Very Impressive ....Aslam Bhai !
Very touching ....

very Nice creation....

tahe dil daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayeN...
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«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2010, 04:36:01 AM »
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  Very nice one Aslam ji. hello2 hello2
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«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2010, 06:39:09 AM »
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ASLAM JI KITNA SADA AUR MASOOMIYAT BHARA DIL KO CHOO LENE WALA GALIBANA ANDAZ.........BAHUT HI UMDA...AAP KI AGALI TAKHLEEQ KI MUNTAZIR....

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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2010, 08:27:08 AM »
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Aap jaise shayaron ki taarif karne ke liye humein sabse pehle taarif karna sikhna padega. Aap itna achcha likhte hain ki humein sochna pad jaata hai ki kin shabdon me apki taarif karein. Har tarif kam lagti hai. Dhang se taarif bhi nahi kar paate hum. Aap itna achcha likhte hain ki uska ek pratishat bhi hum agar taarif kar paate to lagta ki han kuch kiya. Manna padega aapko.. kya khoob likhte hain sarkaar. Bahut hi umda. Aapka likha padhne ke baad bas aapka likha hi gungunaate rehte hain aisa asar hota hai humpe aapki lekhni ka. Bahut khoob Aslam ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2010, 09:36:10 AM »
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TERI YE GAZAL HAI BADI HI PYARI
ISE KYUN NA AAJ SAARI RAAT GUNGUNAUN MAIN

TERI LEKHNI KA JAADU HAI KUCH AISA
SIDHE SAADHE ANDAZ PE KYUN NA WAARI JAUN MAIN

AJEEB SI KASHISH HAI TERE SHABDON ME ASLAM JI
INHE BAR BAR PADHKE MANTRA MUGDH SI HO JAUN MAIN.......

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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2010, 05:41:24 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on July 12, 2010, 11:57:31 PM
Aap ko yaha dekha toh laga........humko iss ghar me jantaa hai koi....

Very Impressive ....Aslam Bhai !
Very touching ....

very Nice creation....

tahe dil daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayeN...


Naresh sahab sabse pehle to aapka is bazm mai khairmaqdam hai umeed hai aapka wqt yahan bhut acha guzrega, ghazal ki pazeeraii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN, yuN hi hosala badhaate rahiye bhut bhut shukriya, umeed hai aapke kalaam se hum sab log jald se jald mustafeed honge



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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2010, 05:42:13 AM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on July 13, 2010, 04:36:01 AM
  Very nice one Aslam ji. hello2 hello2


Bhut bhut shukriya Tamanna jii yuN hi hosala badhaati rahiyeg



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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2010, 05:43:59 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 13, 2010, 06:39:09 AM
ASLAM JI KITNA SADA AUR MASOOMIYAT BHARA DIL KO CHOO LENE WALA GALIBANA ANDAZ.........BAHUT HI UMDA...AAP KI AGALI TAKHLEEQ KI MUNTAZIR....

MAMTA


Mamta jii adna si ghazal ki pazeeraii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN, inshallah jald hi khoshish karunga ki kuch likh sakuN bhut shukriya


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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2010, 05:47:02 AM »
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Aap jaise shayaron ki taarif karne ke liye humein sabse pehle taarif karna sikhna padega. Aap itna achcha likhte hain ki humein sochna pad jaata hai ki kin shabdon me apki taarif karein. Har tarif kam lagti hai. Dhang se taarif bhi nahi kar paate hum. Aap itna achcha likhte hain ki uska ek pratishat bhi hum agar taarif kar paate to lagta ki han kuch kiya. Manna padega aapko.. kya khoob likhte hain sarkaar. Bahut hi umda. Aapka likha padhne ke baad bas aapka likha hi gungunaate rehte hain aisa asar hota hai humpe aapki lekhni ka. Bahut khoob Aslam ji...!!!


Hariday sahab kin alfaazoN mai aapka shukriya ada karuN samjh nahi aata, ye sirf aapki mohabbat hai jo aap is tarhN aur is nazariye se meri adna tehreeroN ko daikhte haiN, warana aisa kuch khaas nahi hai aapka bhut aur bhut shukriya is pazeeraii ke liyN apni mohabbat aur dua se yuN hi nawaazte rahiye bhut inaayat


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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2011, 12:47:24 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 12, 2010, 10:25:31 PM
Haazreen e mehfil ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Zindagi ab bikhar na jaauN meiN
had se apni guzar na jaauN meiN

roz ik aaina dikhaate ho
daikh lo tum, saNwar na jaauN mein

tar_ke tal_luq bhi ik samandar hai
sochta huN, utar na jaauN meiN

roz ka aana jaana mushkil hai
dil mai tere, thehr na jaauN meiN

teri saaNseiN hayaat hai meri
jhoot boluN to, mar na jaauN meiN

kyuN na khoo_Ne jigar ke bhi aslam
pee ke aansu, nikhr na jaauN meiN




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bahut khub aslam sahab
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2011, 08:42:42 AM »
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Janab Aslam Saheb! AOA!
Bahut dinon baad aik zabardast kaawish ko paRhne ka mauqa dastiyaab hua. Idhar kaafi arse se zaati masroofiyat ke ba-ec yoindia par nahin aa paa raha hooN ya yuN kaheN k kahin bhi nahin ja paa raha hooN. Aaj aapke is sahrangez ghazal ne rooh tak taazgi bakhsh di. Sar se paa tak aik munfarid aur mukammal ghazal se nawaaz diya hai aapne aur ye kahne mein mujhe koi harz nahin k bahut dinon baad yoindia par is tarah ki me-aari ghazal se rubaru hua. Aisi naayaab ghazal k liye dil ki gahraaiyoN ke saath mubarakbad aur daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: aaina on July 12, 2010, 10:25:31 PM
Haazreen e mehfil ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Zindagi ab bikhar na jaauN meiN
had se apni guzar na jaauN meiN

roz ik aaina dikhaate ho
daikh lo tum, saNwar na jaauN mein

tar_ke tal_luq bhi ik samandar hai
sochta huN, utar na jaauN meiN

roz ka aana jaana mushkil hai
dil mai tere, thehr na jaauN meiN

teri saaNseiN hayaat hai meri
jhoot boluN to, mar na jaauN meiN

kyuN na khoo_Ne jigar ke bhi aslam
pee ke aansu, nikhr na jaauN meiN




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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2011, 08:47:08 AM »
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Wah Bohat Umda Aslam Sahab
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«Reply #13 on: April 20, 2011, 12:51:48 PM »
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Aapki ghazal bahut khubsurat hai aaina ji.....
Bah'r ka aisa khayal kam hi ghazalo me milta hai.....
keep it up:)
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2011, 09:17:35 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 12, 2010, 10:25:31 PM
Haazreen e mehfil ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


Zindagi ab bikhar na jaauN meiN
had se apni guzar na jaauN meiN

roz ik aaina dikhaate ho
daikh lo tum, saNwar na jaauN mein

tar_ke tal_luq bhi ik samandar hai
sochta huN, utar na jaauN meiN

roz ka aana jaana mushkil hai
dil mai tere, thehr na jaauN meiN

teri saaNseiN hayaat hai meri
jhoot boluN to, mar na jaauN meiN

kyuN na khoo_Ne jigar ke bhi aslam
pee ke aansu, nikhr na jaauN meiN




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