kyun shahron me aakar.....

by yati_om on August 27, 2009, 11:29:50 AM
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क्यूँ शहरों में आकर ऐसा लगता है.
जीवन का रस सूखा-सूखा लगता है.

मानें   तो सबके ही रिश्ते  हैं सबसे,
वर्ना किसका कौन यहाँ क्या लगता है?

जीवन का अंजाम नज़र में रख लें तो ,
सब कुछ जैसे एक तमाशा लगता है .

गाँव छोड़कर शहरों में जब आए तो,
हमको अपना नाम पुराना लगता है.

बारूदी ताक़त है जिसके हाथों में,
उसको ये संसार ज़रा सा लगता है.

        ओमप्रकाश यती
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2009, 11:39:08 AM »
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bahut khub yati ji
bahut accha likha hai Giggle
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2009, 12:39:28 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Omprakash Ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2009, 01:53:58 PM »
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 Applause Applause
Bahut acche Omprakash ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2009, 04:21:00 PM »
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pratikriya ke liye dhanyavad...
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2009, 04:21:44 PM »
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Waah Waah Om ji.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob ! keep writing....
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2009, 08:22:36 PM »
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bahut khoob...bilkul sahi kaha yati ji..aaj har jagah bus yahi sama hai..duniya  ki bheed mein khud ko dhundhna bahut mushkil hai...
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2009, 09:25:36 PM »
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Bohot khoob Omprakash ji.. likhte rahiye or hosake to isi tarah hindi main pesh karte rahiye, bohot achha lagta hai...
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2009, 09:43:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob OM ji beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2009, 06:16:57 PM »
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Quote from: yati_om on August 27, 2009, 11:29:50 AM
क्यूँ शहरों में आकर ऐसा लगता है.
जीवन का रस सूखा-सूखा लगता है.

मानें   तो सबके ही रिश्ते  हैं सबसे,
वर्ना किसका कौन यहाँ क्या लगता है?

जीवन का अंजाम नज़र में रख लें तो ,
सब कुछ जैसे एक तमाशा लगता है .

गाँव छोड़कर शहरों में जब आए तो,
हमको अपना नाम पुराना लगता है.

बारूदी ताक़त है जिसके हाथों में,
उसको ये संसार ज़रा सा लगता है.

        ओमप्रकाश यती

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  bahoot bahoot bahoot khoobsurat Yati OM JI....

bahoot sahi kaha hai apne....


मानें   तो सबके ही रिश्ते  हैं सबसे,
वर्ना किसका कौन यहाँ क्या लगता है?

apki yah do line per man mai kuch aa raha hai likhne ja rahi hu.. iska shehar ya village se koi naata nahi hai... sirf insaan ka insaan ke sath ka naata hai...

Dil se banaye, dil se bigared diye
kuch rishte humne is kadar bhi gawa diye

Manna jinko behad apna, yah to unke dil ki baat thi
humne apne dil ke bharam main, saalo saal beeta diye

maane to sab rishte apne hai, na maane to koi kuch nahi
her baar toote dil ne, jeevan ke yah niyam samjha diye
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2009, 08:22:10 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 04, 2009, 06:16:57 PM
Dil se banaye, dil se bigared diye
kuch rishte humne is kadar bhi gawa diye

Manna jinko behad apna, yah to unke dil ki baat thi
humne apne dil ke bharam main, saalo saal beeta diye

maane to sab rishte apne hai, na maane to koi kuch nahi
her baar toote dil ne, jeevan ke yah niyam samjha diye

Achhi, sachhi, sundar, sajeeli or asardaar baat kahi pooja ji.. bohot achhe..
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2009, 08:24:17 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 04, 2009, 08:22:10 PM
Achhi, sachhi, sundar, sajeeli or asardaar baat kahi pooja ji.. bohot achhe..

Tahe dil se shukaria Sayyid ji!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 05, 2009, 05:28:42 AM »
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Quote from: yati_om on August 27, 2009, 11:29:50 AM
क्यूँ शहरों में आकर ऐसा लगता है.
जीवन का रस सूखा-सूखा लगता है.

मानें   तो सबके ही रिश्ते  हैं सबसे,
वर्ना किसका कौन यहाँ क्या लगता है?

जीवन का अंजाम नज़र में रख लें तो ,
सब कुछ जैसे एक तमाशा लगता है .

गाँव छोड़कर शहरों में जब आए तो,
हमको अपना नाम पुराना लगता है.

बारूदी ताक़त है जिसके हाथों में,
उसको ये संसार ज़रा सा लगता है.

        ओमप्रकाश यती

Bahut bahut Khoob Oprakashji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Aur bahut Ache Pooja..Bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2009, 09:21:33 AM »
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pooja ji,
         dhayavaad.maanne to sabke hi .....ye baat shahar ke liye likhi hi nahi gayi hai.shahar ki baat pehle sher (matla) me aayee hai.dono sher alag-alag hain.pratikriya jaankar achchha laga.
                  'yati.'
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