Laayiye tashreef, ghar hai aapkaa, aajaayiye!

by abdbundeli on January 18, 2009, 05:50:23 AM
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Laayiye tashreef, ghar hai aapkaa, aajaayiye!
Takalluf mat keejiye, kyaa hukm hai farmaayiye!!

Aapkey hain ham; hamaarey hon, na hon, bandahnawaaz!
Azal sey hain muntazir deed-e-sanam ko: aayiye!!

Khalaa mein nazareyn tikeen hain aapki, maaluum hai!
Koun kahtaa hai ki aap buland nazar jhukaayiye?

Aap rahtey hain bahut nazdeek; hamko hai patah!
Sirf nazdeekee dikhaa kar, aur mat bahlaayiye!!

Ham tarastey hain musalsal, eik hi muskaan ko;
Tazammun* kar rishtah-e-katm-e-adam, muskaayiye!

Khouf khaataa hoon bahut taareekiyoun sey muhtajib**!
Mukammal pahichaan ho jaaye, hijaab hataayiye!!

Qaafilah taiyaar hai, kab chal parheygaa, kyaa patah?
Aakhiree hai waqt-e-ulfat, ab to mat sharmaayiye!

Beywajah khaamosh hain kyoun? Wajah hai to boliye!
Kuchh kamee hai? Kyaa gilaa hai? Ab to hamain bataayiye?

Khaar hi hain gulaaboun key baag mein; gunchey naheen!
Ab to, raham dikhaayiye: bas phool eik khilaayiye!!

Aap ki aawaaz sun ney ko ‘abd’ beychain hai;
Ham na kholeyngey jubaan, roodaad-e-jigar# sunaayiye!!

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   #  Description /narration of inner feelings

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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2009, 09:24:51 AM »
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Abd Ji,

Very well written as always!!

Kya khoobsurat Peshkash hai Applause Applause

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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2009, 09:28:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 18, 2009, 05:50:23 AM
Laayiye tashreef, ghar hai aapkaa, aajaayiye!
Takalluf mat keejiye, kyaa hukm hai farmaayiye!!

Aapkey hain ham; hamaarey hon, na hon, bandahnawaaz!
Azal sey hain muntazir deed-e-sanam ko: aayiye!!

Khalaa mein nazareyn tikeen hain aapki, maaluum hai!
Koun kahtaa hai ki aap buland nazar jhukaayiye?

Aap rahtey hain bahut nazdeek; hamko hai patah!
Sirf nazdeekee dikhaa kar, aur mat bahlaayiye!!

Ham tarastey hain musalsal, eik hi muskaan ko;
Tazammun* kar rishtah-e-katm-e-adam, muskaayiye!

Khouf khaataa hoon bahut taareekiyoun sey muhtajib**!
Mukammal pahichaan ho jaaye, hijaab hataayiye!!

Qaafilah taiyaar hai, kab chal parheygaa, kyaa patah?
Aakhiree hai waqt-e-ulfat, ab to mat sharmaayiye!

Beywajah khaamosh hain kyoun? Wajah hai to boliye!
Kuchh kamee hai? Kyaa gilaa hai? Ab to hamain bataayiye?

Khaar hi hain gulaaboun key baag mein; gunchey naheen!
Ab to, raham dikhaayiye: bas phool eik khilaayiye!!

Aap ki aawaaz sun ney ko ‘abd’ beychain hai;
Ham na kholeyngey jubaan, roodaad-e-jigar# sunaayiye!!

   *  Accept
   ** Secret
   #  Discription of inner feelings

                             - abd bundeli


Bahoth Hi Umda Aur Lajawab Peshkash Abd Ji Maza Agaya !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2009, 11:11:35 AM »
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abdji....har bar ki tarha,aap bahut hi sunder aur hatke likh te ho,
aap ka koi jawaab nahin,

laayiye tashreef,ghar hai aapkaa,aajaayiye,
fir lautne ka naam na lijeeye,mere dil mein samaa jaayiye.
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2009, 11:12:28 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2009, 12:18:36 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on January 18, 2009, 09:24:51 AM
Abd Ji,
Very well written as always!!
Kya khoobsurat Peshkash hai Applause Applause

Keep it up Thumbs UP


Deepati
Thanks a lot, Deepati ji, for your kind comments!
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2009, 12:24:28 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 18, 2009, 09:28:11 AM
Bahoth Hi Umda Aur Lajawab Peshkash Abd Ji Maza Agaya !!
Qadeer Toopchi
Quote from: Pooja on January 18, 2009, 11:12:28 AM
bahoot khoob Abd ji
Thanks a lot abdulqadeer ji/Pooja ji! I'm happy know that you took all the trouble to read it; and, also liked it!
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2009, 12:39:41 PM »
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Quote from: cara on January 18, 2009, 11:11:35 AM
abdji....har bar ki tarha,aap bahut hi sunder aur hatke likh te ho,
aap ka koi jawaab nahin,

laayiye tashreef,ghar hai aapkaa,aajaayiye,
fir lautne ka naam na lijeeye,mere dil mein samaa jaayiye.

Thanks cara ji! Wah aapki dono laineyn dilkash hain!

Ham bhi jaatey hain waheen,ho jagah jahaan dil mein!
Woh miley ghar mein, ki sahrey mein, yaaki, mahfil mein!!
Waqaar-o-jazbah eik saath jahaan hon moujood;
Reig hi reig na ho, tel ho jahaan til mein!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2009, 04:56:58 PM »
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Nice One Abd Ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2009, 04:31:58 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 18, 2009, 04:56:58 PM
Nice One Abd Ji
Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2009, 04:23:07 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 18, 2009, 12:18:36 PM
Thanks a lot, Deepati ji, for your kind comments!
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Abd Ji, You are most welcome!
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