Ladengi Meri Tanha-e-yan ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeertoopchii on July 02, 2009, 06:58:38 AM
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Uski baten na karo mujhe bhool jane do !!
Raath bahoth gaheri ho ga-e- ab soo jane do !!
Na karo humdardi mere ashiyane se dustoo !!
Aag maine khud laga-e- hai jal jane do !!

Mujhe maarna hi samandaron ki khuesh hai agar !!
To chin lo fatwaar mujhe doob jane do !!

Na mai tootonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Karne do sitam usse had se guzar jane do !!

Ladengi fir meri tanha-e-yan uski yadon se !!
Hone do shaam zara suraj ko dhal jane do !!

Na-a- zakham deni ki quesh rakhte ho agar !!
Mat khuredo maazi ke zakhmoo ko bhar jane do !!

Tumhari har khushi se unhe  nafrath hai "Qadeer"
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bikhar jane do !!


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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 08:18:54 AM »
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Uski baten na karo mujhe bhool jane do !!
Raath bahoth gaheri ho ga-e- ab soo jane do !!
Na karo humdardi mere ashiyane se dustoo !!
Aag maine khud laga-e- hai jal jane do !!

Mujhe maarna hi samandaron ki khuesh hai agar !!
To chin lo fatwaar mujhe doob jane do !!

Na mai tootonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Karne do sitam usse had se guzar jane do !!

Ladengi fir meri tanha-e-yan uski yadon se !!
Hone do shaam zara suraj ko dhal jane do !!

Na-a- zakham deni ki quesh rakhte ho agar !!
Mat khuredo maazi ke zakhmoo ko bhar jane do !!

Tumhari har khushi se unhe  nafrath hai "Qadeer"
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bikhar jane do !!


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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 08:35:09 AM »
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Wah wah Qadeer ji,very beautiful creation. Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2009, 02:22:56 PM »
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Waah waah Subhan Allah, Kya KHoob Kaha Hai, Qadeer Bhai, Behad Achche,.
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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2009, 07:34:15 AM »
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bahoth bahoth sukriya mere bhai ke apne apna waqath diya .. aur pasand farmaya .. allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2009, 12:51:17 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2009, 04:29:47 PM »
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Maashallah bahot khoob likhte hain aap. Zyaada padhne ko jee chahta hai. Likhte rahiyea.
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2009, 07:11:33 PM »
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Quote from: asma zehra on July 05, 2009, 04:29:47 PM
Maashallah bahot khoob likhte hain aap. Zyaada padhne ko jee chahta hai. Likhte rahiyea.

ye kya kahe rahi ho asma saheba .. likhna to koi app se sikhe janab ..apki nazron ka karam hai baaqi khuch bhi to nahi qaqsar ki qalam me !!hausla afza-e-ka shukriya aur inshallah koshish rahegi ke apki nazar khuch karon .. filhal KSA me muqeem hon waqath ijazath hi nahi deta !! tamam musrofiyath ke baujood khuch waqath ander ke fun ko aur fankaar ko zinda rakhne ke liye nikal leta hon .. ap jaison ki dad mil jaye to himmath badne lagti hai ..shukriya janab ..allah apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2009, 10:59:53 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Qadeer Bhai
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2009, 12:35:35 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 07, 2009, 10:59:53 AM
Bohot Khoob Qadeer Bhai


Shukar guzar hon talat bahen apka jo apne pasand farmaya .. aur waqath diya allah khush rakhe apko !!

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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2009, 02:08:07 PM »
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Wow Bahut khoob Qadeer bhaiya  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: July 07, 2009, 02:59:57 PM »
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Wow Bahut khoob Qadeer bhaiya  Thumbs UP

shukriya bahen apne pasand farmaya .. kahan ho roja bahen bahot din baad nazar aye .. thik to hai sub ..

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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2009, 11:32:23 AM »
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Qadeer sahab, Adaab... ik abhut hi umda peshkesh hai aapki ... yaqeen mano ik ik alfaaz rooh ko chuu gya. 'teh dil se daad kabool kijiye!


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wah Qadeer Ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2009, 12:06:14 PM »
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Sunder kalaam hai aapka....kabile tariff... Applause Applause

Magar jara samjhaiye beech aur aakhir ki lines mai virodhabhas mesoos hota hai kyon?

"Na mai tootonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Tumhari har khushi se unhe  nafrath hai "Qadeer"
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bikhar jane do !!"


 
Quote from: qadeertoopchii on July 02, 2009, 06:58:38 AM
Uski baten na karo mujhe bhool jane do !!
Raath bahoth gaheri ho ga-e- ab soo jane do !!
Na karo humdardi mere ashiyane se dustoo !!
Aag maine khud laga-e- hai jal jane do !!

Mujhe maarna hi samandaron ki khuesh hai agar !!
To chin lo fatwaar mujhe doob jane do !!

Na mai tootonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Karne do sitam usse had se guzar jane do !!

Ladengi fir meri tanha-e-yan uski yadon se !!
Hone do shaam zara suraj ko dhal jane do !!

Na-a- zakham deni ki quesh rakhte ho agar !!
Mat khuredo maazi ke zakhmoo ko bhar jane do !!

Tumhari har khushi se unhe  nafrath hai "Qadeer"
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bikhar jane do !!


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