Ladengi Meri Tanha-e-yan ( Qadeertoopchi ) -Panna 2:Ghazals

qadeer toopchi

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«Reply #15 on: July 20, 2009, 04:41:24 PM »

Quote from: HumTum on July 14, 2009, 11:32:23 AM

Qadeer sahab, Adaab... ik abhut hi umda peshkesh hai aapki ... yaqeen mano ik ik alfaaz rooh ko chuu gya. 'teh dil se daad kabool kijiye!

HumTum

nawazish karam janab a mann humtum sahab , apki pakiza nazron ka karam hai janab warna to qaqsar ki khuch bisath hi nahi .. shukar guzar hon apka jo apne pasand farmaya aur hausla afza-e- ki .. allah apko khush rakhe !!

Qadeertoopchi


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qadeer toopchi

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Re: Ladengi Meri Tanha-e-yan ( Qadeertoopchi )

«Reply #16 on: July 20, 2009, 04:45:33 PM »

Quote from: smardia on July 14, 2009, 12:06:14 PM

Sunder kalaam hai aapka....kabile tariff... Applause

Magar jara samjhaiye beech aur aakhir ki lines mai virodhabhas mesoos hota hai kyon?

"Na mai tootonga kabhi na mere hausle !!
Tumhari har khushi se unhe nafrath hai "Qadeer"
Apne armanoo ko toot ke bikhar jane do !!"

samrida sahib Adaab !!

mumno hon apka jo apne pasand farmaya .. aur miyari nazar se barikiyun per gaur farmaya .. waise mai yoindia se bann hon agar apko ghazal per islaah karna ya fir tanqid karna hai to ap qaqsar ko mail karsakti hain issi bahane gupshap bhi ho jayegi ..qair allah apko khush rakhe !! email - abdulqadeer.toopchi@gmail.com

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qadeer toopchi

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Re: Ladengi Meri Tanha-e-yan ( Qadeertoopchi )

«Reply #17 on: July 20, 2009, 04:48:13 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 14, 2009, 11:40:53 AM

wah Qadeer Ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

jasbir singh

shukriya bhaijaan ki hal hai tussi pa ji .. o kethe yaar tussi nazar nai aunde !! chalo ji rub rakhan tussi !! he he he kaisi rahi meri tooti phooti panjabi !!

thuda bhai !!

qadeer


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Ladengi Meri Tanha-e-yan ( Qadeertoopchi )

«Reply #18 on: July 20, 2009, 05:02:32 PM »

Quote from: qadeer toopchi on July 20, 2009, 04:48:13 PM

shukriya bhaijaan ki hal hai tussi pa ji .. o kethe yaar tussi nazar nai aunde !! chalo ji rub rakhan tussi !! he he he kaisi rahi meri tooti phooti panjabi !!

thuda bhai !!

qadeer

qadeer Ji, bhasha chahey koyi bhi ho ...

hum toh dil ki awaaz sun key dodey chaley aatey hai
dostoh key liye, hum khudd koh mita jatey hai

GOD BLESS YOU DEAR FRIEND ....

Jasbir Singh


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nazar ghouri

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Re: Ladengi Meri Tanha-e-yan ( Qadeertoopchi )

«Reply #19 on: May 18, 2010, 03:02:35 PM »

Na karo humdardi mere ashiyane se dustoo !!
Aag maine khud laga-e- hai jal jane do !!(kya khoob likha janab...)

Mujhe maarna hi samandaron ki khuesh hai agar !
To chin lo fatwaar mujhe doob jane do !!(dil aur zahen ko nichord dene wala shair kaha hai..bahot khoob)

ladengi fir meri tanha-e-yan uski yadon se !!
Hone do shaam zara suraj ko dhal jane do (haqiqat ko kitne saleeqe se lafzaaon main dhala hai...iss shair ne meri dairy ki ronaq badha di.)


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