Ladki nahi wo to bilkul pari hai.......................................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on September 17, 2012, 08:23:44 PM
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Lehra   ke  aaNchal   wo  chat pe khadi hai
Hua  sab   haseenoN    ko  rashk-e-pari hai

AankheiN    qayamat,    zulfeiN    ghata   si
Ladki   nahiN    wo    to   bilkul    pari    hai

HaiN mujh pe  lagiN  uski nazreiN  musalsal
Legi  meri   jaaN    wo   zidd   pe   adi   hai

Gayi   loot    ke    dil   le   jaaye   jaaN   bhi
Mujhe  kaun  si   apni   jaaN   ki   padi  hai

Maze   ishq    ke    le    lo     aye   ‘Iftakhar’
Magar   dil  lagaane    ki    aadat   buri  hai




Rashk-e-pari hona: Pari jaisa banne ki khwahish jagna
Musalsal: lagataar
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2012, 08:33:49 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 17, 2012, 08:23:44 PM
Lehra   ke  aaNchal   wo  chat pe khadi hai
Hua  sab   haseenoN    ko  rashk-e-pari hai

AankheiN    qayamat,    zulfeiN    ghata   si
Ladki   nahiN    wo    to   bilkul    pari    hai

HaiN mujh pe  lagiN  uski nazreiN  musalsal
Legi  meri   jaaN    wo   zidd   pe   adi   hai

Gayi   loot    ke    dil   le   jaaye   jaaN   bhi
Mujhe  kaun  si   apni   jaaN   ki   padi  hai

Maze   ishq    ke    le    lo     aye   ‘Iftakhar’
Magar   dil  lagaane    ki    aadat   buri  hai




Rashk-e-pari hona: Pari jaisa banne ki khwahish jagna
Musalsal: lagataar
khub

baat bahut purani mager bahut khari* hai
gadhi bhi pyaar mei.n lagti bus pari hai




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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2012, 08:36:36 PM »
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Are manoj bhai, maiN aapka matlab samjha nahi. Aapke she'r meiN "gadhi" ka kya matlab hai. Kya iss se aapka matlab man gadhi hai?Huh?Huh???

Waise ghazal padhne ke liye shukriya.
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2012, 08:42:14 PM »
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Are manoj bhai, maiN aapka matlab samjha nahi. Aapke she'r meiN "gadhi" ka kya matlab hai. Kya iss se aapka matlab man gadhi hai?Huh?Huh???

Waise ghazal padhne ke liye shukriya.
aapki rachna kabile tarriff hai,
meine apne sher mei bus itna he kahna chaha hai ke jab kisi pe dil aata hai to larki chahe kaali ho, gori ho ya badsurat,ya baddimaag,etc,uska aashiq bus use pari he maanta hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2012, 08:43:00 PM »
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acchi shayeri karte hai aap
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2012, 09:06:28 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Manoj bhai. Aur aapki baat bilkul sahi hai. Khush-o-aabaad rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2012, 09:07:40 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on September 17, 2012, 08:42:14 PM
aapki rachna kabile tarriff hai,
meine apne sher mei bus itna he kahna chaha hai ke jab kisi pe dil aata hai to larki chahe kaali ho, gori ho ya badsurat,ya baddimaag,etc,uska aashiq bus use pari he maanta hai
Aapka kahiN ye to matlab nahi ke meri lover badsurat aur bad dimagh hai?Huh?
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«Reply #7 on: September 17, 2012, 10:40:12 PM »
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ek achchhee ghazal par dher saaree badhai....Dillagee karnaa Manoj jee kee puraanee aadat hai......inkaa matlab ek puraanee kahaawat se hai 'dil lagaa gadhi se to pari kyaa cheez hai'.....aur ye mahaj ek tukbandi kee gayee hai......dil par naa leN....khush raheN....
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2012, 02:17:37 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 17, 2012, 08:23:44 PM
Lehra   ke  aaNchal   wo  chat pe khadi hai
Hua  sab   haseenoN    ko  rashk-e-pari hai

AankheiN    qayamat,    zulfeiN    ghata   si
Ladki   nahiN    wo    to   bilkul    pari    hai

HaiN mujh pe  lagiN  uski nazreiN  musalsal
Legi  meri   jaaN    wo   zidd   pe   adi   hai

Gayi   loot    ke    dil   le   jaaye   jaaN   bhi
Mujhe  kaun  si   apni   jaaN   ki   padi  hai

Maze   ishq    ke    le    lo     aye   ‘Iftakhar’
Magar   dil  lagaane    ki    aadat   buri  hai




Rashk-e-pari hona: Pari jaisa banne ki khwahish jagna
Musalsal: lagataar

Waaah bahut khoob likha hai iftakhar sb. bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2012, 03:15:39 AM »
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bohut khoob ahmed bhai umda ghazal hai, mubarakbad qubool karen..   Clapping Smiley   Usual Smile  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 18, 2012, 03:19:08 AM »
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waah hasan sir bohut khub
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«Reply #11 on: September 18, 2012, 03:41:45 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2012, 04:06:21 AM »
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Hai mujhpe lagi uski nazre musalsal
Legi meri jaan wo zidd pe adi hai...

wah wah wah iftakhar bhai.. bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2012, 04:16:19 AM »
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Bahut badhiya bahut khub ahmad sir
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v v nice...
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