LAUT AA SAAHIL KISSII BAHAaNE SE

by salil2002 on August 05, 2009, 02:12:42 PM
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bahut khamosh hai mehfil yoon tere jaane se
aa laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se

saaqee bahut gumsum hai,kucch kehti nahin
nikal kar khat padti hai apne sirhaane se

doston ka bhi haal yeh hai kii jaam chhoote nahin
kehte hain chhalak jaati har baar paimaane se

har shaam hum peete hai dost,beinteha peete hai
tere dushmann nahin aate baaz muskuraane se

kab tak sajegi yeh viraan mehfil tere bin
ab laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se

aa laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se.......!!!!!!

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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2009, 04:47:09 PM »
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Welcome back Winking

Waah kya khoob Likha hai Saahil.. bahoot Khoob..

Aana hi padega Saahil Tume yahan Kisi Bahane se
Yea Rista hai hai hi aisa , Na tute kabhi anjane se

Intzaar mea Dost tere hai ki tu kab mud kar dekhega fir
Pyaar aur dosti ka rista yuhun nahi chuttha , bulaane se
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2009, 05:10:07 PM »
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wah Kya baat hai Salil Bhai.. Bahut Hi Umda Gazal Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon Ka Chunaaw Bahut hi Lajawab Hai.. Applause Applause


Divya dear.. aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Khoob Likha hai.. 4 Line me hi Poori Gazal likh di aapne.. Bahut Khooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2009, 06:05:27 PM »
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Wah Saahil ji and Sophi ji wonderful gazal,mindblowing creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2009, 06:51:50 PM »
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bahut aacha likha hai Applause Applause
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angel4u
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2009, 02:45:19 AM »
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Lovely lines Saahil, nice reply Sophi Usual Smile
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salil2002
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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2009, 05:07:02 AM »
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wah Kya baat hai Salil Bhai.. Bahut Hi Umda Gazal Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon Ka Chunaaw Bahut hi Lajawab Hai.. Applause Applause


Divya dear.. aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Khoob Likha hai.. 4 Line me hi Poori Gazal likh di aapne.. Bahut Khooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
shukriya vicky bhai
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2009, 05:08:48 AM »
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Wah Saahil ji and Sophi ji wonderful gazal,mindblowing creation, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut aacha likha hai Applause Applause
Lovely lines Saahil, nice reply Sophi Usual Smile

thanks a lot huzena,laila, and grimreaper
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2009, 05:12:43 AM »
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Welcome back Winking

Waah kya khoob Likha hai Saahil.. bahoot Khoob..

Aana hi padega Saahil Tume yahan Kisi Bahane se
Yea Rista hai hai hi aisa , Na tute kabhi anjane se

Intzaar mea Dost tere hai ki tu kab mud kar dekhega fir
Pyaar aur dosti ka rista yuhun nahi chuttha , bulaane se

sophi dear welcome k liye thanks
reply bilkul ghazal k according diya hai aapne daad kabool kare

lo aa gaya main waapas mehfil ko sajane
magar ab tum kyun mooh suja k beithe ho
kya kissii ne maara tumhe mere peechhe
kyun bekaar main sabse ladte rehte ho NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2009, 11:47:24 AM »
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bahut khamosh hai mehfil yoon tere jaane se
aa laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se

saaqee bahut gumsum hai,kucch kehti nahin
nikal kar khat padti hai apne sirhaane se

doston ka bhi haal yeh hai kii jaam chhoote nahin
kehte hain chhalak jaati har baar paimaane se

har shaam hum peete hai dost,beinteha peete hai
tere dushmann nahin aate baaz muskuraane se

kab tak sajegi yeh viraan mehfil tere bin
ab laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se

aa laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se.......!!!!!!


Bohot Khoob Salil
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2009, 01:10:51 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Salil
thank u di
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2009, 01:38:31 PM »
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sophi dear welcome k liye thanks
reply bilkul ghazal k according diya hai aapne daad kabool kare

lo aa gaya main waapas mehfil ko sajane
magar ab tum kyun mooh suja k beithe ho
kya kissii ne maara tumhe mere peechhe
kyun bekaar main sabse ladte rehte ho NaNaNa NaNaNa

Mote Chor... Main kitne pyaar se likha tha..
aur tumne  Crying Crying Crying Crying


Kitne pyaar se Tume ghar bulaya maine
Socha k tum Khana kha kar aaoge
Kya pata tha tum janmo se bhhoke
Billi ka kaya bhi khaa jaaoge tongue3
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2009, 02:30:35 PM »
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Wah wah Saahil Ji
Khubsurat ghazal
Maza aa gaya
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«Reply #13 on: August 08, 2009, 09:30:48 AM »
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bahut khamosh hai mehfil yoon tere jaane se
aa laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se

saaqee bahut gumsum hai,kucch kehti nahin
nikal kar khat padti hai apne sirhaane se

doston ka bhi haal yeh hai kii jaam chhoote nahin
kehte hain chhalak jaati har baar paimaane se

har shaam hum peete hai dost,beinteha peete hai
tere dushmann nahin aate baaz muskuraane se

kab tak sajegi yeh viraan mehfil tere bin
ab laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se

aa laut aa saahil kissii bahaane se.......!!!!!!

bahut hi khub Saahil ji......vaapas aaye khub aaye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tere apne hi hai yha sab,tujhe yha se jaane ki izzazat kab thi
Tera jaana gum tha ,aana sabke liye khushi hai
Tu sirf itna bta mujhe.....
Apno k beech vaapas aane k liye tujhe bahaane ki zarurat kab thi
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2009, 01:01:12 PM »
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Mote Chor... Main kitne pyaar se likha tha..
aur tumne  Crying Crying Crying Crying


Kitne pyaar se Tume ghar bulaya maine
Socha k tum Khana kha kar aaoge
Kya pata tha tum janmo se bhhoke
Billi ka kaya bhi khaa jaaoge tongue3
ha ha ha very good reply dekha mere saath likh likh k kitna achcha likhna seekh gayi ho

tum khud ko kehti ho kyun billi
ab kisne oodaayi tumhaari yahan khilli
lucknow wale toh hamesha khate peete rehte hai
bhooke nango ki kehlaati hai sirf delhi laughing4 laughing4
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