'Lo jiyo roz', zindagee kahtee!

by abdbundeli on August 27, 2010, 09:01:48 AM
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Kaash, yuun hi hawaa rahey bahtee!
Kaash, yuun hi hameyshgee rahtee!!

Subah sey shaam, shaam sey fir shab,
'Lo jiyo roz', zindagee kahtee!

Kuchh nayaa leykey ghadaa aayegaa:
Isliye, aaj ko sabaa sahtee!

Koun kahtaa hai karbalaa mein ab:
Rooh-e-insaan yahaan nahin rahtee!

Log aabaad they yahaan par bhee:
Khaak firtee hai daastaan kahtee!

Rooh-e-insaaniyat agar hotee:
Wo imaarat buland kyoun dhhahtee?

Khoon us din kaa bah, banaa jharnaa:
Ab, 'abd', har jagah nadee bahtee!

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2010, 09:25:57 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABD JI....

KIS SHAHER MEIN KARUN SAHER MAIN
HAR JAGAH KHOONI MANJHAR HAI
SABKE  NIGAON MEIN AATANK KA DAR HAI
KIS SHAHER MEIN KARUN SAHER MAIN....
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2010, 10:13:22 AM »
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Quote from: cara on August 27, 2010, 09:25:57 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABD JI....

KIS SHAHER MEIN KARUN SAHER MAIN
HAR JAGAH KHOONI MANJHAR HAI
SABKE  NIGAON MEIN AATANK KA DAR HAI
KIS SHAHER MEIN KARUN SAHER MAIN....

Dhanyawaad cara ji!

Apnaa HINDUSTAN, yaani apnaa INDIA, yaani BHARAT aaj bhee khaasaa mahfooz hai, chahey jis shahar mein bas jaayiye! 99% aatank baahiree hai, aur us par zaldee hi qaaboo paa liyaa jaayegaa!
Khush rahiye, aur aazaadee key saath aabaad rahiye: chain ki bansee bajaaiye!
Aapkaa swaagat hai!

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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2010, 07:49:08 PM »
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Abd Bundeli Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob.... Daad janab.. likhate rahiye...

Har paati meiN nayi taazgi mileNgi
Tod tey rah phool kii kiibaa kahtee hai           
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2010, 11:11:06 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 27, 2010, 07:49:08 PM
Abd Bundeli Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob.... Daad janab.. likhate rahiye...

Har paati meiN nayi taazgi mileNgi
Tod tey rah phool kii kiibaa kahtee hai           


Thanks Parwaaz ji! Khush rahiye!

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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2010, 11:16:50 AM »
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bht khubb abd bundeli ji..

zindagi kaash itni haseen hoti..
ise hum bhi fir iske andaaz se jeete
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 11:37:36 AM »
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Nice poem ABDji....jeevan jeene k anokhe rang-dhang... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 27, 2010, 09:01:48 AM

Kaash, yuun hi hawaa rahey bahtee!
Kaash, yuun hi hameyshgee rahtee!!

Subah sey shaam, shaam sey fir shab,
'Lo jiyo roz', zindagee kahtee!

Kuchh nayaa leykey ghadaa aayegaa:
Isliye, aaj ko sabaa sahtee!

Koun kahtaa hai karbalaa mein ab:
Rooh-e-insaan yahaan nahin rahtee!

Log aabaad they yahaan par bhee:
Khaak firtee hai daastaan kahtee!

Rooh-e-insaaniyat agar hotee:
Wo imaarat buland kyoun dhhahtee?

Khoon us din kaa bah, banaa jharnaa:
Ab, 'abd', har jagah nadee bahtee!

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 11:59:06 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 28, 2010, 11:16:50 AM
bht khubb abd bundeli ji..

zindagi kaash itni haseen hoti..
ise hum bhi fir iske andaaz se jeete
Thanks *KasaK* ji!

Nazar hai apnee aankhoun kee: jo marzee, deykhatey rahiye!
Kabhee badsooratee kahiye, kabhi khushsooratee kahiye!
Dimaag-o-dil key masloun mein guzarteen gayeen hain sadiyaan:
Usee ko beyshakal kahiye, usee ko mooratee kahiye!!

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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2010, 12:13:10 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 28, 2010, 11:37:36 AM
Nice poem ABDji....jeevan jeene k anokhe rang-dhang... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanks a lot, KOYAL46 ji!

Meyrey hisaab sey wah jeenaa hi jeenaa hai, jismein har pal aisaa ho ki lagey ki usee aik pal mein pooree zindagee jee lee gayee hai! Isee ehsaas ko main ney Hindi kavita kii apnee aik laain mein mahsoos kiyaa hai:
"Aik ksham mein hee kadaachit poorna jeewan jiyaa main ney!"
(As if I've lived my whole life in that single moment!)

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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2010, 06:55:46 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Abd ji....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2010, 05:45:51 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 06:55:46 PM
bahut bahut khoob Abd ji....!!!

Thanks klaskar ji!

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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2010, 01:47:13 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2010, 06:03:59 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 01:47:13 AM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji

Thanks a lot, Rajesh ji!

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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2010, 11:56:24 AM »
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Bahut sunder line hai ABDji.....
"Aik kshan mein hee kadaachit poorna jeewan jiyaa main ney!"

Kshan bhangoor hai ye apna Jeevan
Anek Hain isske Rung aur Roop sakhee
Thode Ghum Hain, Thodi Hain Khushiyan
Pal me Chhaon pal me hoti Dhoop sakhee
Yehi Jeevan Hai jeena humko sakhee

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 28, 2010, 12:13:10 PM

Thanks a lot, KOYAL46 ji!

Meyrey hisaab sey wah jeenaa hi jeenaa hai, jismein har pal aisaa ho ki lagey ki usee aik pal mein pooree zindagee jee lee gayee hai! Isee ehsaas ko main ney Hindi kavita kii apnee aik laain mein mahsoos kiyaa hai:
"Aik ksham mein hee kadaachit poorna jeewan jiyaa main ney!"
(As if I've lived my whole life in that single moment!)

                       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2010, 02:33:28 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 11:56:24 AM
Bahut sunder line hai ABDji.....
"Aik kshan mein hee kadaachit poorna jeewan jiyaa main ney!"

Kshan bhangoor hai ye apna Jeevan
Anek Hain isske Rung aur Roop sakhee
Thode Ghum Hain, Thodi Hain Khushiyan
Pal me Chhaon pal me hoti Dhoop sakhee
Yehi Jeevan Hai jeena humko sakhee


Thanks a lot, 'KOYAL46' ji!
Kuchheik saal pahiley main ney eik dohaa likhaa thaa: liijiye padhhiye!

Jeewan hai yah: kyoun na ham,
Jiyen isey bharpoor?
Aaou pahloo mei yahaan:
Kyoun baithhey ho door?

          - abd bundeli
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