Log jeetey hain, magar, aadmee martaa hai kyoun?

by abdbundeli on September 30, 2012, 11:29:26 AM
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Kaarwaan roj sarey-shaam guzartaa hai kyoun?
Log jeetey hain, magar, aadmee martaa hai kyoun?

Yeh karo, yeh na karo! Wo karo, wo na karo!
Kyaa hi uljhan hai? Roz khwaab wikhartaa hai kyoun?

Ham jiyen! Wo na jiyen!! Wo jiyen, to, ham na jiyen!
Zeest kaa dour-e-rawaan, ham ko akhartaa hai kyoun?

Woh jalaatey hain isey, doosaraa jal uthtaa hai!
Yaa Khudaa, is kaa kiyaa, doosaraa bhartaa hai kyoun?

Un ney ham sey kahaa thaa chaandnee mein aayengey:
Peishtar maah, syaah abra ubhartaa hai kyoun?

Bhor hotey hi baam par nazar aatey hain woh!
Shafaq key saath, ‘abd’, chaand nikhartaa hai kyoun?

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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2012, 11:41:07 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautifully said
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2012, 12:55:35 PM »
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Zabarast ghazal sir ji .........
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2012, 01:29:47 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 30, 2012, 11:29:26 AM
Kaarwaan roj sarey-shaam guzartaa hai kyoun?
Log jeetey hain, magar, aadmee martaa hai kyoun?

Yeh karo, yeh na karo! Wo karo, wo na karo!
Kyaa hi uljhan hai? Roz khwaab wikhartaa hai kyoun?

Ham jiyen! Wo na jiyen!! Wo jiyen, to, ham na jiyen!
Zeest kaa dour-e-rawaan, ham ko akhartaa hai kyoun?

Woh jalaatey hain isey, doosaraa jal uthtaa hai!
Yaa Khudaa, is kaa kiyaa, doosaraa bhartaa hai kyoun?

Un ney ham sey kahaa thaa chaandnee mein aayengey:
Peishtar maah, syaah abra ubhartaa hai kyoun?

Bhor hotey hi baam par nazar aatey hain woh!
Shafaq key saath, ‘abd’, chaand nikhartaa hai kyoun?

                           - abd bundeli


wah wah bahut khoob. Har kyu ka jawab miljata toh kitna accha hota
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2012, 03:37:24 PM »
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bahut hi shaandaar ghazal hai sir
Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2012, 04:31:54 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 30, 2012, 11:41:07 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
beautifully said

Thanks dear Aqsh ji!
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2012, 04:32:42 AM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on September 30, 2012, 12:55:35 PM
Zabarast ghazal sir ji .........

Shukriyah, Sharma ji!
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Quote from: suman59 on September 30, 2012, 01:29:47 PM
wah wah bahut khoob. Har kyu ka jawab miljata toh kitna accha hota
Shukriyah, Suman ji!

Isee kaa naam duniyaa hai, isee kaa naam hai insaan!
Isee sey zindagee key rang hain shaadaab gul-afshaan!!

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Quote from: mkv on September 30, 2012, 03:37:24 PM
bahut hi shaandaar ghazal hai sir
Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, mkv ji!
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Abd  ji.....!!!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 02, 2012, 06:41:50 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Abd  ji.....!!!

Bahut-bahut shkriyah, Hriday ji!
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