Loo Ab Marnaa Bhee Tal Jaayegaa.......masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on July 28, 2012, 03:16:02 AM
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Unkee aaNkhoo kaa vaar kahaaN jaayegaa.
Gunahgaar ham hai, hamaaree taraf hee aayegaa.
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Puraanee hai ye haseenoo kee adaa , nayaa kuch bhee nahee.
Aayegaa wo najdeek aour muskurakar gujar jaayegaa.
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Ek tootaa huaa pattaa hee too hai insaan.
Jidhar le jaaye hawaa , udhar jaayegaa.
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Hak ne aaj rishtoo koo toodne kee daan lee hai.
Dekhe, Bhai maNgega hissa yaa rishtoo pe maan jaayegaa.
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Pyaar bad naa saka too dhat jaayegaa.
Insaan kee fitrat hai badal jaanaa, badal jaayegaa.
.
Unkee chaahat hai muttee me kaid jugno see.
Band rakhkhee to dam ghutegaa, khoolee too uad jaayegaa.
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Teer muhabbat ka chalaa ke jindagee cheen lee usne "Masoom".
Aour dawaa pilaa ke kahaa, "Loo ab marnaa bee tal jaayegaa".
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 03:55:59 AM »
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Wah wah wah....... Masoom ji kya pqalaam pesh kiya hai.... Jitni daad di jaye kam hai...... Behad khubsurat umda aur besqeemti qalaam.......... Hajaro salaam aapke is qalaam ke naam.......aur ek rau bhi...
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 04:23:58 AM »
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BAhut BAhut Khub Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 09:26:05 AM »
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bahut khoob, badhai
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 10:14:56 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 10:48:41 AM »
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wah wah kiya baat hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 10:59:17 AM »
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Barhiya Masoom bhai
Bahut bahut acche ehsaas o khayaal ko likha hai aapne.
vaah vaah vaaaaaaaah
3rd sher...bahut bahut khoob raha.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 05:21:03 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2012, 05:39:33 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob maasoom ji... Usual Smile

daad daad.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2012, 02:32:44 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 28, 2012, 03:55:59 AM
Wah wah wah....... Masoom ji kya pqalaam pesh kiya hai.... Jitni daad di jaye kam hai...... Behad khubsurat umda aur besqeemti qalaam.......... Hajaro salaam aapke is qalaam ke naam.......aur ek rau bhi...
saudagar jee aadaab
Saudagar jee sayad jitnee tareef aapne es ko bakhsee sayad ye etna mustahak nahee tha par aapne esko jitnee ejjat se nawaja uska main sukargujar hoo.
Jab es tarah koi hausla badata to likhne ka dil karta hai aour soch ke darwaje washee hote chale jaate hai.
Barhaal aaka bahoot bahoot sukriya.
....masoom.....
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2012, 11:56:08 PM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 28, 2012, 04:23:58 AM
BAhut BAhut Khub Applause Applause Applause
sukriya sanjeev ji
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 28, 2012, 09:26:05 AM
bahut khoob, badhai
thanks a lot nandbahu jee
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 28, 2012, 10:14:56 AM
waah waah bahut khoob
sukriya bhai
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on July 28, 2012, 10:48:41 AM
wah wah kiya baat hai  Applause Applause Applause
sukriyaa basni jee
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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2012, 05:19:27 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on July 28, 2012, 03:16:02 AM

Unkee aaNkhoo kaa vaar kahaaN jaayegaa.
Gunahgaar ham hai, hamaaree taraf hee aayegaa.
.
Puraanee hai ye haseenoo kee adaa , nayaa kuch bhee nahee.
Aayegaa wo najdeek aour muskurakar gujar jaayegaa.
.
Ek tootaa huaa pattaa hee too hai insaan.
Jidhar le jaaye hawaa , udhar jaayegaa.
.
Hak ne aaj rishtoo koo toodne kee daan lee hai.
Dekhe, Bhai maNgega hissa yaa rishtoo pe maan jaayegaa.
.
Pyaar bad naa saka too dhat jaayegaa.
Insaan kee fitrat hai badal jaanaa, badal jaayegaa.
.
Unkee chaahat hai muttee me kaid jugno see.
Band rakhkhee to dam ghutegaa, khoolee too uad jaayegaa.
.
Teer muhabbat ka chalaa ke jindagee cheen lee usne "Masoom".
Aour dawaa pilaa ke kahaa, "Loo ab marnaa bee tal jaayegaa".
Bahut bahut khoob khayalat rakhe hain aapne Masoom ji is gazal me ek se badh ke ek ye aasa'r mujhe khaas pasand aya
"Hak ne aaj rishtoo koo toodne kee daan lee hai.
Dekhe, Bhai maNgega hissa yaa rishtoo pe maan jaayegaa."...Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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