Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!

by abdbundeli on July 29, 2008, 09:02:03 AM
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 Lout aaye hain, wahee beetey zamaaney, fir sey!
 Lagee hai andleeb, taan sunaaney fir sey!!

 Baansurree, fir wahee, bajney lagee hai panghat pai:
 Gopiyaan aayeen hain, Jamunaa pai nahaaney fir sey!

 Nand-laalaa ney, wahee chheirh-chhaarh fir kee hai;
 Aur, Radhaa ney, banaaye hain bahaaney, fir sey!

 Shuroo huye hain wahee raas-rang, gokul mein!
 Koun laayaa hai ye navneet? khilaaney fir sey!!

 Maa Jashodaa ney teir kar, waheen bulaayaa hai;
 Apney Kaanhaa ko dahee-doodh pilaney fir sey!

 Un uyoonoun mein lout fir sey chamak aayee hai:
 Jin uyoonoun ko parhey ashk bahaaney, fir sey!

 Koun, Mathuraa mein, lout fir sey aa gayaa hai? 'abd'
 Aaj, Kubjaa ko nayaa roop dilaaney, fir sey!!'

                                    - abd bundeli
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2008, 09:55:13 AM »
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Ati Sundaram:Mohaq:Kavitaayh:|

Bundeli saab..."andaleeb" " Ashq " Ka agar Suddha Hindi Me Prayog Karte To Shayad Aur Madhur Lagta..Chaliye Niraali Hai Kavita aapki.
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2008, 11:17:08 AM »
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Muhammed sa'b,
Bhai! aap to Hindi bhi khashi achchhi jaantey hain! Hindi mein to meiney Urdu sey kaheen bahut jiyaadah likhaa hai! Aur, lagbhag sabhi MS Word / Adobe / Aldus DTP systems mein entered hai; par mujhey pataa naheen hai, ki, aapkaa yah programme koun sey fonts aur koun sey DTP system sey compatable hai, naheen to us sey bhi aapko parichit karataa!Roz Shukriyaa kartaa hoon, aaj dhanyawaad! -abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2009, 02:48:25 AM »
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Wow bahut accha gazal likha hai aapne..Uncle ji
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2009, 02:55:01 AM »
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Hara sapna hara kab tak rahega?
Kijaan ke haat se kaise bachega?

Nayi ruth mein bhi her panchi yahan per
Dara-sehma hua chup-sa milega

Ye banzer-sa shazer aangan mein mere
Na jaane kab ghana saya karega

Andheri raah mein baiti sochti hu
Ki baadal chand per se kab hatega?

Agar "Roja" ki maut aa gayi to
Bata ye dost tu kaise jiyega?
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2009, 09:16:19 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 02, 2009, 02:48:25 AM

Wow bahut accha gazal likha hai aapne..Uncle ji
Quote from: Roja on October 02, 2009, 02:55:01 AM

Hara sapna, hara kab tak rahega?
Khijaan ke haat se kaise bachega?

Nayi ruth mein bhi har panchi yahan par
Dara-sehma hua chup-sa milega

Ye banzar-sa shazar aangan mein mere
Na jaane kab ghana saya karega

Andheri raah mein baithi sochti hu
Ki baadal chand per se kab hatega?

Agar "Roja" ki maut hi aa gayi to
Bata ye dost tu kaise jiyega?



Thanks Roja! Aur bahut khoob!

Khizaan ho jaayegee fanaa; bahaar aayegee!
Laboun pai surkh parat, fir, shafaq chadhhaayegee!
Aur, meyrey uyoon may piyengey - chamkeyngey;
Husn-e-maashooq, sajee saaqiyah pilaayegee!!

                               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2009, 07:10:41 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 04, 2009, 09:16:19 AM

Thanks Roja! Aur bahut khoob!

Khizaan ho jaayegee fanaa; bahaar aayegee!
Laboun pai surkh parat, fir, shafaq chadhhaayegee!
Aur, meyrey uyoon may piyengey - chamkeyngey;
Husn-e-maashooq, sajee saaqiyah pilaayegee!!

                               - abd bundeli


Thanks Uncle ji  Usual Smile

Khuda ki shaan, jinhe baat karna na aati thi
Vo ab kare hai sawalon-jawab shayari mein ... tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2009, 08:36:13 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 11, 2009, 07:10:41 AM
Thanks Uncle ji  Usual Smile


Khuda ki shaan, jinhe baat karna na aati thi
Vo ab kare hai sawalon-jawab shayari mein ... tongue3


Sikhlaataa hai zamaanaa,
Seekh na paatey log!
Eik ishaaraa hee, kabhee,
Bantaa hai 'sanyog'!!

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2009, 09:24:24 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 11, 2009, 08:36:13 AM
Sikhlaataa hai zamaanaa,
Seekh na paatey log!
Eik ishaaraa hee, kabhee,
Bantaa hai 'sanyog'!!

            - abd bundeli

Vo dhur hi se hame dekh le, yahi hai bahut
Magar kabool hamara Salaam ho jaye..!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2009, 07:43:48 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 11, 2009, 09:24:24 AM

Vo dur hi se hame dekh le, yahi hai bahut
Magar kabool hamara Salaam ho jaye..!!


Spandan-spandan mein chhupaa
Hai priya kaa pratidaan!
Miltaa waheen apoorv sukh:
Akshaya hai wah khaan!

                 - 'Ramwatiya'  
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2009, 03:32:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 15, 2009, 07:43:48 AM

Spandan-spandan mein chhupaa
Hai priya kaa pratidaan!
Miltaa waheen apoorv sukh:
Akshaya hai wah khaan!

                 - 'Ramwatiya'   

haha.. aisa kya... bahut acche  icon_thumleft

Ab toh ye khel hua doston, aaye din ka
Dard nakhunon mein sehti hu nukili pin ka

Aaine jo hai mere haat mein vo dhundule hai
Aisa lagta hai ke paani utar gaya inka

Aayee maidaan mein nadhi toh humko hosh aaya
Haat se choot ke apne kider gaya tinka

Unse jyada talash aur kissko sooraj ki
Bor se ghar hi andheron se ber gaya jinka

Ab ujalon ko yahan laut ke aana hoga
Raat-ber khwaab khuli aankh se dekha din ka...

 Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2009, 06:11:52 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 18, 2009, 03:32:11 AM
haha.. aisa kya... bahut acche  icon_thumleft


Ab to ye khel hua, dosto, aaye din ka!
Dard nakhunon mein sehti hun nukili pin ka!!

Aaine jo hain mere haath mein vo dhundule hain
Aisa lagta hai ke paani utar gaya inka!

Aayee maidaan mein nadi, to, humko hosh aaya
Haath se chhoot ke apne, kider gaya tinka?

Unse jyada talash aur kisko sooraj ki
Bhor se ghar hi andheron se bher gaya jinka!

Ab ujalon ko yahan laut ke aana hoga,
Raat-bher khwaab khuli aankh se dekha din ka!

 Usual Smile


Behetreen! Bahut hee khoob, Roja! Highly metaphoric exclamation of a pining heart that's over-flowing with love & affection! Congrats!!

Rag-rag mahkey preeti sey,
Hrudaya priyaa kaa dhanya!
Peerhaa mein bhee wyakt hai,
Uskaa wahee ananya!!

           - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #12 on: October 20, 2009, 02:53:24 AM »
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Behetreen! Bahut hee khoob, Roja! Highly metaphoric exclamation of a pining heart that's over-flowing with love & affection! Congrats!!

Rag-rag mahkey preeti sey,
Hrudaya priyaa kaa dhanya!
Peerhaa mein bhee wyakt hai,
Uskaa wahee ananya!!

           - 'Ramwatiya'

aaww... What a great appreciation from you Uncle ji. I am really lucky to hear this from you. Thank you very much for your great wordings of appreciation.
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«Reply #13 on: October 20, 2009, 02:58:44 AM »
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Badan bhulate rahe aur humne fikr na ki
Ki jaise humko kisi rooh ki tamanna thi

Ghar se nikle the hum bachpan ki tazgi lekar
Bhare jahan mein hame fir wo chand na mili

Kuch aankhein aisi hai dunia mein jinki kurbat se
fhadakne lagtil hai khud hi hamari aankhein bhi

Khushi se log toh sab ho gaye they pagal-se
Hamare hisse mein aayi thi kuch udasi-si

Zameen se kaun-sa rishta tha natuvanon ka
Hamesha paav ko pakada, sada duhayi di

 sad7
natuvanon = nirbalta
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2010, 01:34:04 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 20, 2009, 02:58:44 AM
Badan bhulate rahe aur humne fikr na ki
Ki jaise humko kisi rooh ki tamanna thi

Ghar se nikle the hum bachpan ki tazgi lekar
Bhare jahan mein hame fir wo chand na mili

Kuch aankhein aisi hai dunia mein jinki kurbat se
fhadakne lagtil hai khud hi hamari aankhein bhi

Khushi se log toh sab ho gaye they pagal-se
Hamare hisse mein aayi thi kuch udasi-si

Zameen se kaun-sa rishta tha natuvanon ka
Hamesha paav ko pakada, sada duhayi di

 sad7
natuvanon = nirbalta

Honaa tum na udaas, sakhi,
Beeteygaa yeh dour!
Koyee kahtaa aayegaa,
"Milaa na tum-saa aour!!"

               - abd bundeli
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