lutaa huaa...A.B

by adil bechain on July 27, 2011, 10:10:27 AM
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                        bhulayaa jab tumhen maine apni yaad se,
                        naa aayi neend  phir usss raat se,

                        mili sazaa mujhe meri be-gunaahi ki,
                        mukraa jo wo gawaahi mein apni baat se,

                        khanjar bhi na kar saka zakhmi usss tarah,
                        hui jo takleef mujhe mehboob ki zaat se,

                        toota dil jiskaa ishq mein haal wahi jaane,
                        shahar ko kya lenaa maashooq ki baraat se,

                        bekhudi mein kuch iss tarah se 'lutaa' bechain..!!
                        jaltaa hai ab chiraag bhi ghar ka, khairaat se.



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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2011, 10:16:41 AM »
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                        bhulayaa tumhen maine jab apni yaad se,
                        aayi nahin neend  phir usss raat se,

                        mili sazaa mujhe meri be-gunaahi ki,
                        mukraa jo wo gawaahi mein apni baat se,

                        khajar bhi na kar saka zakhmi usss tarah,
                        hui jo takleef mujhe mehboob ki zaat se,

                        toota dil jiskaa ishq mein haal wahi jaane,
                        shahar ko kya lenaa maashooq ki baraat se,

                        bekhudi mein kuch iss tarah se 'lutaa' bechain..!!
                        jaltaa hai ab chiraag bhi ghar ka, khairaat se.



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Bhuat Khoob Applause Applause Applause

Adil ji Jara dekh lijye ki khajar jo likha hai wo shyaad app kanjar likhna cahte the agar mein sahi hoo..n to tekh kar dijye otherwise agar iska matlab kuch aur hai to samja dijye
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«Reply #2 on: July 27, 2011, 10:46:07 AM »
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Bhuat Khoob Applause Applause Applause

Adil ji Jara dekh lijye ki khajar jo likha hai wo shyaad app kanjar likhna cahte the agar mein sahi hoo..n to tekh kar dijye otherwise agar iska matlab kuch aur hai to samja dijye


khanjar ka matlab hota hai- chaako, similar to knife Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2011, 10:54:47 AM »
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Sir Aapne Khajar likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2011, 10:58:31 AM »
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Sir Aapne Khajar likha hai

thank you.
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2011, 11:09:22 AM »
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welcome sir
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2011, 05:53:18 PM »
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bahut khub ab ji
jabrdast post hai aapki Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2011, 06:18:17 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah... Kya kehne.. Bohat umda...
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bahut khub ab ji
jabrdast post hai aapki Applause Applause

thank you kamal ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2011, 08:19:02 AM »
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                        bhulayaa jab tumhen maine apni yaad se,
                        naa aayi neend  phir usss raat se,

                        mili sazaa mujhe meri be-gunaahi ki,
                        mukraa jo wo gawaahi mein apni baat se,

                        khanjar bhi na kar saka zakhmi usss tarah,
                        hui jo takleef mujhe mehboob ki zaat se,

                        toota dil jiskaa ishq mein haal wahi jaane,
                        shahar ko kya lenaa maashooq ki baraat se,

                        bekhudi mein kuch iss tarah se 'lutaa' bechain..!!
                        jaltaa hai ab chiraag bhi ghar ka, khairaat se.



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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Adilji..

har Ek A'shaar Lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 09, 2011, 09:38:35 AM »
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Adil ji bahut sunder rachana.
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Adilji..

har Ek A'shaar Lajawab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #12 on: September 10, 2011, 12:24:59 PM »
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matle mein tabdili kiya hai


                        hataya jab tumhen apne talluqaat se,
                        naa aayi neend  phir usss raat se,

                        mili sazaa mujhe meri be-gunaahi ki,
                        mukraa jo wo gawaahi mein apni baat se,

                        khanjar bhi na kar saka zakhmi usss tarah,
                        hui jo takleef mujhe mehboob ki zaat se,

                        toota dil jiskaa ishq mein haal wahi jaane,
                        shahar ko kya lenaa maashooq ki baraat se,

                        bekhudi mein kuch iss tarah se 'lutaa' bechain..!!
                        jaltaa hai ab chiraag bhi ghar ka, khairaat se.



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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 09, 2011, 09:38:35 AM
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Adil ji bahut sunder rachana.

thanks
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