Maajrah kyaa hai: kabhi bhi naheen bataatey ho?

by abdbundeli on January 14, 2009, 08:13:58 AM
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Maajrah kyaa hai: kabhi bhi naheen bataatey ho?
‘Zald jaanaa hai!’ Baarahaa yahee sunaatey ho!!

Mujhey bataaou to aakhir yeh chaleygaa kab tak?
Mein bulaataa hoon, to aatey ho, chaley jaatey ho!!

Kab khatam hogi roz-roz ki aawaa-jaahii?
Hijra key dour beyshumaar liye aatey ho!

Maantaa hoon ki gulandaam ho, gulaab naheen!
Gulfishaanee key liye bhi naheen bulaatey ho?

Aamdey mein naseem; loutney mein baad-e-dawaan!
Baag-e-atshaan hoon: ao, bey-aab abra laatey ho?

‘Rooh  sey apnee,  ab, ‘abd’ judaa rahey kaisey?
Waqaar-e-ishq baar-baar aazmaatey ho?

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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2009, 08:47:22 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 14, 2009, 08:13:58 AM
Maajrah kyaa hai: kabhi bhi naheen bataatey ho?
‘Zald jaanaa hai!’ Baarahaa yahee sunaatey ho!!

Mujhey bataaou to aakhir yeh chaleygaa kab tak?
Mein bulaataa hoon, to aatey ho, chaley jaatey ho!!

Kab khatam hogi roz-roz ki aawaa-jaahii?
Hijra key dour beyshumaar liye aatey ho!

Maantaa hoon ki gulandaam ho, gulaab naheen!
Gulfishaanee key liye bhi naheen bulaatey ho?

Aamdey mein naseem; loutney mein baad-e-dawaan!
Baag-e-atshaan hoon: ao, bey-aab abra laatey ho?

‘Rooh  sey apnee,  ab, ‘abd’ judaa rahey kaisey?
Waqaar-e-ishq baar-baar aazmaatey ho?

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 Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

Bahut umda gazal pesh kiye hai aapne abd bundeli ji..
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2009, 11:25:39 AM »
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Nice one Abd Ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2009, 11:40:46 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 14, 2009, 08:47:22 AM
Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause

Bahut umda gazal pesh kiye hai aapne abd bundeli ji..
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 14, 2009, 11:25:39 AM
Nice one Abd Ji
Ji bahut-bahut shukriyah !
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2009, 11:43:34 AM »
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Maajrah kyaa hai: kabhi bhi naheen bataatey ho?
‘Zald jaanaa hai!’ Baarahaa yahee sunaatey ho!!

Mujhey bataaou to aakhir yeh chaleygaa kab tak?
Mein bulaataa hoon, to aatey ho, chaley jaatey ho!!

Kab khatam hogi roz-roz ki aawaa-jaahii?
Hijra key dour beyshumaar liye aatey ho!

Maantaa hoon ki gulandaam ho, gulaab naheen!
Gulfishaanee key liye bhi naheen bulaatey ho?

Aamdey mein naseem; loutney mein baad-e-dawaan!
Baag-e-atshaan hoon: ao, bey-aab abra laatey ho?

‘Rooh  sey apnee,  ab, ‘abd’ judaa rahey kaisey?
Waqaar-e-ishq baar-baar aazmaatey ho?

                                 - abd bundeli


Waah... Waah... Kya baat hai.. Applause Applause Applause
Hamesha ki tarah, Bahut bahut achi aur pyaari peshkash hai Abd Ji..
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 12:12:25 PM »
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Maajrah kyaa hai: kabhi bhi naheen bataatey ho?
‘Zald jaanaa hai!’ Baarahaa yahee sunaatey ho!!

Mujhey bataaou to aakhir yeh chaleygaa kab tak?
Mein bulaataa hoon, to aatey ho, chaley jaatey ho!!

Kab khatam hogi roz-roz ki aawaa-jaahii?
Hijra key dour beyshumaar liye aatey ho!

Maantaa hoon ki gulandaam ho, gulaab naheen!
Gulfishaanee key liye bhi naheen bulaatey ho?

Aamdey mein naseem; loutney mein baad-e-dawaan!
Baag-e-atshaan hoon: ao, bey-aab abra laatey ho?

‘Rooh  sey apnee,  ab, ‘abd’ judaa rahey kaisey?
Waqaar-e-ishq baar-baar aazmaatey ho?

                                 - abd bundeli


Bahoth Badiya Janab Kya likha hai apne dil khush hogaya !! Allah apko khush rakhe bhaijaan !!

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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2009, 02:30:52 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 14, 2009, 11:43:34 AM
Waah... Waah... Kya baat hai.. Applause Applause Applause
Hamesha ki tarah, Bahut bahut achi aur pyaari peshkash hai Abd Ji..
Thanks a lot Mahiya ji! Aapkey comments hameyshaa dil-o-dimaag mein taazgee bhar deytey hain, ki, dobaarah likhney kaa man karney lagtaa hai!
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Bahoth Badiya Janab Kya likha hai apne dil khush hogaya !! Allah apko khush rakhe bhaijaan !!
Qadeer Toopchi
Bahut-bahut shukriyah abdulqadeer ji! Aapki aisee duaayen hi to mujhey taazaadam rakhteen hain! Naheen to 70 mein bhi jawaanee key nagmeyn kaisey likh paataa! Hamaarey noujawaan khush raheyngey to jawaanee ki kuchh na kuchh khushboo hamaaree taraf bhi to aayegee hee! Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #8 on: January 14, 2009, 04:30:38 PM »
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Wah wah wah... kaya baat hai Abd ji, Kash kabhi meri kalam bhi apki tarah kuch likh sake!! bahoot he acha likha hai... apka tahe dil se shukaria ki app yoindia per hum sab ke sath hai.. aor hume moka de rahe hai ki hum apki kavitaye parr kar kuch sikh sake!!!
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wah wah Bundeli kya khoob likha hai... wah

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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2009, 05:17:00 AM »
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Wah wah wah... kaya baat hai Abd ji, Kash kabhi meri kalam bhi apki tarah kuch likh sake!! bahoot he acha likha hai... apka tahe dil se shukaria ki app yoindia per hum sab ke sath hai.. aor hume moka de rahe hai ki hum apki kavitaye parr kar kuch sikh sake!!!
Zarrahnawaazee key liye shukriyah, Pooja ji!
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wah wah Bundeli kya khoob likha hai... wah
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Thanks you a lot, Jasbir!
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