Maa.N ke anchal me so gaya sahib ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on January 05, 2011, 12:34:02 PM
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Ahle Mahefil aadab o tasleemat ,,

Meri tazah khaaish ap sub ki nazar ,,umid hai apni ara se nawazenge ..



Khuch nahi humko ab gila sahib
Jo tha kismat me wo hua sahib


Bebasi bekali o tanhai
Aur kya ishq ne diya sahib


Baad Muddat ke jheel me akhir
Ik kanwal khushnuma khila sahib


Uske wade ki laaj rakhne ko
Ashq pi pi ke mai jiya sahib


Sab khilono ko toor ke beta
Maa.N ke anchal me so gaya sahib


ik waade pe umr kaati hai
kya qadeer apne kiya sahib


Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2011, 01:17:27 PM »
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Jab Qadeer Bhai, Aap Kuch Likhte Hai,Padhe-Padhte Samaa Tehar Sa Jaata Hai..Kya Kahen Qadeer Bhai..

Lajawaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bas Ek Shikayat Si hai, Qadeer Bhai Yoindia mein Regular Raha Kijiye..
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2011, 06:29:55 PM »
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Janab Qadeer Sahab Aadaab!

Aik arsa bit gaya aapki koi kalaam padhe...
Caliye der aaye durust aaye... Aur behad umdaa
Gazal lekar aane ke liye dil se daad o mubarakbad kabool kijiye... Usual Smile         


Quote from: qadeer_junaid on January 05, 2011, 12:34:02 PM
Ahle Mahefil aadab o tasleemat ,,

Meri tazah khaaish ap sub ki nazar ,,umid hai apni ara se nawazenge ..



Khuch nahi humko ab gila sahib
Jo tha kismat me wo hua sahib

Kia baat hai janab... Bahut khoob..
Aik mazar kashi humari janib se bhi.. Jaise ke aap aur
hume janne wale jante hai ke humari rai jyada tar ulti hi
hoti hai.. tongue3

   

Unhe naa paane ka kia gila sahib
Humne hi kuch jyada maNg liya sahib         

Bebasi bekali o tanhai
Aur kya ishq ne diya sahib

Kia baat hai... Umdaa khayaal hai janab daad
 Aur woh Bade khush naseeb hote hai, Jo bhi Ishq ki raah se manzil paa lete hai..         


Baad Muddat ke jheel me akhir
Ik kanwal khushnuma khila sahib

Waah janab gehri kahi daad... Usual Smile         


Uske wade ki laaj rakhne ko
Ashq pi pi ke mai jiya sahib

Masha Allah Janab... Kia kahne...
Bahut khoob bahut umdaa Dil ko lag gaya Usual Smile         


Sab khilono ko toor ke beta
Maa.N ke anchal me so gaya sahib

Oye hoye.. YeH hai Janab aapki khususan
Shayari ki khususi baat... Jis par dil bagH bagH ho jata hai daad dheroN daad Usual Smile         


ik waade pe umr kaati hai
kya qadeer apne kiya sahib

Oye hoye Kia baat ha janab..
Daad hazir hai.. Usual Smile         


Qadeertoopchi

Qadeer Sahab, Aap jaise umdaa shayaroN ki kami is bazm meiN koi aur nahi bhar sakta..
Aate rahiye....

Ab dil hi nahi lagta humara kisi anjuman meiN bhi
Yeh kaisa mousam hai Gul hi nahi chaman meiN bhi
         


Aise hi Umdaa likhate rahiye...
Allah Aapki kalam meiN aur zor bakhshe...
Khush O aabad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
         
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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2011, 06:47:13 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat.bahut achhi likhi hai.kalam tod ke rakh di hai.

qadeerji.
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2011, 07:21:06 PM »
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Dusra aur teesra shaer toh bahaut hi zada lajawab hai Qadeer jee..
Sach kaha Parwaaz jee ne kay ap jaise umda shayaron ki yahan kami hai..
Khwaish dost ne bhi sach kaha kay ek shaksiyat hai Qadeer iss mehfil main..
Har roz aya kijiye..
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2011, 08:08:05 PM »
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Mashallah
Qadeer Bhai, Aap Aaaye Mehfil Mein Phir Bahaar Aayi.
Bohat Achchi Ghazal Se Nawaaza Hai Aapne Hum Sabko,
Yunhi Apne Kalaamon Se Nawaazte Rahein, Aapki Ghazlon Mein Gehraai Hai, Hume In Tajruba aur Seekh Milegi,.

Rab Khush Rakhe Aapko, May Allah Bless You Brother,.
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2011, 06:39:37 AM »
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lafz kam haiN jo kuchh taareef karooN saahib
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2011, 07:10:04 AM »
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Bahut Khub .. Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2011, 03:10:25 PM »
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yaarane-e-mahefil ..aadab ,,

Ap sub dosto.N ka behad shukar guzar hon ke ap logon ne ghazal ki pazirai ki ..aur mahubbaton se nawaze .. dad o tahseen ke liye azhd mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah sub ko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2011, 04:25:26 PM »
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lajawaab.
iss tarah ki ghazal padhne ko mile to inaam milne jaisa lagta hai.
aapka sukriya
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 08:33:32 AM »
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Janab Qadeer Saheb!AOA!

Ye ghazal kamaal ki ghazal hai. Har ik sher ki rawaani aur khususiat bemicaal hai. Hazaaron daad qubul kijiye aisi khoobsurat takhleeq par.

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on January 05, 2011, 12:34:02 PM
Ahle Mahefil aadab o tasleemat ,,

Meri tazah khaaish ap sub ki nazar ,,umid hai apni ara se nawazenge ..



Khuch nahi humko ab gila sahib
Jo tha kismat me wo hua sahib


Bebasi bekali o tanhai
Aur kya ishq ne diya sahib


Baad Muddat ke jheel me akhir
Ik kanwal khushnuma khila sahib


Uske wade ki laaj rakhne ko
Ashq pi pi ke mai jiya sahib


Sab khilono ko toor ke beta
Maa.N ke anchal me so gaya sahib


ik waade pe umr kaati hai
kya qadeer apne kiya sahib


Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2011, 08:32:56 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on January 05, 2011, 12:34:02 PM
Ahle Mahefil aadab o tasleemat ,,

Meri tazah khaaish ap sub ki nazar ,,umid hai apni ara se nawazenge ..



Khuch nahi humko ab gila sahib
Jo tha kismat me wo hua sahib


Bebasi bekali o tanhai
Aur kya ishq ne diya sahib


Baad Muddat ke jheel me akhir
Ik kanwal khushnuma khila sahib


Uske wade ki laaj rakhne ko
Ashq pi pi ke mai jiya sahib


Sab khilono ko toor ke beta
Maa.N ke anchal me so gaya sahib


ik waade pe umr kaati hai
kya qadeer apne kiya sahib


Qadeertoopchi

teri ghazal ne to bazam loot liya qadeer,
mauqa humein bhi dete kya kiya sahib
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2011, 09:33:31 AM »
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kya baat hai....qadeerji.....bahut khub....

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