Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Roo-b-roo dar, chaley jaaney key ba'ad aayougey?
Koun kahtaa hai, ki, ab umra bhar sataaougey?

Naazneenoun ki adaaoun kaa kyaa bayaan karoon:
Har lamheyn 'nain' tokatey hain, ki, 'kab jaaougey'?

Khud bulaayaa thaa, kayee baar bheyj kar qaasid:
Dar pai haazir hun: kyaa patah, ki, kab bulaaougey?

Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!
Dour-e-ulfat hai: kab talak wahi duhraaougey?

Saath taahashra raheygaa, yeh zarooree to nahin!
Kab talak saath ho, yeh bhi nahin bataaougey?

Ruk bhi jaayegaa agar chaand, to, kitney lamahey?
Magrabee jaw mein kahaan par patah lagaaougey?

Tamaam dar khuley hain dil key, na jaaney kab sey:
Khadey rahogey door, yaa qadam badhhaaougey?

Abra ney aa, chhupaa liyaa hai chaand seeney mein:
Rukey rahogey, ki, baahoun mein aa samaaougey?

Sadaayen laakh zeyhan mein panaah leyteen hain?
Gazal hai muntazir 'abd' kee: kab sunaaougey?

- abd bundeli


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Matrix Guy

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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2010, 12:59:10 PM »

marvelous .........superb at peak point...maja aa gaya.....

few lines for ur poetry......

itna sata chuke ho ab aur kitna sataogey
jo ho gaya me supurd-e-khak to fir kise rulaogey....

le koi faisla ki ab din bahot kam bache he zindagi ke
me chala gaya to fir saza aur kise sunaogey


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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2010, 02:20:10 PM »

bht khuub gazal kahi hai aapne abdbundeli ji....
har lafz dard ka darpan.....
koi kitna bebas ho jata hai pyaar me.....hmmm


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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2010, 02:22:33 PM »

Quote from: Matrix Guy on August 16, 2010, 12:59:10 PM

matrix ji......

ye kehke aapne fir aaj dil k taar jahnjhana diye
bhulna chahte hain jo gum wo yaad dila diye

jante ho tum k tum bin ab mera jeena nahin ho sakta
fir kyun aisa kehke tum ne fir mujhe khun k ansu rula diye.


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2010, 09:47:46 PM »

Abdbundeli Sahab AadaaB.......
Aapki Gazal padhkar padhta hi rah gaya tamaam khayaal aur jahaaN ka husn o saluk samjha gayi aapki gazal.... Masha Allah Daad Hazir hai janab....

Ummid hai aage bhi aapko padhne ka sharf hasil hoga...

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez......


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abdbundeli

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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 04:42:47 AM »

Quote from: Matrix Guy on August 16, 2010, 12:59:10 PM

Bahut achchhey, 'Matrix Guy' ji! Thanks a lot!

Mein inheen laainoun ko shaayad kuchh yuun likhtaa:

Itnaa sataa chukey ho, lo kitnaa sataaogey?
Karkey supurd-e-khaak, phir kisey rulaaogey?
Lo koyi faislaa, ki, zindagi key din hain kam;
Mein jaa chukoongaa, to sazaa kisey sunaaougey?

WOH aapko khush rakhey! Aabaad rakhey!

- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #6 on: August 17, 2010, 04:49:20 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 16, 2010, 02:20:10 PM

bht khuub gazal kahi hai aapne abdbundeli ji....
har lafz dard ka darpan.....
koi kitna bebas ho jata hai pyaar me.....hmmm

*KasaK* ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah! Gazal ney aapkey 'sukumaar' dil ko 'chhuaa', to mujhey lagaa, 'lo, uskaa 'karm' pooraa huaa'!

- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Maantaa huun, ki, khataa mujhsey ho gayee hogee!

«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2010, 04:53:18 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 16, 2010, 09:47:46 PM

ParwaaZ ji, Namaskaar! Aur, buhut-bahut shukriyah!
Gazal aapko 'pyaaree' lagee: aur yuun samajhiye, ki, wo 'dhanya' ho gayee!

- abd bundeli


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