Maazi Ki Yaadein "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 17, 2010, 09:04:59 AM
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Laakh Koshishe Karlo Par,
Guzra Hua Pal kabhi Vaapas Aa Nahi Sakta...

Jo Lamhein Guzar Gaye So Guzar Gaye
Unn Lamkho ko Phir Se Koi Paa nahi Sakta...

Maazi Ki Yaadein Mehfooz Hai Iss Dil Mein
Qaid hai jo Shaks In yaadon mein woh kahi Jaa nahi sakta

Gham Aur Khushi Zindagi ke Do Eham Pehlu Hai
Apne Mutaabik Zindagi ko Kisi Tehraao Par Koi Laa Nahi Sakta

"Khwaish"  Jis Ki Soch Aur Jiska Imaan Nek Ho,
Uss Shaks Par koi Sitam Dhaa Nahi Sakta

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2010, 09:07:00 AM »
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Nice work Khwaish Saheb........
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2010, 10:02:18 AM »
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Wah wah Khwaish ji bahot achhi creation hai. Haqeeqat likhi hai aapne. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2010, 11:28:16 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Dost..apne mere dil ki baat likhi hai...apke kalamon main mujhe apna sa lagta hai..dil tak ponchti hai baat...bahaut khoob...
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2010, 07:42:17 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 17, 2010, 09:04:59 AM
Laakh Koshishe Karlo Par,
Guzra Hua Pal kabhi Vaapas Aa Nahi Sakta...

Jo Lamhein Guzar Gaye So Guzar Gaye
Unn Lamkho ko Phir Se Koi Paa nahi Sakta...

Maazi Ki Yaadein Mehfooz Hai Iss Dil Mein
Qaid hai jo Shaks In yaadon mein woh kahi Jaa nahi sakta

Gham Aur Khushi Zindagi ke Do Eham Pehlu Hai
Apne Mutaabik Zindagi ko Kisi Tehraao Par Koi Laa Nahi Sakta

"Khwaish"  Jis Ki Soch Aur Jiska Imaan Nek Ho,
Uss Shaks Par koi Sitam Dhaa Nahi Sakta

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

bahut khub

ho na jaaye dukhi kahi mere gum se wo
chaha kar bhi apna dard bata nahi sakta

chahta hu unhe mei khud se bhi jyada
chahakar bhi unhe mei pa nahi sakta
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2010, 10:51:56 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2010, 05:47:30 AM »
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Wah Khwaish Ji,
khubsurat wording and achchhe khayalat ka combination hai aapki ye ghazal.  Very nice.
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 17, 2010, 09:07:00 AM
Nice work Khwaish Saheb........

Shukriya Sajid Bhai
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Quote from: riyaz106 on June 17, 2010, 10:02:18 AM
Wah wah Khwaish ji bahot achhi creation hai. Haqeeqat likhi hai aapne. Daad hazir hai.

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Riyaz Bhai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2010, 11:19:37 AM »
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very nice khwaishji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

gujre hue pal na wapas aayen to achha.
na jaane kitne aasman hain ek ye hi nahin achha.

aane do naye ehsaas aane do naye pyar wale pal.
kyun hum samjhen guzre palon ko hi khoobsurat pal.

Quote from: khwaish on June 17, 2010, 09:04:59 AM
Laakh Koshishe Karlo Par,
Guzra Hua Pal kabhi Vaapas Aa Nahi Sakta...

Jo Lamhein Guzar Gaye So Guzar Gaye
Unn Lamkho ko Phir Se Koi Paa nahi Sakta...

Maazi Ki Yaadein Mehfooz Hai Iss Dil Mein
Qaid hai jo Shaks In yaadon mein woh kahi Jaa nahi sakta

Gham Aur Khushi Zindagi ke Do Eham Pehlu Hai
Apne Mutaabik Zindagi ko Kisi Tehraao Par Koi Laa Nahi Sakta

"Khwaish"  Jis Ki Soch Aur Jiska Imaan Nek Ho,
Uss Shaks Par koi Sitam Dhaa Nahi Sakta

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2010, 01:15:25 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 17, 2010, 09:04:59 AM
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Laakh Koshishe Karlo Par,
Guzra Hua Pal kabhi Vaapas Aa Nahi Sakta...

Jo Lamhein Guzar Gaye So Guzar Gaye
Unn Lamkho ko Phir Se Koi Paa nahi Sakta...

Maazi Ki Yaadein Mehfooz Hai Iss Dil Mein
Qaid hai jo Shaks In yaadon mein woh kahi Jaa nahi sakta

Gham Aur Khushi Zindagi ke Do Eham Pehlu Hai
Apne Mutaabik Zindagi ko Kisi Tehraao Par Koi Laa Nahi Sakta

"Khwaish"  Jis Ki Soch Aur Jiska Imaan Nek Ho,
Uss Shaks Par koi Sitam Dhaa Nahi Sakta

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Khwaish ji! Bahut hi saaf-suthrey alfaaz mein aapney insaanee zindagee mein 'optimism' wa waqaar-e-neykneeyatee ki bulandiyoun ki ore ishaarah kiyaa hai! Bahut khoob!

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2010, 01:25:29 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 17, 2010, 09:04:59 AM
Laakh Koshishe Karlo Par,
Guzra Hua Pal kabhi Vaapas Aa Nahi Sakta...

Jo Lamhein Guzar Gaye So Guzar Gaye
Unn Lamkho ko Phir Se Koi Paa nahi Sakta...

Maazi Ki Yaadein Mehfooz Hai Iss Dil Mein
Qaid hai jo Shaks In yaadon mein woh kahi Jaa nahi sakta

Gham Aur Khushi Zindagi ke Do Eham Pehlu Hai
Apne Mutaabik Zindagi ko Kisi Tehraao Par Koi Laa Nahi Sakta

"Khwaish"  Jis Ki Soch Aur Jiska Imaan Nek Ho,
Uss Shaks Par koi Sitam Dhaa Nahi Sakta

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Wah Khawish Saheb , Bahoth qoob , Taqir ke liye mazrath , Aaj Kal zara Masroof hon , Apki Khawish pasand aai , Apke kya kahene hain saheb , Hamesha hi lajwab kahete ho , Zoor a qalam aur ziyada .. Allah tumhe hamesha khush rakhe ..


Apka bhai

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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2010, 07:50:32 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 28, 2010, 02:34:17 PM »
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Nice work khwaish sahab..............likhte rahiye


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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2010, 06:48:19 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 17, 2010, 09:04:59 AM
Laakh Koshishe Karlo Par,
Guzra Hua Pal kabhi Vaapas Aa Nahi Sakta...

Jo Lamhein Guzar Gaye So Guzar Gaye
Unn Lamkho ko Phir Se Koi Paa nahi Sakta...

Maazi Ki Yaadein Mehfooz Hai Iss Dil Mein
Qaid hai jo Shaks In yaadon mein woh kahi Jaa nahi sakta

Gham Aur Khushi Zindagi ke Do Eham Pehlu Hai
Apne Mutaabik Zindagi ko Kisi Tehraao Par Koi Laa Nahi Sakta

"Khwaish"  Jis Ki Soch Aur Jiska Imaan Nek Ho,
Uss Shaks Par koi Sitam Dhaa Nahi Sakta

          ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

good khawaish ji
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