Magar, tifloun ko, insaan khud saleeboun par sulaataa hai!

by abdbundeli on July 28, 2009, 06:30:44 PM
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Sadaa-e-dil, koyi baithaa kaheen, suntaa-sunaataa hai!
Sunaa hai mahfiloun mein, hamaaraa bhi zikr aataa hai!!

Yahaan sey, eik chulloo sharbat-e-kousar ki khaatir, ham
Wahaan hain: nahin paataa lout, jo bhee wahaan jaataa hai!!

Qasam ley lo, naheen pee tab sey, jab sey tum nahin saaqee!
Kayee hain, jinhain, jab-tab doosraa saaqee pilaataa hai!!

Yahaan hain baag laakhoun: kyoun na laakhoun baagbaan bhi hon?
Uqaab aa, aashiyaan bulbul key pahloo mein banaataa hai!

Naye gulbun key gunchoun ko, naheen chhootaa hai gulcheen bhee;
Magar, tifloun ko, insaan khud saleeboun par sulaataa hai!

Kahaan jaaougey batlaaou, wafaa sey beywafaayee kar?
Tumhaarey darbdar qadamoun ka gam aa-aa sataataa hai!

Hawaa hotee rawaan jiskey liye, har simt, har lamahey:
Wahee aa, bulbuloun ko, andleeboun sey milaataa hai!

Ye duniyaa hai, yahaan koyee akeylaa ho naheen saktaa;
Abhi bhi saath deyney ko 'abd' zindah hai, gaataa hai!

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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2009, 07:00:51 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Adb Saheb ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2009, 07:19:19 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.beautiful gazal.
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2009, 08:57:25 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 29, 2009, 07:00:51 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Adb Saheb ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2009, 08:58:15 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 29, 2009, 07:19:19 AM
Wah wah Abd ji,very nice and wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.beautiful gazal.
Thanks a lot, Madh ji!
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2009, 11:12:28 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 29, 2009, 09:50:04 AM
Applause Applause Applause

bahot khoob likha hai Abd ji,

hamesha ki tarah behad asardaar ashaar,awesome
Thanks a lot,@kaash ji!
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2009, 11:01:36 AM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal Babu Ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2009, 11:08:45 AM »
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bhai bahut hi achchi ghazal hai is k liye kya kahoon kya taareef karoon sab bekaar hai ..hats off to u brother
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2009, 12:00:30 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 30, 2009, 11:01:36 AM
Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal Babu Ji
Thanks a lot, Celmira ji!
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2009, 12:02:57 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on July 30, 2009, 11:08:45 AM
bhai bahut hi achchi ghazal hai is k liye kya kahoon kya taareef karoon sab bekaar hai ..hats off to u brother
Thanks a lot, Saahil ji!
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2009, 02:33:01 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Uncle ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 31, 2009, 02:35:13 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 31, 2009, 02:33:01 PM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne Uncle ji
Thanks Roja!
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2009, 03:19:48 PM »
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Awesome ABD ji .. waah Waah kya Khoobsoorat Ghazal likha hai .. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2009, 03:30:26 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 31, 2009, 03:19:48 PM
Awesome ABD ji .. waah Waah kya Khoobsoorat Ghazal likha hai .. Bahoot khoob!
Thanks a lot Sophi!
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