magroor.......A.B

by adil bechain on April 05, 2011, 11:31:07 AM
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                       khuloos mera hamesha mujh se doooor rahaa.,
                       na jaane kyon wo itna magroor rahaa,

                       nahin thaa baaqi paas, kuch khush hone ko,
                       kahaan se usme phir itna suroor rahaa,

                      
                       thi her cheez mehfooz ashiyaane mein uske,
                       na jaane kyon phir wo itna majboor rahaa,


                       tha khatakaar wo, baad maut ke  maaloom hua,
                       nigaah-e-munsif mein kaise itna be-kasoor rahaa,


                       guzri umr saari gumnaami mein bechain.!
                       her gali mein  kaise itna mashoor rahaa.
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2011, 01:38:40 PM »
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adil ji.…
apki nagme uff kamaal dha rhi hain.
ye ghazal superb hai…
apki tarif me shabd nahi mere pass.
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2011, 04:06:55 PM »
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bht khoob adil ji...
lasr sher bht bht accha laga mujhe..
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2011, 06:17:40 PM »
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Bahut Khub AB JI
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2011, 03:24:29 AM »
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bahut khub ABji.... badiya...

daad....
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2011, 08:35:48 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Adilji..

Huemsha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!!

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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2011, 09:48:47 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 05, 2011, 12:36:16 PM
Bahut Khub Adil Saheb...

Shad o Aabad ahiye...

~Shihab~

thank you shihab ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2011, 10:11:36 AM »
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adil ji.…
apki nagme uff kamaal dha rhi hain.
ye ghazal superb hai…
apki tarif me shabd nahi mere pass.

thank u nirala ji
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on April 05, 2011, 04:06:55 PM
bht khoob adil ji...
lasr sher bht bht accha laga mujhe..


thank you manzil ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2011, 10:32:03 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on April 05, 2011, 11:31:07 AM


                       khuloos mera hamesha mujh se doooor rahaa.,
                       na jaane kyon wo itna magroor rahaa,

                       nahin thaa baaqi kuch paas khush hone ko,
                       kahaan se usme phir itna suroor rahaa,

                       
                       thi her cheez mehfooz ashiyaane mein uske,
                       na jaane kyon phir wo itna majboor rahaa,


                       tha khatakaar wo baad maut ke  maaloom hua,
                       nigaah-e-munsif mein kaise itna be-kasoor rahaa,


                       guzri umr saari gumnaami mein bechain.!
                       her gali mein  kaise itna mashoor rahaa.

Bahut Khoob .... adil bechain Ji !

behad asardaar rahe sabhi ashaar ... adaayegi aur rawaangi bhi acchi lagi hume ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2011, 10:00:45 AM »
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Bahut Khoob .... adil bechain Ji !

behad asardaar rahe sabhi ashaar ... adaayegi aur rawaangi bhi acchi lagi hume ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaoN ke saath ... !

thank you anshu ji
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Quote from: khwaish on April 06, 2011, 08:35:48 AM
Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Adilji..

Huemsha Ki Tarah Lajawaab!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2011, 07:26:04 AM »
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Achchhi kaawish hai adil bechain ji aapki, paRhkar kaafi mehzooz hua. Daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)

Quote from: adil bechain on April 05, 2011, 11:31:07 AM


                       khuloos mera hamesha mujh se doooor rahaa.,
                       na jaane kyon wo itna magroor rahaa,

                       nahin thaa baaqi paas, kuch khush hone ko,
                       kahaan se usme phir itna suroor rahaa,

                       
                       thi her cheez mehfooz ashiyaane mein uske,
                       na jaane kyon phir wo itna majboor rahaa,


                       tha khatakaar wo, baad maut ke  maaloom hua,
                       nigaah-e-munsif mein kaise itna be-kasoor rahaa,


                       guzri umr saari gumnaami mein bechain.!
                       her gali mein  kaise itna mashoor rahaa.
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Quote from: waquif ansari on May 05, 2011, 07:26:04 AM
Achchhi kaawish hai adil bechain ji aapki, paRhkar kaafi mehzooz hua. Daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)



thank you waquif sahab
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Quote from: manjum on April 06, 2011, 03:24:29 AM
bahut khub ABji.... badiya...

daad....

thank you
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