Mahak, hawaa mein abhi bhi hai, unki saansoun ki!

by abdbundeli on February 18, 2010, 11:44:36 AM
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Bhaley hi, phool khileyn, yaa na khileyn, jhar jaayen!
Khizaan parast bahaareyn na lout kar aayen!!

Guzar rahaa hun galee sey piyakkarhoun kee mein:
Shak hai mujhko, kaheen qadam na larhkharhaa jaayen?

Kisee ney maykadey mein, phir, mujhey bulaayaa hai;
Dost batlaayen hamain, kyoun na ham wahaan jaayen?

Hamain patah hai baarahaa khizaan ko aanaa hai:
Harz kyaa, jaam bahaaroun key pee liye jaayen?

Sataaye khoob zamaanh, ki, tum bhi mat chooko!
Kaash, is dour key pahiley hi ham guzar jaayen?

Farq kyaa hai, ki, safar chaar din mein ho pooraa?
Safar, safar hai: bhalaa, kyoun idhar-udhar jaayen?

Mahak, hawaa mein abhi bhi hai, unki saansoun ki;
Saaqiyah, khoob pilaa dey, ki, wahee yaad aayen!!

Unsey milney key ba'ad, ham kahin na jaayengey:
Unko rahnaa ho, raheyn; yaaki, lout kar jaayen!

Ham safeenah hai, 'abd', saaqiyah binaa teyrey:
Jee mein aataa hai, beech bahar mein utar jaayen!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2010, 11:40:39 AM »
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bahut khoob abdji.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2010, 12:22:04 PM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on February 19, 2010, 11:40:39 AM
bahut khoob abdji.....

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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2010, 12:58:25 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 18, 2010, 11:44:36 AM

Bhaley hi, phool khileyn, yaa na khileyn, jhar jaayen!
Khizaan parast bahaareyn na lout kar aayen!!

Guzar rahaa hun galee sey piyakkarhoun kee mein:
Shak hai mujhko, kaheen qadam na larhkharhaa jaayen?

Kisee ney maykadey mein, phir, mujhey bulaayaa hai;
Dost batlaayen hamain, kyoun na ham wahaan jaayen?

Hamain patah hai baarahaa khizaan ko aanaa hai:
Harz kyaa, jaam bahaaroun key pee liye jaayen?

Sataaye khoob zamaanh, ki, tum bhi mat chooko!
Kaash, is dour key pahiley hi ham guzar jaayen?

Farq kyaa hai, ki, safar chaar din mein ho pooraa?
Safar, safar hai: bhalaa, kyoun idhar-udhar jaayen?

Mahak, hawaa mein abhi bhi hai, unki saansoun ki;
Saaqiyah, khoob pilaa dey, ki, wahee yaad aayen!!

Unsey milney key ba'ad, ham kahin na jaayengey:
Unko rahnaa ho, raheyn; yaaki, lout kar jaayen!

Ham safeenah hai, 'abd', saaqiyah binaa teyrey:
Jee mein aataa hai, beech bahar mein utar jaayen!!

                              - abd bundeli


Bohot hi umdah aur khoobsurat ghazal Babu Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2010, 01:12:09 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 19, 2010, 12:58:25 PM
Bohot hi umdah aur khoobsurat ghazal Babu Ji

Thanks a lot, celmira ji!

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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2010, 01:14:10 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 20, 2010, 10:07:42 AM
bahut khoob likha hai Abd ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah, @kaash ji!

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«Reply #6 on: February 20, 2010, 01:22:58 PM »
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WAH WAH KYA IRAADA HAI.KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2010, 06:14:54 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 20, 2010, 01:22:58 PM
WAH WAH KYA IRAADA HAI.KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, SURESH SANGWAN ji!

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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2010, 11:45:56 AM »
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Hamain patah hai baarahaa khizaan ko aanaa hai:
Harz kyaa, jaam bahaaroun key pee liye jaayen?

Sataaye khoob zamaanh, ki, tum bhi mat chooko!
Kaash, is dour key pahiley hi ham guzar jaayen?

Wah wah bahut bahut khoob  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2010, 06:33:20 AM »
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Quote from: malli on February 21, 2010, 11:45:56 AM

Wah wah bahut bahut khoob  Applause

Thanks a lot, 'malli' ji!

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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2010, 06:44:51 AM »
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Kaash, is dour key pahiley hi ham guzar jaayen?
Jab Woh  Nazar Hum Se Chura k Raah Badal Jayein
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2010, 01:28:35 PM »
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Quote from: Fakhar e Naveed on February 22, 2010, 06:44:51 AM
Kaash, is dour key pahiley hi ham guzar jaayen?
Jab Woh  Nazar Hum Se Chura k Raah Badal Jayein

Kaash wo lot apney ghar aayen!
Kaash yeh ghaaw-o-qasb bhar jaayen!
Kaash unkee mahaktee zulfoun key
Narm saayey mein abra itraayen!!

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«Reply #12 on: February 22, 2010, 01:55:15 PM »
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Ati sunder lajawaab Gazal hai aap ki....Bundeliji... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: abdbundeli on February 18, 2010, 11:44:36 AM

Bhaley hi, phool khileyn, yaa na khileyn, jhar jaayen!
Khizaan parast bahaareyn na lout kar aayen!!

Guzar rahaa hun galee sey piyakkarhoun kee mein:
Shak hai mujhko, kaheen qadam na larhkharhaa jaayen?

Kisee ney maykadey mein, phir, mujhey bulaayaa hai;
Dost batlaayen hamain, kyoun na ham wahaan jaayen?

Hamain patah hai baarahaa khizaan ko aanaa hai:
Harz kyaa, jaam bahaaroun key pee liye jaayen?

Sataaye khoob zamaanh, ki, tum bhi mat chooko!
Kaash, is dour key pahiley hi ham guzar jaayen?

Farq kyaa hai, ki, safar chaar din mein ho pooraa?
Safar, safar hai: bhalaa, kyoun idhar-udhar jaayen?

Mahak, hawaa mein abhi bhi hai, unki saansoun ki;
Saaqiyah, khoob pilaa dey, ki, wahee yaad aayen!!

Unsey milney key ba'ad, ham kahin na jaayengey:
Unko rahnaa ho, raheyn; yaaki, lout kar jaayen!

Ham safeenah hai, 'abd', saaqiyah binaa teyrey:
Jee mein aataa hai, beech bahar mein utar jaayen!!

                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: February 22, 2010, 02:14:02 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   ADB JI.......

PILA ITNA SAAQIYA KE WO PHIR AAJ YAAD AAJAAYE
YAAD AAJAAYE  UNKE SAATH GUJARE HUE RAATON KI
MAHAK HAWAA MEIN ABHI BHI HAI,UNKI SAANSON KI
DIL MEIN ASAR HO RAHI HAI ABHI BHI UNKI BAATON KI....
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2010, 02:19:59 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 22, 2010, 01:55:15 PM
Ati sunder lajawaab Gazal hai aap ki....Bundeliji... Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanks a lot, KOYAL46 ji!

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