Mahaz do pal ki to thi zindagi....premdeep

by premdeep on August 05, 2013, 05:53:36 PM
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Mahaz do pal ki  to thi zindagi
phurr se udh gayi jo thi zindagi

Log to kayi  mile is  raah mein
Bas tum hi se to  thi  zindagi

Hosh mein nibhaya tha sath hardum
Ek aise bewafa hi to thi zindagi

kabhi gam deti to kabhi khushiyan
Har bar kuch nayi si to thi zindagi

Tera sath tha jo mere sath har pal
Jitni bhi mili kam si to thi zindagi

Meri nazarein kyu tujhe dekh nahin payi
Door kahan bas paas hi to thi zindagi  
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2013, 05:56:03 PM »
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bahut khoob paramdeep ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2013, 06:04:57 PM »
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waaaaaaaaah bahut achcha likhe ho premdeep ji. sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek hai. mujhe aapki yeh peshkash bahut pasand aayi. hazaron hazaron dili daad is khoobsurat kalam par. aage bhi likte rahiye. bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2013, 06:50:11 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on August 05, 2013, 05:53:36 PM
Mahaz do pal ki  to thi zindagi
phurr se udh gayi jo thi zindagi

Log to kayi  mile is  raah mein
Bas tum hi se to  thi  zindagi

Hosh mein nibhaya tha sath hardum
Ek aise bewafa hi to thi zindagi

kabhi gam deti to kabhi khushiyan
Har bar kuch nayi si to thi zindagi

Tera sath tha jo mere sath har pal
Jitni bhi mili kam si to thi zindagi

Meri nazarein kyu tujhe dekh nahin payi
Door kahan bas paas hi to thi zindagi 



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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2013, 08:33:38 PM »
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khubsurat umda bahut hee badhiya premdeep ji... hazaron dilii daad o mubarakbaad qabul farmayein.....

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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2013, 10:11:40 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2013, 11:56:04 PM »
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phurr se udd gayi jo thi zindagi, bahut ahche saaheb, yuNhi likhte raheN aap aage bhi...
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2013, 05:09:19 AM »
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Mahaz do pal ki  to thi zindagi
phurr se udh gayi jo thi zindagi
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Log to kayi  mile is  raah mein
Bas tum hi se to  thi  zindagi
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Hosh mein nibhaya tha sath hardum
Ek aise bewafa hi to thi zindagi
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kabhi gam deti to kabhi khushiyan
Har bar kuch nayi si to thi zindagi
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Tera sath tha jo mere sath har pal
Jitni bhi mili kam si to thi zindagi
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Meri nazarein kyu tujhe dekh nahin payi
Door kahan bas paas hi to thi zindagi  
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bahut khoob..!
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2013, 06:03:37 AM »
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Shandar, bahot khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2013, 06:53:28 PM »
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thanks sabhi ko hausala afzai ke liye
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bahut khoob likha hai apne Premdeep ji.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2013, 05:24:17 PM »
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