MAHSOOS... .....AB

by adil bechain on November 14, 2009, 01:00:45 PM
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                             MEREY CHEHREY KI YAHAAN KOI TASWEER NAHIN,
                             MEREY KHAWABON KI YAHAAN KOI TABEER NAHIN,
                    
                             ISS QADAR DHOKA DIYA HAI MUJHEY RISHTON NEY,
                             HAQEEQAT PER BHI  MERI ABB KOI NAZAR NAHIN,

                             LOOT  JAAYE SAAMAAN TO TU GHUM NA KAR,
                             HAI SALAMAT IZZAT TERI TO KOI FIKR  NAHIN,

                             SAAHAS DIKAA APNI JAHAAN ZAROORAT HAI ISKI,
                             TAAQAT KI UOON NUMAAISH KI KOI QADR  NAHIN,

                             BAHUT SOCH KAR RAKHTA HOON QADAM RAAH MAIN,
                             HO BINAA MAQSAD JO HAASIL TO KOI FAKHR  NAHIN,

                             UNHAIN YE ROSHNI BUSS NAHIN MUJHEY CHIRAG KAFI HAI,
                             HAUSLA BULAND HAI TO TARIKION SEY KOI DARR NAHIN,

                             YE APNAA TAREQAA HAI ZINDAGI GUZARNEY KA BECHAIN,
                             JALDI MAIN HUYE FAISLEY PER AKSAR  KOI KHAIR NAHIN.!
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2009, 06:18:06 AM »
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Nice Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2009, 01:30:34 PM »
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Nice Applause


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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2009, 08:30:13 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2009, 09:54:30 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2009, 10:25:01 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on November 14, 2009, 01:00:45 PM

                             MEREY CHEHREY KI YAHAAN KOI TASWEER NAHIN,
                             MEREY KHAWABON KI YAHAAN KOI TABEER NAHIN,
                     
                             ISS QADAR DHOKA DIYA HAI MUJHEY RISHTON NEY,
                             APNEY SAAYE PER BHI MUJHEY ABB YAQEEN NAHIN,

                             KOI LOOT LEY JAYE SAAMAAN TO TU FIKR NA KAR,
                             HAI SALAMAT WAJOOD TO KISI BAAT KA GHUM NAHIN,

                             SAAHAS DIKAA APNI JAHAAN ZAROORAT HAI ISKI,
                             APNEY TAAQAT KI UOON NUMAAISH ACHCHI NAHIN,

                             BAHUT SOCH KAR RAKHTA HOON QADAM RAAH MAIN,
                             AAG TO DOOR DHUAN BHI UTHEY UDHAR JATAA NAHIN,

                             UNHAIN YE ROSHNI BUSS NAHIN MUJHEY CHIRAG KAFI HAI,
                             HAUSLA GAR BULAND HAI TO TARIKION SEY DARR NAHIN,

                             YE APNAA TAREQAA HAI ZINDAGI GUZARNEY KA BECHAIN,
                             JAZBAAT MAIN KABHI MAIN APNEY HOSH KO KHOTA NAHIN...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2009, 10:46:43 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2010, 03:37:42 AM »
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Nice one Adil Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2010, 06:16:41 PM »
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Nice one Adil Ji

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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2010, 06:32:49 PM »
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Adil Saheb aapka PM mila mujhe khushi hui ke aap khush huye.....waise jaha tak is kalam ki baat hai Aapka Matla bohat khoobsurat hai........par agar aap gaur kare to aapko bhi ehsas hoga ke aapka Qafiya matle ke baad se hi badal gaya aur phir har sher me badalta raha.......

Aapke ehsas yaqeenan khoobsurat hai aur baki bato par aap mehnat kare phir dekhe kya khoob nikhaar aata hai aapke kalam me.
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2010, 07:21:28 PM »
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Bahut Khub Adil Ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2010, 08:40:52 PM »
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Quote from: Nafseeyati_Mareez on April 11, 2010, 06:32:49 PM
Adil Saheb aapka PM mila mujhe khushi hui ke aap khush huye.....waise jaha tak is kalam ki baat hai Aapka Matla bohat khoobsurat hai........par agar aap gaur kare to aapko bhi ehsas hoga ke aapka Qafiya matle ke baad se hi badal gaya aur phir har sher me badalta raha.......

Aapke ehsas yaqeenan khoobsurat hai aur baki bato par aap mehnat kare phir dekhe kya khoob nikhaar aata hai aapke kalam me.

shukriya mareez sahab, main phir sey isey revise karney ki koshish karoon gaa....waisey urdu pey meri pakad kamzor hai....!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2010, 08:41:34 PM »
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