MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI:Ghazals

Taasir siddiqui

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Ya ellaahi muje mile raahat-o-sukun kaise;
main aadmi hun muje aaye naa junun kaise;

sar pe kafan na ho jabtlak paaun khoon rez na ho,
mere humdum nazar aaye tera raqs-e-fusun kaise;

uske shauq-e-sitam ne rakha hai mujko uske qareeb,
ab bataao main uske sitam ka shikwa karun kaise;

badi muddat ke baad woh ghaafil mila jo raah mein,
mujse puchne laga mere dil ka hau khoon kaise;

-------------still working on further ashaar...taasir siddiqui


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nirala

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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2011, 03:35:55 PM »

umda ghazal hai janaab taahir……

eagerly waiting for ur nxt aashar……

very gud job dear…
keep writing


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shiba

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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2011, 01:07:13 AM »

Good Job Taasir Ji


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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2011, 07:29:40 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!


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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2011, 08:47:30 AM »

Bahaut khoob Taasir jee..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2011, 12:42:30 PM »

Taseer Sahaab Aadaab Janab

Waah janab badi gehrai se bune hai sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.... Kafiyaa bada tuf use kiya hai aapne.. Ummid hai aap
use anjaam tak bhi khubi se pahuNchayeNge

Barhaal yeH sabhi ashaar khoob rahe Dil se daad hazir hai...

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez

Quote from: Taasir siddiqui on May 15, 2011, 03:30:03 PM

Ya ellaahi muje mile raahat-o-sukun kaise;
main aadmi hun muje aaye naa junun kaise;

Kia gazab ki baat kahi hai janab daad bahut gehri kahi daad daad daad

sar pe kafan na ho jabtlak paaun khoon rez na ho,
mere humdum nazar aaye tera raqs-e-fusun kaise;

Achcha sher hai janab daad

uske shauq-e-sitam ne rakha hai mujko uske qareeb,
ab bataao main uske sitam ka shikwa karun kaise;

Waah janab waah daad daad daad

badi muddat ke baad woh ghaafil mila jo raah mein,
mujse puchne laga mere dil ka haal kahoon kaise;

Bahut khoob Janab daad daad daad

-------------still working on further ashaar...taasir siddiqui


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Taasir siddiqui

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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2011, 02:22:20 PM »

SHUKRIYA AAP SAB HAZRAAT KA!


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manjum

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Re: MAIN AADMI HUN----------TAASIR SIDDIQUI

«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2011, 05:09:04 AM »

bahut khub taasirji....

Applause


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