Main Akela Khada Gungunata Raha

by drpandey on January 16, 2010, 09:19:40 PM
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Main akela khada gungunata raha!
Main akela khada gungunata raha!!
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Bhor hoti rahi, sham aati rahi,
Phir bhi dastak na koi hui dwar par,
Main akela khada swapn bunta raha,
Khud hi kahta raha khud hi sunta raha,
Roj ruk kar yahin aasman ke tale,
Chand taron ki mahfil sajata raha.!!Main..!!

Prat ki ek sunahri kiran ke liye,
Roj marta raha, rog jeeta raha,
Zindgi mein abhaon ke har mod par,
Gir ke uthta raha, uthke girta raha,
Baanh mein bhar ke duniya ke saare chalan,
Apne haathon pe sarso ugata raha.!!Main..!!

Hamne deepak jalaye bahut se magar,
Phir bhi tam na ye manas patal ka gaya,
Waqat duniya ke sir ko kuchalta raha,
Aah bharta raha dard sahta raha,
Man ke shishe pe faili parat dhool ki,
Bas hatata raha aur hatata raha.!!Main..!!

Dr HP Pandey
Allahabad

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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2010, 10:21:41 PM »
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Wah great creation Pandey ji,bahut hi khoobsurat gazal likha aapne,very touching. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2010, 02:34:37 AM »
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Wah Pandey ji ati uttam rachna hai. Sadhuwaad.
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2010, 09:10:29 AM »
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bahot umda likha he....
keep it up.... icon_thumleft
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2010, 10:37:43 PM »
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Bahut ACchi Hai
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drpandey
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2010, 03:47:14 AM »
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 Thankyou ! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2010, 11:15:18 AM »
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Beautifully Written Dr ji.. Bahoot Khoob .. Yuhin Mehfil Mea likhte Rahiyega...
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2010, 11:53:13 AM »
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 Thankyou ! Hats off to you!
Shayad meri Nazm "Intzar Karo" aapko pasand aayegi....
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2010, 07:46:24 AM »
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Bahut Khub Pandey Ji
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