MAIN BHI FANKAAR HOON .................... HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 13, 2013, 09:45:18 PM
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«Reply #30 on: December 16, 2013, 10:23:00 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir bahut khoob.
thanks , iftakhar saheb.
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«Reply #31 on: December 17, 2013, 01:58:54 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks , Miraj saheb , nawazish.
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«Reply #32 on: December 17, 2013, 03:59:17 AM »
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Hasan sahib, aapka reply talash  kar reha hoon, na janay kahan ghaib ho gaya?
behar haal, shayad aap apne is shair kee baat kar rehay the?



Bechta  ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN


Yehan BECHTA ke aagay Hoon hona chahiye tha taake jumla mukammal ho sakta laikin apne wazan milane kee gharaz se usse chor diya ...jis se se misra zaeef ya   grammar ke lehaaz se ghalat  ho gaya!!

aap BECHTA  kee bajaye BECH KAR  laga detaY tu SYNTax  per poora utarta...

Is sher ko yoon parh kar dekhiye...
Bech kar   ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN
 ya
mujh ko daawa he ke main bhi saheb e kirdaar hoon!!


WaSalam!!
mazhur
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«Reply #33 on: December 17, 2013, 09:45:35 AM »
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वाह....वाह....हसन जी..कमाल की पेशकश.....ढेरों दाद....आप छोटे मोटे नहीं बहुत बड़े फ़नकार हैं...

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baht bht  shukriya aur duAein
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«Reply #34 on: December 17, 2013, 01:19:01 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Har sher lazawaab hai.Is ghazal ki tareef jitnee ki jaaye kam hai.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

                                                                                 
Sudhir ji  , Bahut shukriya aap ne ashaar pasand kiye
aur Housla afzai ki .Bahut duaaein .
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«Reply #35 on: December 17, 2013, 04:55:41 PM »
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excellent,sir with rau
thanks,mb Ji . Khush rahye .
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«Reply #36 on: December 17, 2013, 10:06:27 PM »
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Thanks sumanji
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«Reply #37 on: December 18, 2013, 03:38:53 PM »
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WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB ,LAJWAAB hASAN SAHAB

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

shuker hai ap jaise fankaar bhi is bazm mein hain .

shukriya , bahut bahut  duaaein,sahal sahb.
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«Reply #38 on: December 19, 2013, 12:29:46 PM »
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waah .... Khoobsurat aur asardaar aashaar rahe Hasan sahab !!! Ek dum saaf aur  Dhaar rakhte huwe !!! Dheron daad aap ko !!
zarra sb . Adab ., ,mashkoor hoon ki aap he ghazal paaand ki aur hosla barhaya. Shaad rahye.
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«Reply #39 on: December 19, 2013, 02:16:59 PM »
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laajawaab peshkash hasan sahab.. behad umda aur khoobsurat Usual Smile Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley shukriya,duaaein.
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«Reply #40 on: December 19, 2013, 11:12:42 PM »
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wah waaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan ji
aap sachmuch fankaar hain
thanks and blessings
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«Reply #41 on: December 20, 2013, 12:28:51 AM »
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Teer  hoon , Talwar hoon , Patthar ka but  naa  Khaar  hooN
Paas  aao  ,  chhoo  ke dekho , main  mujassam   pyar  hooN

Bechta  ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN

Aadaab Sir
ye do ashaar behad khoob rahe.
main bhi fankaar hoon..kya baat hai
eik khaas andaaz hota hai aapki adaagi men..




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«Reply #42 on: December 20, 2013, 02:46:48 PM »
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Baradaram Siddiqui Sahib...

Teer  hoon , Talwar hoon , Patthar ka but  naa  Khaar  hooN
Paas  aao  ,  chhoo  ke dekho , main  mujassam   pyar  hooN

Bechta  ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN

Aapke ye dono asha'ar dobara nazar se guzray, ye waqaee ache
asha'ar hein. Albatta agar inhein yoon likha aur parha jaye tu sawaad do atisha ho sakta he!

Teer  hoon , Talwar hoon , Naa Sung Hoon  naa  Khaar  hooN
Paas  aao  ,  chhoo  ke dekho , main  mujassam   pyar  hooN
(yehan 'Pather ka buut' se zof e bayan  ka shaiba hota he)
Bechta  Hoon, hasb e aadat,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
ya....
Sale pe rakha he mein ne roz hee apna zameer

Ya phir..
Bechta hoon maslehatan roz hee apna zameer

Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN
(ye misra waqai bahut umda he.. mubarak qubool farmayiye.

zor e qalam aur ziyada
aapka mukhlis
Mazhur
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«Reply #43 on: December 22, 2013, 09:21:43 PM »
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Hasan sahib, aapka reply talash  kar reha hoon, na janay kahan ghaib ho gaya?
behar haal, shayad aap apne is shair kee baat kar rehay the?



Bechta  ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN


Yehan BECHTA ke aagay Hoon hona chahiye tha taake jumla mukammal ho sakta laikin apne wazan milane kee gharaz se usse chor diya ...jis se se misra zaeef ya   grammar ke lehaaz se ghalat  ho gaya!!

aap BECHTA  kee bajaye BECH KAR  laga detaY tu SYNTax  per poora utarta...

Is sher ko yoon parh kar dekhiye...
Bech kar   ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN
 ya
mujh ko daawa he ke main bhi saheb e kirdaar hoon!!


WaSalam!!
mazhur
reply ooper hai.phir bhi salaah aur nacheez k ilm mein izaafe k liye shukriya.
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«Reply #44 on: December 23, 2013, 02:34:31 AM »
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Teer  hoon , Talwar hoon , Patthar ka but  naa  Khaar  hooN
Paas  aao  ,  chhoo  ke dekho , main  mujassam   pyar  hooN

Bechta  ,  hasb - e - zaroorat ,    roz  hi   apna   Zameer
Phir   bhi   Daawa  hai mujhe  , main   Saheb-e-Kirdar  hooN

Aadaab Sir
ye do ashaar behad khoob rahe.
main bhi fankaar hoon..kya baat hai
eik khaas andaaz hota hai aapki adaagi men..





adab  mukesh Ji. Shukrguzar hoon  ki aapko ashaar pas and aaye.bahut  duaaein.
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