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बताऊँ क्यों अजीब हूँ
मैं शायर-ओ-अदीब हूँ

हैं आप मेरे हमसफ़र
मैं कितना खुशनसीब हूँ

मैं खुद से दूर हो गया
हुज़ूर से क़रीब हूँ

धनी हूँ बात का सनम
मैं आदमी ग़रीब हूँ

हयात के कफ़स में हूँ
मैं एक अन्दलीब हूँ

ओ जानेमन यक़ीन कर
फ़क़त तेरा हबीब हूँ

है तुझसे प्यार मुझको तू
समझ न मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ  

 ---सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

bataauN kyon ajeeb hooN
maiN shaayar-o-adeeb hooN

haiN aap mere hamsafar
maiN kitna khushnaseeb hooN

maiN khud se door ho gaya
huzoor se qareeb hooN

dhanee hooN baat ka sanam
main aadmee gareeb hooN

hayaat ke kafas meN hooN
maiN ek andaleeb hooN

o jaaneman yaqeen kar
faqat tera habeeb hooN

hai tujhse pyaar mujhko too
samajh na maiN 'Raqeeb' hooN
      
          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2011, 03:36:29 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Satish ji
Vajan hai is gajal me. ye apne aap me unique hai saadgi se bhari.
Best of luck. mai khud se door ho gaya aur dhani hu baat ka ....bahut acche, sacche aur khoobsurat ehsaas likhe hai apne.
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2011, 06:03:40 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
"हयात के कफ़स में हूँ
 मैं एक अन्दलीब हूँ"
   *      *      *
"मैं खुद से दूर हो गया
 हुज़ूर से क़रीब हूँ"
बहुत खूब | वाह-वाह |
-अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2011, 03:49:44 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai,satish ji.Aur kya behr dhoondh ke laaye hain.'Hayat ke qafas men hoon ; main ek andaleeb hoon'-iss sher ka jawab nahin.Bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2011, 05:23:37 AM »
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chhotee behar men bahut hee pukhtaa gazal pesh kee hai.dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2011, 11:26:02 AM »
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bht khoob satish ji...
sply 3rd one...
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2011, 12:29:24 PM »
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Satish Shukla saheb.bahut achhi ghazal hai.dili daad qabool kije.
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«Reply #7 on: November 05, 2011, 04:37:59 AM »
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mkv ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #8 on: November 05, 2011, 04:52:21 AM »
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Satish Ji Bahut Hi Khoob Gazal kahi hai

Har sher lajawab hai, Nubarak ho

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 05, 2011, 10:32:24 AM »
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Shihab Ji,

Shukriya janab, yoon hee saath
nibhate rahiye jo kuchh siyaah-suped
ban padega pesh karoonga.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #10 on: November 05, 2011, 11:29:39 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 03, 2011, 12:51:27 PM
बताऊँ क्यों अजीब हूँ
मैं शायर-ओ-अदीब हूँ

हैं आप मेरे हमसफ़र
मैं कितना खुशनसीब हूँ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

मैं खुद से दूर हो गया
हुज़ूर से क़रीब हूँ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

धनी हूँ बात का सनम
मैं आदमी ग़रीब हूँ

हयात के कफ़स में हूँ
मैं एक अन्दलीब हूँ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ओ जानेमन यक़ीन कर
फ़क़त तेरा हबीब हूँ Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

है तुझसे प्यार मुझको तू
समझ न मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 ---सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

bataauN kyon ajeeb hooN
maiN shaayar-o-adeeb hooN

haiN aap mere hamsafar
maiN kitna khushnaseeb hooN

maiN khud se door ho gaya
huzoor se qareeb hooN

dhanee hooN baat ka sanam
main aadmee gareeb hooN

hayaat ke kafas meN hooN
maiN ek andaleeb hooN

o jaaneman yaqeen kar
faqat tera habeeb hooN

hai tujhse pyaar mujhko too
samajh na maiN 'Raqeeb' hooN
       
          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #11 on: November 05, 2011, 10:48:52 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 03, 2011, 12:51:27 PM
बताऊँ क्यों अजीब हूँ
मैं शायर-ओ-अदीब हूँ

हैं आप मेरे हमसफ़र
मैं कितना खुशनसीब हूँ

मैं खुद से दूर हो गया
हुज़ूर से क़रीब हूँ

धनी हूँ बात का सनम
मैं आदमी ग़रीब हूँ

हयात के कफ़स में हूँ
मैं एक अन्दलीब हूँ

ओ जानेमन यक़ीन कर
फ़क़त तेरा हबीब हूँ

है तुझसे प्यार मुझको तू
समझ न मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ 

 ---सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

bataauN kyon ajeeb hooN
maiN shaayar-o-adeeb hooN

haiN aap mere hamsafar
maiN kitna khushnaseeb hooN

maiN khud se door ho gaya
huzoor se qareeb hooN

dhanee hooN baat ka sanam
main aadmee gareeb hooN

hayaat ke kafas meN hooN
maiN ek andaleeb hooN

o jaaneman yaqeen kar
faqat tera habeeb hooN

hai tujhse pyaar mujhko too
samajh na maiN 'Raqeeb' hooN
       
          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
behad khoobsoorat andaaz me waqai aap ne kamaal kar diyaa Satish jee! gaagar me saagar bharne kaa aisaa hunar kam hee dekhne ko miltaa hai.......bahut khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: November 05, 2011, 10:51:37 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 03, 2011, 12:51:27 PM
बताऊँ क्यों अजीब हूँ
मैं शायर-ओ-अदीब हूँ

हैं आप मेरे हमसफ़र
मैं कितना खुशनसीब हूँ

मैं खुद से दूर हो गया
हुज़ूर से क़रीब हूँ

धनी हूँ बात का सनम
मैं आदमी ग़रीब हूँ

हयात के कफ़स में हूँ
मैं एक अन्दलीब हूँ

ओ जानेमन यक़ीन कर
फ़क़त तेरा हबीब हूँ

है तुझसे प्यार मुझको तू
समझ न मैं 'रक़ीब' हूँ  

 ---सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

bataauN kyon ajeeb hooN
maiN shaayar-o-adeeb hooN

haiN aap mere hamsafar
maiN kitna khushnaseeb hooN

maiN khud se door ho gaya
huzoor se qareeb hooN

dhanee hooN baat ka sanam
main aadmee gareeb hooN

hayaat ke kafas meN hooN
maiN ek andaleeb hooN

o jaaneman yaqeen kar
faqat tera habeeb hooN

hai tujhse pyaar mujhko too
samajh na maiN 'Raqeeb' hooN
      
          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
behad khoobsoorat andaaz me waqai aap ne kamaal kar diyaa Satish jee! gaagar me saagar bharne kaa aisaa hunar kam hee dekhne ko miltaa hai.......bahut khoob!
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«Reply #13 on: November 06, 2011, 05:39:54 AM »
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Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Bhavishya men bhi sneh banaye
rakhiyega.

Sadar,

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #14 on: November 07, 2011, 04:34:25 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya. Aage bhi isee tarah
saath nibhate rahiye.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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