MAIN . KOI . MOAM . NAHEEN . HOON ................. HASAN

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GHAZAL
Bhool jaaunga tujhe , aur bahal jaaunga
Mujh ko ehsaas na tha itna badal jaaunga
.
Itna naaz Aatish-e-Rukhsaar pe karne waale
Mai'n koi moam nahee'n hoo'n ki pighal jaaunga
.
Husn-e-Maghroor , ata Sharf-e-Mulaqaat to kar
Ishq ban kar tere jazbaat me'n dhal jaaunga
.
Waqt ke Dast-e-Hinaai pe gira Ashk hoo'n mai'n
Ek Kasak chhod ke Tareekh mei'n dhal jaaunga
.
Gungunaayegi mere baad bhi padh kar Barso'n
Kar ke Mansoob tujhe aisi Ghazal jaaunga
.
Paao'n larzaa'n hai'n , Talab baaqi hai thodi Saaqi
Eik Jaam aur pila de mai'n sanbhal jaaunga
.
Khaas Dilkash nahi'n Tareekh-e-Mohabbat , lekin
Dil ko bahlaane , 'Hasan' , Taj Mahal jaaunga
.
- Hasan . Shamsi -

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Atish e Rukhsar = Gaalon ki aag ;Sharf e Mulaqat = Mulaqaat ka mouqa ;Dast e Hinai= Menhdi lage Haath ; Tareekh = History ; Mansoob = Attribute karna / naam karna ; Larzaa'n = Trembling ; Talab = Urge / thirst 
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2016, 05:10:59 AM »
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बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई sir
और एक RAU क़ुबूल कीजिये
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2016, 05:32:09 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2016, 06:33:20 AM »
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GHAZAL
Bhool jaaunga tujhe , aur bahal jaaunga
Mujh ko ehsaas na tha itna badal jaaunga  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Itna naaz Aatish-e-Rukhsaar pe karne waale
Mai'n koi moam nahee'n hoo'n ki pighal jaaunga  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
.
Husn-e-Maghroor , ata Sharf-e-Mulaqaat to kar
Ishq ban kar tere jazbaat me'n dhal jaaunga
.
Waqt ke Dast-e-Hinaai pe gira Ashk hoo'n mai'n
Ek Kasak chhod ke Tareekh mei'n dhal jaaunga
.
Gungunaayegi mere baad bhi padh kar Barso'n
Kar ke Mansoob tujhe aisi Ghazal jaaunga  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
.

Paao'n larzaa'n hai'n , Talab baaqi hai thodi Saaqi
Eik Jaam aur pila de mai'n sanbhal jaaunga
.
Khaas Dilkash nahi'n Tareekh-e-Mohabbat , lekin
Dil ko bahlaane , 'Hasan' , Taj Mahal jaaunga  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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- Hasan . Shamsi -

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Atish e Rukhsar = Gaalon ki aag ;Sharf e Mulaqat = Mulaqaat ka mouqa ;Dast e Hinai= Menhdi lage Haath ; Tareekh = History ; Mansoob = Attribute karna / naam karna ; Larzaa'n = Trembling ; Talab = Urge / thirst 







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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2016, 08:18:03 AM »
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Lajawaab Hasan ji,
aapki yeh gazal bhi,
ab aaya karenge aksar
khaate hain kasam ji

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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2016, 08:25:49 AM »
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Bahot khoob, lajawab, bas waaaah hi waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2016, 10:54:33 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2016, 11:08:27 PM »
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Kyaa baat hai Hasan Sahib bahut hee umdah waah waah hee waah.
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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2016, 11:22:44 AM »
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बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई sir
और एक RAU क़ुबूल कीजिये
Bahut bahut shukria janab NakulG . Salamat rahye
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2016, 04:35:23 PM »
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Behtreen , Daad, qubul kijiye  wave wave wave Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Shukria janab , bahut nawazish aapki .
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«Reply #10 on: November 22, 2016, 06:19:32 AM »
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BAHUT SHUKRIA , NAWAZISH JNAB ADIL BECHAIN SAHEB , SALAMAT RAHYE .




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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2017, 07:27:57 AM »
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Lajawaab Hasan ji,
aapki yeh gazal bhi,
ab aaya karenge aksar
khaate hain kasam ji


Bhai bahut bahut shukria aapke khuloos aur mohabbat ke liye .
 Muafi chaahta hoon , arse tak ghair haazir raha . Ayenda inshaallah waada zuroor nibhaunga
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2017, 05:03:24 AM »
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Bahot khoob, lajawab, bas waaaah hi waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bhut bahut shukria aur duaaein
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2017, 05:05:33 AM »
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RAKESH DENGDA JI THANKS
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