Manzer...

by faisal314 on May 09, 2011, 09:41:31 AM
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Kabhi nem, kabhi khusk howa ho hijr main muselsel,
Tou nain, mere aankh main ubelta wo, ketra nahee daekha

Waqif hain khoob hum, apni gelee say teree gelee tek,
Siwa ies kay hum nay, koi resta nahee daekha

Yeh ek bay hes sheher hain, keh yahan,
Koi rota nahee daekha, koi hensta nahee daekha

Jo likha ous key yaad main hum nain Khaki,
Yaar, agyaar nain iesa koi misra nahee daekha

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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2011, 06:03:51 PM »
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khich gayi aankho mei meri bus itni si rekha
us se jyada khubsurat meine kisi ko nahi dekha
Quote from: faisal314 on May 09, 2011, 09:41:31 AM
Kabhi nem, kabhi khusk howa ho hijr main muselsel,
Tou nain, mere aankh main ubelta wo, ketra nahee daekha

Waqif hain khoob hum, apni gelee say teree gelee tek,
Siwa ies kay hum nay, koi resta nahee daekha

Yeh ek bay hes sheher hain, keh yahan,
Koi rota nahee daekha, koi hensta nahee daekha

Jo likha ous key yaad main hum nain Khaki,
Yaar, agyaar nain iesa koi misra nahee daekha

More to come...
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2011, 01:36:12 AM »
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hi
Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 10, 2011, 06:03:51 PM
khich gayi aankho mei meri bus itni si rekha
us se jyada khubsurat meine kisi ko nahi dekha
, nice thoughts, but its out of rhyme, please read again.
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