Manzil judi huyi hai yahan

by suman59 on January 21, 2013, 06:12:01 AM
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Manzil judi huyi hai yahan raston ke saath
Rahat kii bhi dagar hai kahi mushkilon ke saath

Kiston mein nahi, too mujhe poora kabul kar
Too chaho mujhko dost, meri aadathon ke saath

Tumne mujhe akela samajkar galat kiya
MaiN tha jahan bhi, tha vahan tanhayiyon ke saath

Har dil azeez chahe naheeN tha mai shehar mein
Mashhur tha maiN bazam mein ruswayiyon ke saath

Shayar hooN magar, shayari mera hunar naheeN
Likhti hoon maiN to soch ki gehrayiyon ke saath

Too bhi kabhi to sach mein bharosa jatayega
Kab tak rahega jhooth ki parchayiyon ke saath

Lachariyon pe uski jab hans rahe the log
Hans to raha tha vo bhi magar aansuwon ke saath
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 06:36:07 AM »
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Zabardast. Mind blowing.
Simply superB.
Bahut khoobsurat gazal likhii hai aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 06:47:12 AM »
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Bahut hi pyari gazal hai suman jee. Dil bhar aaya apki gazal se. Ye to ham sabki sachchai hai. Jise aapne gazal ka roop diya hai. Very nice.
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 07:28:04 AM »
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bahut khoob...umda ghazal kahi..dheroN daad aur bahut bahut mubaarakbaad suman ji !
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 07:38:13 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 21, 2013, 06:36:07 AM
Zabardast. Mind blowing.
Simply superB.
Bahut khoobsurat gazal likhii hai aapne.
thanks my dear
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 07:38:40 AM »
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Quote from: boby9457 on January 21, 2013, 06:47:12 AM
Bahut hi pyari gazal hai suman jee. Dil bhar aaya apki gazal se. Ye to ham sabki sachchai hai. Jise aapne gazal ka roop diya hai. Very nice.

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya boby jee
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2013, 07:39:06 AM »
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Quote from: shara63 on January 21, 2013, 07:28:04 AM
bahut khoob...umda ghazal kahi..dheroN daad aur bahut bahut mubaarakbaad suman ji !

thank you shara
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2013, 08:53:40 AM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne... behad gazab ke khayaaloN
ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile
Is umdaa aur gehri kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2013, 08:59:20 AM »
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lajavab suman ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2013, 02:08:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2013, 11:50:23 AM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 21, 2013, 06:36:07 AM
Zabardast. Mind blowing.
Simply superB.
Bahut khoobsurat gazal likhii hai aapne.

thanks beta
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2013, 11:50:54 AM »
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Quote from: boby9457 on January 21, 2013, 06:47:12 AM
Bahut hi pyari gazal hai suman jee. Dil bhar aaya apki gazal se. Ye to ham sabki sachchai hai. Jise aapne gazal ka roop diya hai. Very nice.

aapka bahut bahut shukriya boby jee
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2013, 11:52:09 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 21, 2013, 08:53:40 AM
Suman Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne... behad gazab ke khayaaloN
ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile
Is umdaa aur gehri kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

thank you Parwaaz jee
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2013, 11:52:42 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on January 21, 2013, 08:59:20 AM
lajavab suman ji, dhero dad

shukriya prashad jee
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2013, 11:53:07 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 21, 2013, 02:08:32 PM
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tks hriday jee
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