Manzil kho gayee.............................................................Aqsh

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Manzil bhi kho gayee, rasta bhi kho gaya
Jaaga magar muqaddar, phir se so gaya

Saccha tha ishq mera, jaantee huN MaiN
Naadaan tum na samjhe, dil ye ro gaya

Chahat rahee adhooree, tum naheeN mile
Kya socha aur maine, kya ye ho gaya

Ummeed ki shama, dil meN hai jal rahee
Lautega eik din, hai rooth jo gaya

Dil ‘aqsh’ ka, abhee bhee maanta nahee
Tere liye jiye , tera hi ho gaya
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2013, 04:51:07 AM »
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bohut khoob aqsh jee umda kalaam hai , daaad qubool karen
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«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2013, 05:06:40 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 28, 2013, 04:11:14 AM
Manzil bhi kho gayee, rasta bhi kho gaya
Jaaga magar muqaddar, phir se so gaya

Saccha tha ishq mera, jaantee huN MaiN
Naadaan tum na samjhe, dil ye ro gaya

Chahat rahee adhooree, tum naheeN mile
Kya socha aur maine, kya ye ho gaya

Ummeed ki shama, dil meN hai jal rahee
Lautega eik din, hai rooth jo gaya

Dil ‘aqsh’ ka, abhee bhee maanta nahee
Tere liye jiye , tera hi ho gaya


waah waah  lajawaab ,bohut khoob likha hai Aqsh ji aappne ,,
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2013, 05:20:19 AM »
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bahut khoob Aqsh Ji,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2013, 05:26:58 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2013, 05:40:23 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on January 28, 2013, 04:51:07 AM
bohut khoob aqsh jee umda kalaam hai , daaad qubool karen
thnx aarish jee sooooooo much
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Quote from: sahal on January 28, 2013, 05:06:40 AM
waah waah  lajawaab ,bohut khoob likha hai Aqsh ji aappne ,,
Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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thank you sooooooo much sahal
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on January 28, 2013, 05:20:19 AM
bahut khoob Aqsh Ji,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thank you amit jee
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 28, 2013, 05:26:58 AM
waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad
thank you soooooo much saini sir
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2013, 06:05:49 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2013, 06:08:29 AM »
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Wow shaandaar gazal.
Daad kabool kijiye sister jee
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«Reply #11 on: January 28, 2013, 06:12:58 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on January 28, 2013, 06:05:49 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad
thank you sooooooo much prashad jee
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 28, 2013, 06:08:29 AM
Wow shaandaar gazal.
Daad kabool kijiye sister jee
thank you sooooooo much masoom
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«Reply #13 on: January 28, 2013, 06:29:30 AM »
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 Applause bahut khoob aqsh ji, achchha kalaam hai...dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbad pesh hai !
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«Reply #14 on: January 28, 2013, 06:32:46 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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