MAR HI DAAL MUJHEY

by timy on June 20, 2007, 12:49:31 PM
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Maar hi daal mujhe Chashm-e-Ada se pahle
Apni Manzil ko Pohunch jaoon Qaza se pahle



Ek Nazar Dekh loon aa jao Qaza se pahle
Tum se milne ki Tamanna hai Khuda se pahle




Hashr k Roz mai puchunga Khuda se pahle
Tu ne Roka nahi kyun Mujh ko Khata se pahle




Ae Meri Maut, Thehar Unko Zara ane de
Zehar ka Jaam na de Mujh ko Dawa se pahle




Hath Pohunche b na the Zulf dota tak "Timy"
Hathkari dal di Zalim ne Khata se pahle
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2007, 08:30:13 PM »
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Hi timy..
Welcome to Yoindia..

Its good that you shared some good poetry with us. But it would look even more good if you always mention name of the poet who originally written it, if you don't know original poet then simply add "NM" in post somewhere. It is to show our respect to the original author for his / her valued work. It is also part to show our poetic devotion.

I hope you shall continue sharing poems here and also posting your own valuable creation and sharing them with world.

Just to tell ..
This Ghazal belongs to :
Writer: Momin Khan Momin Ji
Sung By: Munni Begum Ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2007, 10:58:04 AM »
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Aainda Se Dhyaan Me Rakhe Timy Bhai,..
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