Marr Gaya Koi !!

by qadeer_junaid on April 10, 2010, 03:56:12 AM
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Wadon se apne mukar gaya koi !!
Dil toot ke fir  bikhar gaya koi !!

In besabab Barishon se kahe do zara !!
Pyasa Samandar kinare marr gaya koi !!

Ye dil me mere ajeeb bechaini hai !!
De ke  sada darr pe kidhar  gaya koi!!

Asmaan ki udaasi ye kahe rahi hai !!
Eak shaher duniya me ujad gaya koi !!

Tumne dekhi kahan qurbaniyan “Qadeer”
Maanzil pe aake marr gaya koi !!
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2010, 05:34:38 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Qadeer Saheb!
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 06:13:28 AM »
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Yoindia mein aapka khairmakhdam hai Niyazi Sb. Bahut achha likhte hain aap. Aapki ye ghazal bahot khubsurat lagi. Har sher apne aap mein mukammal hai.
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 10, 2010, 03:56:12 AM
Wadon se apne mukar gaya koi !!
Dil toot ke fir  bikhar gaya koi !!

In besabab Barishon se kahe do zara !!
Pyasa Samandar kinare marr gaya koi !!

Ye dil me mere ajeeb bechaini hai !!
De ke  sada darr pe kidhar  gaya koi!!

Asmaan ki udaasi ye kahe rahi hai !!
Eak shaher duniya me ujad gaya koi !!

Tumne dekhi kahan qurbaniyan “Qadeer”
Maanzil pe aake marr gaya koi !!
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 06:58:58 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 10, 2010, 06:13:28 AM
Yoindia mein aapka khairmakhdam hai Niyazi Sb. Bahut achha likhte hain aap. Aapki ye ghazal bahot khubsurat lagi. Har sher apne aap mein mukammal hai.

Mahutram Riyaz Saheb Aadab ,

Ghazal Ki pazirai Ke liye Mamnoo hun , Apke Alfaz Apki Faraq Dili aur Mahubbath ko Bayan Karte hain , Apki Karam Nawazi aur pakiza nazron ka kamal hai bhaijaan , baaqi to khuch nahi , Hausla Afzai ke liye Shukar guzar hon , Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Duwa Go !!

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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 07:01:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob Qadeer Saheb
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2010, 09:17:27 AM »
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Qadeer saheb aap to sada se lajawab the aur lajawab hi rahege.......har sher ek kadwi sachchaiee bayaa.N karta nazar aaya....dad kabool kare dosto ki.

Berang bemaza si lage hai mehfil
Suna humne bhi hai sudhar gaya koi....

Naf...Mar..
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 10:19:52 AM »
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Quote from: Nafseeyati_Mareez on April 10, 2010, 09:17:27 AM
Qadeer saheb aap to sada se lajawab the aur lajawab hi rahege.......har sher ek kadwi sachchaiee bayaa.N karta nazar aaya....dad kabool kare dosto ki.

Berang bemaza si lage hai mehfil
Suna humne bhi hai sudhar gaya koi....

Naf...Mar..



zarra Nawazi Hai mere Bhai .. Apki Dad hamesha se Hausla Afza-e- Aur himmat ka baaz rahi hai .. Bade Din baad Apki Dad Paakar Dil Baagh Baagh Ho gaya .. Kahan ho , Kaise ho , Allah kare Hamesha Khush raho App .. Apki Ghazal ki Kamiyabi per Apko Dili Mubarak Baad Allah Kare Yunhi Kamiyabi Apke Qadam Chumti Rahe .. Umid hai samjhe Honge ..

Apka Bhai ..

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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2010, 10:20:48 AM »
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bahut khoob Qadeer bhai...!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2010, 11:24:51 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on April 10, 2010, 10:20:48 AM
bahut khoob Qadeer bhai...!!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Shukriya Himmat Afza-e- ke liye .. Allah khush rakhe apko

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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2010, 11:39:37 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Qadeer ji,very touching and lovely creation,beautiful lines by N.Mareez ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2010, 11:48:20 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai          qadir_junaid ji.....



Chahat main teri piyasa rahe gaya koi
bin tujhe paakar  Mar Gaya Koi.......
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Wah kya baat hai          qadir_junaid ji.....



Chahat main teri piyasa rahe gaya koi
bin tujhe paakar  Mar Gaya Koi.......

Shukriya Cara Sahab , Apne ne bhi Qoob Kaha hai .. Khush rahe ..


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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeerbhai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: khwaish on April 10, 2010, 01:31:53 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeerbhai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Nawazish karam apka .. Allah apko khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2010, 10:53:12 AM »
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bahut khoob qadir ji. Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 10, 2010, 03:56:12 AM
Wadon se apne mukar gaya koi !!
Dil toot ke fir  bikhar gaya koi !!

In besabab Barishon se kahe do zara !!
Pyasa Samandar kinare marr gaya koi !!

Ye dil me mere ajeeb bechaini hai !!
De ke  sada darr pe kidhar  gaya koi!!

Asmaan ki udaasi ye kahe rahi hai !!
Eak shaher duniya me ujad gaya koi !!

Tumne dekhi kahan qurbaniyan “Qadeer”
Maanzil pe aake marr gaya koi !!
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