Marz ab ho rahaa hai laailaaj: socho to!

by abdbundeli on June 27, 2009, 01:44:47 PM
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Eik hasrat hai: tumhaarey qareeb jaa pahunchoon!
Ab to gaaney lagey hain andleeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik lamhah bhi, ho rahaa hai kaatnaa mushkil;
Dahar huye hain hijra mein, habeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Bey-bulaayaa hun; sahee hai; magar, karoon mein kyaa?
Ho chalee hai meyree duniyaa kabeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Yeh 'naa-nukar', to, tumhaaree azal sey hai jaaree!
Tum ko lagtaa ho, lagey yah ajeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Log kahtey hain tum najeeb ho, zamaaney sey;
Maantaa hun, mein nahin hun najeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Marz ab ho rahaa hai laailaaj: socho to!
Kyaa karoon , eik tumhee ho tabeeb? Jaa pahunchoon?

Raqeeb hongey wahaan: par mujhey malaal naheen!
Roo-b-roo hon na magar ab raqeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Nissab-e-wasl saath hai, rakho hifaazat  mein:
Eik, bas tum hee rahogey haseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik hi dar hai, pahunchnaa jahaan ziyaarat hai:
Banaaou mujh ko, 'abd', khushnaseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

                                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 02:08:59 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob abd ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2009, 03:08:51 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 27, 2009, 02:08:59 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob abd ji
Shukriyah bekarar ji!
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2009, 05:15:21 PM »
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Bahot Khoob.... very Nice....
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 12:56:24 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 03:36:38 AM »
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Beautiful creation Abd ji,very nice. Giggle Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 04:35:19 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 27, 2009, 01:44:47 PM

Eik hasrat hai: tumhaarey qareeb jaa pahunchoon!
Ab to gaaney lagey hain andleeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik lamhah bhi, ho rahaa hai kaatnaa mushkil;
Dahar huye hain hijra mein, habeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Bey-bulaayaa hun; sahee hai; magar, karoon mein kyaa?
Ho chalee hai meyree duniyaa kabeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Yeh 'naa-nukar', to, tumhaaree azal sey hai jaaree!
Tum ko lagtaa ho, lagey yah ajeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Log kahtey hain tum najeeb ho, zamaaney sey;
Maantaa hun, mein nahin hun najeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Marz ab ho rahaa hai laailaaj: socho to!
Kyaa karoon , eik tumhee ho tabeeb? Jaa pahunchoon?

Raqeeb hongey wahaan: par mujhey malaal naheen!
Roo-b-roo hon na magar ab raqeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Nissab-e-wasl saath hai, rakho hifaazat  mein:
Eik, bas tum hee rahogey haseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik hi dar hai, pahunchnaa jahaan ziyaarat hai:
Banaaou mujh ko, 'abd', khushnaseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

                                                    - abd bundeli



bhut hi khoob abd sahab mashallah kya kehne hain aapke is kalaam ke bhut bhut shukriya is paishkash ka daad qubool karain abd ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 04:36:46 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 27, 2009, 01:44:47 PM

Eik hasrat hai: tumhaarey qareeb jaa pahunchoon!
Ab to gaaney lagey hain andleeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik lamhah bhi, ho rahaa hai kaatnaa mushkil;
Dahar huye hain hijra mein, habeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Bey-bulaayaa hun; sahee hai; magar, karoon mein kyaa?
Ho chalee hai meyree duniyaa kabeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Yeh 'naa-nukar', to, tumhaaree azal sey hai jaaree!
Tum ko lagtaa ho, lagey yah ajeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Log kahtey hain tum najeeb ho, zamaaney sey;
Maantaa hun, mein nahin hun najeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Marz ab ho rahaa hai laailaaj: socho to!
Kyaa karoon , eik tumhee ho tabeeb? Jaa pahunchoon?

Raqeeb hongey wahaan: par mujhey malaal naheen!
Roo-b-roo hon na magar ab raqeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Nissab-e-wasl saath hai, rakho hifaazat  mein:
Eik, bas tum hee rahogey haseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik hi dar hai, pahunchnaa jahaan ziyaarat hai:
Banaaou mujh ko, 'abd', khushnaseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

                                                    - abd bundeli







bahut khoob abd jee..
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2009, 05:05:08 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya baat hai, Abd Ji, Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal hai, hamesha ki tarah! Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2009, 05:14:25 AM »
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bahut khoob abdbundeli ji yeo hi likhte rahow...

Quote from: abdbundeli on June 27, 2009, 01:44:47 PM

Eik hasrat hai: tumhaarey qareeb jaa pahunchoon!
Ab to gaaney lagey hain andleeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik lamhah bhi, ho rahaa hai kaatnaa mushkil;
Dahar huye hain hijra mein, habeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Bey-bulaayaa hun; sahee hai; magar, karoon mein kyaa?
Ho chalee hai meyree duniyaa kabeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Yeh 'naa-nukar', to, tumhaaree azal sey hai jaaree!
Tum ko lagtaa ho, lagey yah ajeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Log kahtey hain tum najeeb ho, zamaaney sey;
Maantaa hun, mein nahin hun najeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Marz ab ho rahaa hai laailaaj: socho to!
Kyaa karoon , eik tumhee ho tabeeb? Jaa pahunchoon?

Raqeeb hongey wahaan: par mujhey malaal naheen!
Roo-b-roo hon na magar ab raqeeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Nissab-e-wasl saath hai, rakho hifaazat  mein:
Eik, bas tum hee rahogey haseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

Eik hi dar hai, pahunchnaa jahaan ziyaarat hai:
Banaaou mujh ko, 'abd', khushnaseeb! Jaa pahunchoon?

                                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2009, 06:01:12 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 28, 2009, 03:36:38 AM
Beautiful creation Abd ji,very nice. Giggle Giggle Giggle
Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2009, 06:04:00 AM »
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Quote from: Alam Qazi on June 27, 2009, 05:15:21 PM
Bahot Khoob.... very Nice....
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 28, 2009, 12:56:24 AM
Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
Thanks a lot, Alam Qazi ji/ Rajesh Harish  ji!
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2009, 06:08:28 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 28, 2009, 04:35:19 AM
bhut hi khoob abd sahab mashallah kya kehne hain aapke is kalaam ke bhut bhut shukriya is paishkash ka daad qubool karain abd ji
Bahut-bahut shukriyah aaina ji! Mujhey khushee hai, ki, is gazal ney aap ko kuchh lamhon ki khushee to dee! Nazar-e-inaayat banaaye rakheyn!
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Quote from: pandit on June 28, 2009, 04:36:46 AM
bahut khoob abd jee..
Bahut-bahut shukriyah pandit ji!
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«Reply #14 on: June 28, 2009, 06:16:22 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 28, 2009, 05:05:08 AM
Wah Wah Kya baat hai, Abd Ji, Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal hai, hamesha ki tarah! Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah Deepati ji! Mujhey khushee hai, ki, yah gazal aap ko pasand aayee! US ki  Nazar-e-Inaayat aap par hameyshah banee rahey!
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