~~"MASOOMIYAT BHI REHNE DE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on June 08, 2009, 09:46:51 AM
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Kab talak chupa ke rakho.n dard,aab mujhe kehne de,
Seh li teri bewafayi  bahut, aab mujhe duniya ki baatein sehne de,

Marr jaaye koi to log aab uski yaadein bhi baha dete hai,
Tu phaink mat pathar paani me, uss raakh-e-yaad ko itminan se behne de,

Kuch logon ne bewafayi ko hi banaya hai pesha apna,
Ae khuda tu mere shehar ke logo.n me, kuch to masoomiyat rehne de,

Tu daal de bass mere jism pe apne pyaar ki zanjeere,
Kaun kambakht kehta hai tujhe, ki mujhe shingaar ke liye gehne de,

Na u gham-dard-nafrat ko likha kar lafzo me Shally,
Dil ke hai ye be-matlabi jazbaat, inhe bass dil ki hi basti me rehne de!!

Shally
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2009, 09:50:26 AM »
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Nawab ji,

Wow ! Brilliant Applause Applause Applause

Chaa gaye tussi taan Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2009, 11:18:11 AM »
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Waah,KyaKHoob Likha Hai Yaar,.
THis Lines Touched My Heart,.

Quote from: k.shael on June 08, 2009, 09:46:51 AM
Kuch logon ne bewafayi ko hi banaya hai pesha apna,
Ae khuda tu mere shehar ke logo.n me, kuch to masoomiyat rehne de,

Tu daal de bass mere jism pe apne pyaar ki zanjeere,
Kaun kambakht kehta hai tujhe, ki mujhe shingaar ke liye gehne de,



Great Lines,.
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«Reply #3 on: June 08, 2009, 11:41:40 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally...Bohot achcha likha hai....Keep writing !
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2009, 01:36:48 PM »
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Beautifull creation shally ...g88 lines.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2009, 06:32:06 PM »
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww SuPErbbbbbbbbbbbbbb Usual Smile Mind Blowing
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2009, 11:48:33 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Toooooo Goooood Shally jee
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 12:14:03 AM »
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Beautiful creation Shally ji,very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 05:48:05 AM »
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Wow Shallyyyyyyyyy.. Superb Work.. Applause  Kitna Dard Chupa hai In Lafzon me..Har ek Lafz apni Kahaani kahata Sa Lag raha hai..!! Very Touching Dear.. Lajawab Peshkash hai.. Bahut bahut Khoooooooooob... Applause Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 05:51:05 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on June 08, 2009, 09:50:26 AM
Nawab ji,

Wow ! Brilliant Applause Applause Applause

Chaa gaye tussi taan Winking Usual Smile


Shukriya Nawab Ji, Aapka thread par aana hi mere thread ka maan hai!! aur upar se taarif kismat nek hai hamari..

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 06:17:10 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally!!

Har Ek lafz Dil Ko Chuu Gaya..Itni khoobsurti se Aapne Shikayte Ki Hai Iss Nazm Mein Ke Kya kahoon..Bahut Ache Dost Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapki Yeh Nazm Padhe Baad,Mujhe Ek Punjabi Gaane Ke Kuch Lafz Se Yaad Aa Gaye..
Share Karna Chahunga...

Rehn De Ni, Rehn De Ni,Rehn de,
Jis Haalche Assi Haan Saanu Rehn De,
Jhootiyan Tasalliyan Na De,
Saanu Gham De Samundra Vich Doob Jaande,
Jhootiyan Tasalliyan Na De...
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 07:06:01 AM »
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good work shally
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 07:33:27 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 08, 2009, 09:46:51 AM
Kab talak chupa ke rakho.n dard,aab mujhe kehne de,
Seh li teri bewafayi  bahut, aab mujhe duniya ki baatein sehne de,

Marr jaaye koi to log aab uski yaadein bhi baha dete hai,
Tu phaink mat pathar paani me, uss raakh-e-yaad ko itminan se behne de,

Kuch logon ne bewafayi ko hi banaya hai pesha apna,
Ae khuda tu mere shehar ke logo.n me, kuch to masoomiyat rehne de,

Tu daal de bass mere jism pe apne pyaar ki zanjeere,
Kaun kambakht kehta hai tujhe, ki mujhe shingaar ke liye gehne de,

Na u gham-dard-nafrat ko likha kar lafzo me Shally,
Dil ke hai ye be-matlabi jazbaat, inhe bass dil ki hi basti me rehne de!!

Shally

beautifully versed and phrased shally,,,,,,,itne pyaare dhang se shikayat kii hai aapne kii jisse shikayat kii hai woh bhi masoomiyat par mar mitega
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 08:21:17 AM »
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hmm...bahut khoob shally dear...badi masoomiyat se bahut kuch keh daala..
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Quote from: Azeem on June 08, 2009, 11:18:11 AM
Waah,KyaKHoob Likha Hai Yaar,.
THis Lines Touched My Heart,.

Great Lines,.

Shukriya Azeem Ji, Aapko Ghazal dil tak parwaan hui, Pad kar khushi hui, u hi padte rahiye aur sarahte rahiyega nacheez ko.

Shally.
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