Mausam Abhi Itna To Suhana Bhi Nahi Hai

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on July 07, 2013, 08:52:47 PM
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WAPAS WO ZAMANA KABHI AANA BHI NAHI HAI
GUZRI JO JAWANI USEY PANA BHI NAHI HAI

MAZBOOT BAHUT APNA THA RISHTA E ULFAT PER
AB TUJH SE MERA DOOR KA NAATA BHI NAHI HAI

HER RAAT MAIN DARWAZA KYON KHOL KE SOTA HOON
MALOOM HAI MUJHKO TUMHE AANA BHI NAHI HAI

BACHPAN GAYA SHABAAB GAYA PEERI HAI LEKIN
DUNIYA KO ABHI THEEK SE JAANA BHI NAHI HAI

RUSWAI KA PHIR TERI BAYES NA YE HO JAYE
WO GEET SAR E MAHFIL GAANA BHI NAHI HAI

MAUSAMI PHOOLO'N SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA HAI
KHUSHBOO TO NAHI INME KAANTA BHI NAHI HAI

NAALE KE KINARE KI BASTI ME JO RAHTE HAIN
MUFLIS HAIN KOI INKA THIKAANA BHI NAHI HAI

EK MOUR HAI JANGAL ME JO NAACH RAHA HAI
MAUSAM ABHI ITNA TO SUHANA BHI NAHI HAI

                 ...........S.M.MAHZAR

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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2013, 09:39:58 PM »
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Very nice Mazhar sahab aur jo apne mayne bhi likhe, aaur acha laga.

Kuch sher bohot acche lage.. jaise :
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HER RAAT MAIN DARWAZA KYON KHOL KE SOTA HOON
MALOOM HAI MUJHKO TUMHE AANA BHI NAHI HAI

Aur..
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NAALE KE KINARE KI BASTI ME JO RAHTE HAIN
MUFLIS HAIN KOI INKA THIKAANA BHI NAHI HAI

EK MOUR HAI JANGAL ME JO NAACH RAHA HAI
MAUSAM ABHI ITNA TO SUHANA BHI NAHI HAI

It ghuzarish hai ki "All caps" na use kare, badhne mein thodi mushkil hoti hai.
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2013, 10:06:31 PM »
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HER RAAT MAIN DARWAZA KYON KHOL KE SOTA HOON
MALOOM HAI MUJHKO TUMHE AANA BHI NAHI HAI

BACHPAN GAYA SHABAAB GAYA PEERI HAI LEKIN
DUNIYA KO ABHI THEEK SE JAANA BHI NAHI HAI

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Wah,Wah,Wah Mahzar sahab,
Bahut umdaa.Dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaayiye.
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2013, 10:44:30 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Bahot khoooooob... waaaaaah...
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2013, 10:56:23 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2013, 12:31:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Nice  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2013, 01:19:09 AM »
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loved it...... too good syed ji..... keep improvising ..
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2013, 02:45:43 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on July 07, 2013, 08:52:47 PM
WAPAS WO ZAMANA KABHI AANA BHI NAHI HAI
GUZRI JO JAWANI USEY PANA BHI NAHI HAI

MAZBOOT BAHUT APNA THA RISHTA E ULFAT PER
AB TUJH SE MERA DOOR KA NAATA BHI NAHI HAI

HER RAAT MAIN DARWAZA KYON KHOL KE SOTA HOON
MALOOM HAI MUJHKO TUMHE AANA BHI NAHI HAI

BACHPAN GAYA SHABAAB GAYA PEERI HAI LEKIN
DUNIYA KO ABHI THEEK SE JAANA BHI NAHI HAI

RUSWAI KA PHIR TERI BAYES NA YE HO JAYE
WO GEET SAR E MAHFIL GAANA BHI NAHI HAI

MAUSAMI PHOOLO'N SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA HAI
KHUSHBOO TO NAHI INME KAANTA BHI NAHI HAI

NAALE KE KINARE KI BASTI ME JO RAHTE HAIN
MUFLIS HAIN KOI INKA THIKAANA BHI NAHI HAI

EK MOUR HAI JANGAL ME JO NAACH RAHA HAI
MAUSAM ABHI ITNA TO SUHANA BHI NAHI HAI

                 ...........S.M.MAHZAR

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Rishta e ulfat : Pyaar ka rishta    Peeri : burhapa  
Ruswai : Badnaami                   Bayes: Wajah   [/color]

wah wah wah.............! aap font ko small letter mein likhein to aur bhi acha hoga icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2013, 04:00:53 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2013, 04:09:56 AM »
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beautiful lines.
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waaaah waaaaaah buht hi umda, dheeron daad qabool kijeye
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2013, 08:50:18 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2013, 12:55:13 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal se nawaaz hai aapne. sabhi ashaar khoob hai. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh kalaam. is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaron dili daad qubool kare..
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2013, 04:41:11 PM »
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Mazhar Sahaab Aadaab.... !


Wallaah janab kia bakamaal bemisaal aur umdaa kalaam ko anjaam diyaa hai... behad khoob ashaar rahe... kafi umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko aapne apne lafzoN meiN dhalaa hai...

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on July 07, 2013, 08:52:47 PM
WAPAS WO ZAMANA KABHI AANA BHI NAHI HAI
GUZRI JO JAWANI USEY PANA BHI NAHI HAI

Umdaa matlaa huaa hai janab behad khoob daad...


BACHPAN GAYA SHABAAB GAYA PEERI HAI LEKIN
DUNIYA KO ABHI THEEK SE JAANA BHI NAHI HAI

Wallaah laajawaab sher hua hai daad daad ...

RUSWAI KA PHIR TERI BAYES NA YE HO JAYE
WO GEET SAR E MAHFIL GAANA BHI NAHI HAI

Bahut khoob janab daad ...

MAUSAMI PHOOLO'N SE GULSHAN KO SAJAYA HAI
KHUSHBOO TO NAHI INME KAANTA BHI NAHI HAI

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob...


                 ...........S.M.MAHZAR

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Rishta e ulfat : Pyaar ka rishta    Peeri : burhapa   
Ruswai : Badnaami                   Bayes: Wajah   [/color]
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2013, 07:20:42 PM »
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Quote from: CIC on July 07, 2013, 09:39:58 PM
Very nice Mazhar sahab aur jo apne mayne bhi likhe, aaur acha laga.

Kuch sher bohot acche lage.. jaise :
Aur..
It ghuzarish hai ki "All caps" na use kare, badhne mein thodi mushkil hoti hai.
CIC saheb,
          aapko sher pasand aaye bahut bahut shukriya.......
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