MAUSAM-E-GUL.....................................SAINI

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«Reply #45 on: November 12, 2013, 04:14:30 PM »
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«Reply #46 on: November 12, 2013, 05:42:39 PM »
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«Reply #47 on: November 12, 2013, 05:58:23 PM »
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bahot khoobsurat ghazal kahihai aapne Saini saahab.... kai sher behad pasand aaye, jinme se kuch hain...

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa

bahot aalaa.. likhte raheN.

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«Reply #48 on: November 12, 2013, 06:00:47 PM »
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa.

Teree chaahat jo leke niklaa hai.
Kaun us kaarwaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मौसम-ए -गुल ख़िज़ाँ से निकलेगा ।
रास्ता गुलसिताँ से निकलेगा ॥

जब भी टूटेंगी हद ज़हादत की ।
जाने क्या-क्या ज़बाँ से निकलेगा ॥

चोट देगा कहीं  किसी दिल पर ।
तीर जब -जब कमाँ से निकलेगा ॥

सिर्फ़ लफ़्ज़ों की हेरा-फेरी है ।
ये ही मतलब बयाँ से निकलेगा ॥

कर परिंदों को भी आता वर्ना ।
इनका दाना कहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

तेरी चाहत जो ले के निकला है ।
कौन उस कारवॉं से निकलेगा ॥

इस बयाबान में फ़ँसा 'सैनी' ।
किस तरह अब यहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

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laajawaab , our bas laajawaab ,................bohat bohat c daad har khoobsoorat sher ki nazar,.............
salamt rahen,...........
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«Reply #49 on: November 12, 2013, 07:28:08 PM »
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«Reply #50 on: November 12, 2013, 07:31:05 PM »
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa.

Teree chaahat jo leke niklaa hai.
Kaun us kaarwaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मौसम-ए -गुल ख़िज़ाँ से निकलेगा ।
रास्ता गुलसिताँ से निकलेगा ॥

जब भी टूटेंगी हद ज़हादत की ।
जाने क्या-क्या ज़बाँ से निकलेगा ॥

चोट देगा कहीं  किसी दिल पर ।
तीर जब -जब कमाँ से निकलेगा ॥

सिर्फ़ लफ़्ज़ों की हेरा-फेरी है ।
ये ही मतलब बयाँ से निकलेगा ॥

कर परिंदों को भी आता वर्ना ।
इनका दाना कहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

तेरी चाहत जो ले के निकला है ।
कौन उस कारवॉं से निकलेगा ॥

इस बयाबान में फ़ँसा 'सैनी' ।
किस तरह अब यहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी



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«Reply #53 on: November 13, 2013, 02:43:58 AM »
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Yeh pooree Ghazal bahut umdha Hai, niche likhin 4 lines to khaaskar hkoobsurat Hain.

Mausm-e-Gul Khizaan se niklegaa
Rasta gulistaan se niklegaa

Sirf lafzon kee heraa-pheree hai
Yeh hee matlab bayaan se niklegaa

Surindar N.
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Mausam-e-gul khizaaN se niklegaa.
Raastaa gulsitaaN se niklegaa.

Jab bhee tootengee had zahaadat kee.
Jaane kyaa-kyaa zabaaN se niklegaa.

Chot degaa kaheeN kisee dil par.
Teer jab-jab kamaaN se niklegaa.

Sirf lafzoN kee heraa-pheree hai.
Ye hee matlab bayaaN se niklegaa.

Kar parindoN ko bhee ataa varnaa.
Inkaa daanaa kahaaN se niklegaa.

Teree chaahat jo leke niklaa hai.
Kaun us kaarwaaN se niklegaa.

Is bayaabaan meN fansaa ‘saini’.
Kis tarah ab yahaaN se niklegaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


मौसम-ए -गुल ख़िज़ाँ से निकलेगा ।
रास्ता गुलसिताँ से निकलेगा ॥

जब भी टूटेंगी हद ज़हादत की ।
जाने क्या-क्या ज़बाँ से निकलेगा ॥

चोट देगा कहीं  किसी दिल पर ।
तीर जब -जब कमाँ से निकलेगा ॥

सिर्फ़ लफ़्ज़ों की हेरा-फेरी है ।
ये ही मतलब बयाँ से निकलेगा ॥

कर परिंदों को भी आता वर्ना ।
इनका दाना कहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

तेरी चाहत जो ले के निकला है ।
कौन उस कारवॉं से निकलेगा ॥

इस बयाबान में फ़ँसा 'सैनी' ।
किस तरह अब यहाँ से निकलेगा ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी

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