May mein, yeh kyaa milaa rahey hain aap?

by abdbundeli on August 31, 2012, 05:23:35 AM
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Baarahaa muskuraa rahey hain aap!
Kyoun bhalaa zulm dhaa rahey hain aap?

Hosh jaataa hai, roo-b-roo hotey:
Jaam bhar-bhar pilaa rahey hain aap?

Deyr tak aks dey uyoonoun kaa;
May mein, yeh kyaa milaa rahey hain aap?

Ham ko waisey bhi kaheen chain naheen;
Aur us par, sataa rahey hain aap!

Hai jagah khoob, 'abd', pahloo mein:
Bulaa rahaa hun, jaa rahey hain aap!

                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 05:33:36 AM »
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bahut khuuo
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2012, 05:38:58 AM »
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nice.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2012, 05:48:56 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 31, 2012, 05:33:36 AM
bahut khuuo

Shukriyah, Saini ji!
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on August 31, 2012, 05:38:58 AM
nice.....

Thanks, Gayatri ji!
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2012, 05:56:03 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 31, 2012, 05:23:35 AM
Baarahaa muskuraa rahey hain aap!
Kyoun bhalaa zulm dhaa rahey hain aap?

Hosh jaataa hai, roo-b-roo hotey:
Jaam bhar-bhar pilaa rahey hain aap?

Deyr tak aks dey uyoonoun kaa;
May mein, yeh kyaa milaa rahey hain aap?

Ham ko waisey bhi kaheen chain naheen;
Aur us par, sataa rahey hain aap!

Hai jagah khoob, 'abd' pahloo mein:
Bulaa rahaa hun, jaa rahey hain aap!

                  - abd bundeli

Waah waaah Kya khoob gazal likhte hain aap abd ji bahut behtrien gazal ek se badh kar ek ash'ar....Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
Dheron daad qabool kijiye Maqta lajwaab raha..
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2012, 06:11:19 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2012, 09:59:42 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut sundar, bahut khoob Abd ji... mazaa aa gaya padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 10:13:59 AM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne kia umda kalaam pesh ki hai aapne
janab bahut bahut umdaa... huMari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

bade gazabke ashaar kahe hai behad khoob ...

Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile




Quote from: abdbundeli on August 31, 2012, 05:23:35 AM
Baarahaa muskuraa rahey hain aap!
Kyoun bhalaa zulm dhaa rahey hain aap?

WaaH jee bada hi pyara matla hai daad daad daad... 

Hosh jaataa hai, roo-b-roo hotey:
Jaam bhar-bhar pilaa rahey hain aap?

Oye hoye kia baat hai jee " Hosh jata hai rooba roo hote"
Waah waaH bahut umdaa.. Usual Smile

Deyr tak aks dey uyoonoun kaa;
May mein, yeh kyaa milaa rahey hain aap?

Sani behad khoob hai janab par ulaa ulaa hi ho gaya humse.. ?

Ham ko waisey bhi kaheen chain naheen;
Aur us par, sataa rahey hain aap!

bahut khoob jee waaH dil ki baat kahi hai daad daad daad.. Usual Smile

Hai jagah khoob, 'abd' pahloo mein:
Bulaa rahaa hun, jaa rahey hain aap!

Waah Jee Abd Sahaab bada umdaa maqta raha daad.. 

                  - abd bundeli

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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 11:51:17 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on August 31, 2012, 05:56:03 AM
Waah waaah Kya khoob gazal likhte hain aap abd ji bahut behtrien gazal ek se badh kar ek ash'ar....Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
Dheron daad qabool kijiye Maqta lajwaab raha..

Shukriyah! Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Pankaj ji!
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Quote from: nandbahu on August 31, 2012, 06:11:19 AM
wah wah

Shukriyah 'nandbahu' ji!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 31, 2012, 09:59:42 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut sundar, bahut khoob Abd ji... mazaa aa gaya padh ke....!!!


 Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 31, 2012, 10:13:59 AM
Abd Sahaab Aadab!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne kia umda kalaam pesh ki hai aapne
janab bahut bahut umdaa... huMari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

bade gazabke ashaar kahe hai behad khoob ...

Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

Namaskaar 'ParwaaZ' ji!
Shukriyah! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
WOH aapko khush wa tandurust rakhey!
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2012, 02:21:53 PM »
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bahut achhe Abd ji.. bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2012, 02:43:44 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 31, 2012, 05:23:35 AM
Baarahaa muskuraa rahey hain aap!
Kyoun bhalaa zulm dhaa rahey hain aap? Javaab naheeN..wah wah wah

Hosh jaataa hai, roo-b-roo hotey:
Jaam bhar-bhar pilaa rahey hain aap? Wah nasha aa gaya...bahut umda

Deyr tak aks dey uyoonoun kaa;
May mein, yeh kyaa milaa rahey hain aap? Ab to nasha shavaab par hai..kya baat hai

Ham ko waisey bhi kaheen chain naheen;
Aur us par, sataa rahey hain aap! Maar daala...wah wah wah

Hai jagah khoob, 'abd', pahloo mein:
Bulaa rahaa hun, jaa rahey hain aap! Ab aa bhi jaao, kyo ghazab dha rahe hai aap

                  - abd bundeli

BAhut bahut damdaar peshkash
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