Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki eejaad se nikal.................................................

by aqsh on November 11, 2013, 01:21:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 11, 2013, 05:09:03 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: November 11, 2013, 05:16:52 PM »
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Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: November 11, 2013, 05:27:17 PM »
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Hum karte rahe minnateiN is baat ka unhe guroor tha
Unke sangdil hone mein sirf hamara hi qusoor tha


Waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 


Kahte haiN mere jazbaat ki, shab e barbaad se nikal
laboN par apni haNsi saja, aur puraani yaad se nikal


bahot khoob......



Uske liye kya sochna, jisne wafa ke saath wafa na nibhaya
KyuN mudh mudh kar use dekhna, dar e fariyaad se nikal


acchaa sher kaha hai..............


Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

sahi soch rahi ho...... jaldi niklo.. 


Jo kuch dikh raha hai uski aankhon meiN, sab fareb hai
Dil meiN dabe har, ehsaas o gam ki buniyaad se nikal


 Applause Applause


Pahele hi qismat ne kuch, kam sitam nahiN kiye”Aqsh”
Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki, eejaad se nikal

Waahh waahhh waahhhhhhh Ash.... what a beautiful poetry.... khoob se khoob likhti hai aap... Masha Allah... likhti rahiye.. bahot si daad...








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«Reply #18 on: November 11, 2013, 06:01:30 PM »
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Haye!!! Aqsh ji aapne mera dil garden garden kr diya... masha allah kya khoob peshkash hai...
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«Reply #19 on: November 11, 2013, 06:14:34 PM »
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aqsh ji , bahut khoob likha hai .
sabhi ashaar khubsurat aur ba-maani
hsin . bahut bahut daad aur mubarakbad.
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«Reply #20 on: November 11, 2013, 06:34:56 PM »
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Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #21 on: November 11, 2013, 07:32:32 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 11, 2013, 01:21:20 PM
Hum karte rahe minnateiN is baat ka unhe guroor tha
Unke sangdil hone mein sirf hamara hi qusoor thabohat badiya


Kahte haiN mere jazbaat ki, shab e barbaad se nikal
laboN par apni haNsi saja, aur puraani yaad se nikal

Uske liye kya sochna, jisne wafa ke saath wafa na nibhaya
KyuN mudh mudh kar use dekhna, dar e fariyaad se nikal

Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

Jo kuch dikh raha hai uski aankhon meiN, sab fareb hai
Dil meiN dabe har, ehsaas o gam ki buniyaad se nikal

Pahele hi qismat ne kuch, kam sitam nahiN kiye”Aqsh”
Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki, eejaad se nikal
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«Reply #22 on: November 11, 2013, 07:33:21 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 11, 2013, 01:21:20 PM
Hum karte rahe minnateiN is baat ka unhe guroor tha
Unke sangdil hone mein sirf hamara hi qusoor tha


Kahte haiN mere jazbaat ki, shab e barbaad se nikal
laboN par apni haNsi saja, aur puraani yaad se nikal

Uske liye kya sochna, jisne wafa ke saath wafa na nibhaya
KyuN mudh mudh kar use dekhna, dar e fariyaad se nikal

Bahut waqt gawaah diya hai, uska intezar karte karte
Mita kar uski har nishaani ko, dard ke mee’aad se nikal

Jo kuch dikh raha hai uski aankhon meiN, sab fareb hai
Dil meiN dabe har, ehsaas o gam ki buniyaad se nikal

Pahele hi qismat ne kuch, kam sitam nahiN kiye”Aqsh”
Mazeed ho rahe naye naye sitamon ki, eejaad se nikal


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: November 11, 2013, 08:51:29 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 11, 2013, 01:50:47 PM
ek rau ke saath dher saaree daad
bahut bahut shukriya sir ji.. pasand karne aur rau dene ke liye...
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Quote from: Iqtedar on November 11, 2013, 02:25:13 PM
bahot khooooob.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
goya ke...
baat hoti gulon tak to sah'lete ham
ab to kanton pe bhi haq hamara nahi (n.m)

Shukriya iqtedar ji... aur bahut hi achchi sharing rahi...
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«Reply #25 on: November 11, 2013, 08:53:06 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on November 11, 2013, 02:41:46 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah behad khooooooooooooobsurat ghazal hai Aqsh ji....... dhero daaaaaaaaad... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut bahut bahut shukriya touhid....
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Quote from: sahal on November 11, 2013, 03:07:48 PM
aqsh ji bohut hi umda ghazal pesh ki hai apne
youn kahiye out of the box thought laga mujhe
hazaron daad
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thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttt sahal for the appreciation....
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on November 11, 2013, 04:38:21 PM

wonderful,ma'am
thnxxxxxxxxxx  a lottttttt MB ji...
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Quote from: srishti raj chintak on November 11, 2013, 04:49:02 PM

Bahut khoobsoorat peshkash.
thnxxxxxxx a lotttttttt shrishtiraj ji....
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«Reply #29 on: November 11, 2013, 08:57:17 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 11, 2013, 05:05:27 PM
waah waah...........
bahut bahut khoob aqsh ji....
Ek Rau bhi kam hai aapki is peshkash ke liye...
Dheron Dheron Daad Kabool Karein..
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thnxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt Bishwajeet pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye...
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