mehakte tum sada rahoge dil ke chaman me

by Taasir siddiqui on September 14, 2010, 09:32:27 AM
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Taaza hai ab tak tumhari yaad mere zehan mein;
mehakte tum sada rahoge dil ke  chaman   mein;

Tumhara hi roop ubharta hai har disha har janib,
kabhi phool to kabhi chand ki tarah gagan mein;

main tumhe dekh sakta hun, tumhe chu bhi sakta hun,
tum hasi me milti ho, to kabhi dard ki chuban mein;

Tum kahin bhi jao,tum  mujhse door na ho sakoge,
maine qaid kar rakha hai tumhe dil ke nasheman mein;

meri mushkilon me tum masihaa ban ke chali aati ho,
uljhano ko suljhati ho jab kabhi hota hun uljhan mein;

tum dur rehkar bhi dur nahin,paas na hokar bhi paas ho,
main dekh leta hun tumhe guzre hue waqt ke darpan mein;
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2010, 09:50:02 AM »
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bahut khoob ji achha likha he
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2010, 11:27:17 PM »
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Quote from: Taasir siddiqui on September 14, 2010, 09:32:27 AM
Taaza hai ab tak tumhari yaad mere zehan mein;
mehakte tum sada rahoge dil ke  chaman   mein;

Tumhara hi roop ubharta hai har disha har janib,
kabhi phool to kabhi chand ki tarah gagan mein;

main tumhe dekh sakta hun, tumhe chu bhi sakta hun,
tum hasi me milti ho, to kabhi dard ki chuban mein;

Tum kahin bhi jao,tum  mujhse door na ho sakoge,
maine qaid kar rakha hai tumhe dil ke nasheman mein;

meri mushkilon me tum masihaa ban ke chali aati ho,
uljhano ko suljhati ho jab kabhi hota hun uljhan mein;

tum dur rehkar bhi dur nahin,paas na hokar bhi paas ho,
main dekh leta hun tumhe guzre hue waqt ke darpan mein;

Very Impressive......Taasir Siddiqui Ji ! Bahut Khoob ! Very Nice Creation... dil se daad Hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 02:46:55 AM »
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Taasir Sahab Aadaab!

Aapke naam ki tarha hi aapke lafzoN meiN khoob taseer nazar aayi hume...... aik behad khub aur purkashish kalaam per dili daad wa mubarakbad kabool kijiye.....

Sabhi ashaar daad ke kabil hai.....
Aise hi likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 02:49:22 AM »
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Bahut Khub Janaab Taasir Sahab
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Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 09:16:15 AM »
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Taasir ji aaj maine aapko pehli baar padha aur padhte hi flat apki shayari pe... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.... sach ... aisa bahut kam padhne ko milta hai yahaan ki aap padho aur us nazm ke dhun me jhumte raho jo ki ab ho raha hai ise padhke...bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai ye aapki...!!!

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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2010, 05:34:42 AM »
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wowwwwwwwww mastam mast gazal taseer ji....bht hi khubb likha hai aapne..
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main tumhe dekh sakta hun, tumhe chu bhi sakta hun,
tum hasi me milti ho, to kabhi dard ki chuban mein;

tum dur rehkar bhi dur nahin,paas na hokar bhi paas ho,
main dekh leta hun tumhe guzre hue waqt ke darpan mein;

ye do sher kaas karke bht zyada pasand aaye mujhe......
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Behadd Khoobsurat .......
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bahut ahchi ghazal hui hai janaab, yuNhi aage bhi likhte rahiye...
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