Mehek raha tha jo...............................Aqsh

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Mehek raha tha jo dil meiN, kushboo ki tarah
Daud raha hai rago meiN, lahoo ki tarah

palkhon par chupi, khamoshi kehti hai
Woh basa hai seene meiN, arzoo ki tarah

Koi aur use dekhe, dil mera dhadak jaata hai
Woh rehta hai mujhme, meri aabroo ki tarah

Aaya hai mehfil meiN, bade dinoN ke baad
Uski khamoshi bhi hai ab, guftagu ki tarah

Karta hai mujhe dekh kar, na jaane kya ishaarey
Ho jaata hai mujhpe asar, koi jaadu ki tarah
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 07:49:15 AM »
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waah kyaa baat hai. Meri aabro ki tarah wala sher bahut saandaar hai.
++1 for u
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 07:52:50 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah kyaa baat hai. Meri aabro ki tarah wala sher bahut saandaar hai.
++1 for u
thank you soooo much masoom
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 08:32:03 AM »
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Bahot khoob bahot hi khoob creation hai aqsh ji. Aapki ye peshkash kuchh khaas andaaz liye hue hai jo munfarid aur murassa hai. Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2012, 08:35:45 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2012, 09:43:31 AM »
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Marhabaa marhabaa khush raho ek rau ke saath
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2012, 09:45:26 AM »
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wah kya bat hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2012, 09:56:19 AM »
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Mehek raha tha jo dil meiN, kushboo ki tarah
Daud raha hai rago meiN, lahoo ki tarah

palkhon par chupi, khamoshi kehti hai
Woh basa hai seene meiN, arzoo ki tarah

Koi aur use dekhe, dil mera dhadak jaata hai
Woh rehta hai mujhme, meri aabroo ki tarah

Aaya hai mehfil meiN, bade dinoN ke baad
Uski khamoshi bhi hai ab, guftagu ki tarah

Karta hai mujhe dekh kar, na jaane kya ishaarey
Ho jaata hai mujhpe asar, koi jaadu ki tarah



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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2012, 10:02:39 AM »
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Bahot khoob bahot hi khoob creation hai aqsh ji. Aapki ye peshkash kuchh khaas andaaz liye hue hai jo munfarid aur murassa hai. Daad pesh hai.
thank you so so sooo much riyaz ashna jee
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2012, 10:03:17 AM »
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thnx nand jee
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 10:03:49 AM »
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Marhabaa marhabaa khush raho ek rau ke saath
rau ke liye bahut bahut shukriya saini sir
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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2012, 10:04:16 AM »
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wah kya bat hai  Applause Applause Applause
thnx anmolarora jee
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thnx qalb jee
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2012, 02:38:46 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Aqsh ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2012, 02:55:58 PM »
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very nice....
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