Mein chaloon: saath raah mein too ho!

by abdbundeli on May 28, 2008, 07:02:33 AM
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 Mein chaloon: saath raah mein too ho!
 Dour-e-khalwat ho: chaah mein too ho!
 
 Go ki, teyree nigaah mein hoon mein;
 Kash, meyree nigaah mein too ho!!

 Unki junnat mujhey qubool naheen;
 Bashartey khwaabgaah mein too ho!!
 
 Jaagnaa bhi naheen mujhey darkaar;
 Agarchey khwaab-e-khwaah mein too ho!!

 Jaagtaa deykhtaa rahoongaa mein:
 Raat ho, nisf maah mein too ho!!

 Dard aashiq ho meyraa : mouzoon hai:
 Teestee har karaah mein too ho!!
 
 Gam na hogaa, mein doob jaoongaa:
 Bahr gahraa ho, thaah mein too ho!!

 Teyrey aagosh mein qayaam rahey:
 Jaan nikaltee ho, aah mein too ho!!
 
 Kuchh naheen chaahiye, 'abd', mujhko:
 Kaash, haasil nikaah mein too ho!!

              - abd bundeli


 
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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2008, 10:21:52 AM »
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Again, a beautiful work !
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2008, 10:20:40 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 28, 2008, 07:02:33 AM
'Mein chaloon: saath raah mein too ho!
 Dour-e-khalwat ho: chaah mein too ho!
 
 Go ki, teyree nigaah mein hoon mein;
 Kash, meyree nigaah mein too ho!!

 Unki junnat mujhey qubool naheen;
 Bashurtey khwaabgaah mein too ho!!
 
 Jaagnaa bhi naheen mujhey durkaar;
 Agurchey khwab-e-khwaah mein too ho!!

 Jaagtaa deykhtaa rahoongaa mein:
 Raat ho, nishf maah mein too ho!!

 Durd aashiq ho meyraa : mouzoon hai:
 Teestee hur karaah mein too ho!!
 
 Gum na hogaa, mein doob jaoongaa:
 Buhra gahraa ho, thaah mein too ho!!

 Teyrey aagosh mein qayaam ruhey:
 Jan nikultee ho, aah mein too ho!!
 
 Kuchh naheen chaahiye, 'Abd' mujhko:
 Kash, haasil nikaah mein too ho!! - abd bundeli


 


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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2008, 10:49:13 AM »
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Zaraab Khan ji!
This is my own creation/composition! Yeh gazal meyree hai! It is not a sharing!
Daad key liye shukriyah!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 08:06:57 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 30, 2008, 10:21:52 AM
Again, a beautiful work !
Thanks Celmira!
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2009, 02:27:19 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 28, 2008, 07:02:33 AM

 Mein chaloon: saath raah mein too ho!
 Dour-e-khalwat ho: chaah mein too ho!
 
 Go ki, teyree nigaah mein hoon mein;
 Kash, meyree nigaah mein too ho!!

 Unki junnat mujhey qubool naheen;
 Bashartey khwaabgaah mein too ho!!
 
 Jaagnaa bhi naheen mujhey darkaar;
 Agarchey khwaab-e-khwaah mein too ho!!

 Jaagtaa deykhtaa rahoongaa mein:
 Raat ho, nisf maah mein too ho!!

 Dard aashiq ho meyraa : mouzoon hai:
 Teestee har karaah mein too ho!!
 
 Gam na hogaa, mein doob jaoongaa:
 Bahr gahraa ho, thaah mein too ho!!

 Teyrey aagosh mein qayaam rahey:
 Jaan nikaltee ho, aah mein too ho!!
 
 Kuchh naheen chaahiye, 'abd', mujhko:
 Kaash, haasil nikaah mein too ho!!

              - abd bundeli


 

Wah wah kya khoob likha Uncle ji... Daad hazir hai  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2009, 03:23:13 AM »
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Wah Wah Abd Ji! Kya baat hai..  Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2009, 07:38:29 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 13, 2009, 02:27:19 AM
Wah wah kya khoob likha Uncle ji... Daad hazir hai  Thumbs UP
Thanks a lot Roja!
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2009, 07:39:37 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 13, 2009, 03:23:13 AM
Wah Wah Abd Ji! Kya baat hai..  Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause
Thanks a lot Deepati!
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 07:43:16 AM »
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Wah very beautiful gazal Abd ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 08:05:10 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 13, 2009, 07:43:16 AM
Wah very beautiful gazal Abd ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot Madhu!
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2010, 05:55:56 PM »
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bahut khoob kaha hai aapne.
abdji. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 19, 2010, 12:54:00 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 18, 2010, 05:55:56 PM
bahut khoob kaha hai aapne.
abdji. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks SURESH SANGWAN ji!

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