Mein Deewana.......Premdeep

by premdeep on September 02, 2013, 02:24:49 PM
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Mene pyaar ko kab jana tha
Bas uski shah par mit jana tha

jab usko dekha bhi na tha
Tab se uska  dewaana tha

kadam khud ba khud chal dete
Jahan uska ana jana tha

Aankhon se kah dete the
Jo lafzon se bayan na tha

Ek koshish thi use pane ki
Milna to ek bahana tha

Dil ki to kismat hai aise
Seesha tha tut jana tha

Ab sochta hun aksar tanha
Wo haqikat thi ya fasana tha

Jaam lagakar labon par hai paya
Is zindagi mein kya khona kya pana tha
 
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2013, 03:26:18 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2013, 03:56:00 PM »
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Ek koshish thi use pane ki
Milna to ek bahana tha

Dil ki to kismat hai aise
Seesha tha tut jana tha

waah waah prepdeep ji bohut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2013, 04:25:16 PM »
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Aadaab Janab..!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob bade achche khayaal bayaaN kiye haiN aapne...
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe...

Par yeH quoted ashaar hume behad khoob lage...
Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



Quote from: premdeep on September 02, 2013, 02:24:49 PM

jab usko dekha bhi na tha
Tab se uska  dewaana tha

Dil ki to kismat hai aise
Seesha tha tut jana tha

Ab sochta hun aksar tanha
Wo haqikat thi ya fasana tha

 
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2013, 04:49:18 PM »
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beautiful . bahut saadgi bhara
andaaz hai . bahut daad .
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2013, 04:49:29 PM »
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bahut khoob happy9
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2013, 04:53:16 PM »
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waah waah.. bahut achhe.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2013, 05:29:52 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2013, 05:56:07 PM »
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bahot khooob, waaah waah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2013, 07:14:19 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah... kya kehne bahut bahut khoob somu... badi hi achchi kalaam rahi.. hazaron hazaron daad...
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2013, 08:50:26 PM »
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Waah-waah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2013, 10:44:33 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Premdeep ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai apne....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2013, 10:53:43 PM »
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kadam khud ba khud chal dete
Jahan uska ana jana tha

kya baat hai... bahut badhiya Premdeep jee
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2013, 09:20:36 AM »
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waah waah....... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2013, 08:08:33 PM »
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thanks to all for appreciation
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