Mein pukaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

by abdbundeli on October 30, 2008, 02:26:14 PM
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Lalka'artaa huaa thak gayaa!
Kabhi haartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Rahey bojh itney dimaag pai;
Mein utaarataa huaa thak gayaa!

Kabhi aaye na tum zad-e-deed mein;
Mein nihaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Sunee tum ney meyree sadaa naheen;
Mein pukaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Naheen raat meyree khatam huyee;
Mein guzaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Tah-e-zehn gard-o-gubaar they;
Mein buhaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Rah-e-zeest mein kayee kheyf* they:
Mein sudhaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Kayee khasm-o-khouf-e-khayaal** they;
Jinhain maartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Kahaan jaakey paauun tumhain,'abd',
Mein wichaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

*Daraawaney uubarh-khabarh utaar-chadhhaaw
** Khayaalee dushman wa khouf (dar, bhaya)
        
                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2008, 02:28:04 PM »
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aaye kuchh abr kuch sharaab aaye
us ke baad aaye jo azaab aaye

(abr : a cloud; azaab : punishment,difficulty)

baam-e-miinaa se maahtaab utre
dast-e-saaqii meN aaftaab aaye

(baam-e-miinaa : heaven’s terrace; maahtaab : moonlight; dast-e-saaqii : hands of the cup bearer; aaftaab : sun-shine)

har rag-e-KhuuN meN phir charaaGhaaN ho
saamne phir wo be-naqaab aaye

(rag-e-KhuuN : arteries and veins; charaaGhaaN : lighting; be-naqaab : unveiled)

kar rahaa thaa Gham-e-jahaaN kaa hisaab
aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye

(Gham-e-jahaaN : mundane sufferings; hisaab : calculations; be-hisaab : incalculable)

na ga’ii tere Gham kii sardaarii
dil meN yuuN roz inqilaab aaye

(sardaarii : tyranny; inqilaab : revolution)

is tarah apnii Khamoshii guuNjii
goyaa har simt se javaab aaye

(Khamoshii : silence; guuNjii : reverberate; goyaa : as if; simt : direction; javaab : answers)

“Faiz” thii raah sar-ba-sar manzil
ham jahaaN pahuNche kaamyaab aaye

(raah : path; sar-ba-sar : adjacent; manzil : destination; kaamyaab : successful)

-Faiz Ahmed Faiz
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2008, 03:09:00 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji

Nice sharing Rishi...
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2008, 03:17:59 PM »
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dareechoN tak chale aaye tumhare daur ke khatre
ham apne ghar se baahar jhaankne ka hauslaa bhi kho baithe
................................................. . .........................

wo apne waqt ke nasshe mein khushiaN chhin le tujhse
magar jab tum hansee baantoN to usko bhool mat jaana
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apne har har lafz ka khud aaiinaa ho jaaoongaa
us ko chhota kah ke main kaise badaa ho jaaoongaa

tum giraane mein lage the tum ne sochaa hi nahiin
main giraa to maslaa ban kar khadaa ho jaaoongaa

mujh ko chlane do, akelaa hai abhi meraa safar
raastaa rokaa gayaa to qaafila ho jaaoongaa

saari duniya ki nazar mein hai meraa ahd-e-vafaa
ek tere kahne se kya main bevafaa ho jaaoongaa

-Waseem Barelvi
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2008, 05:06:11 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on October 30, 2008, 03:09:00 PM
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Bohat khoob Abd ji

Nice sharing Rishi...
Shukriyah honeyrose ji!
Rishii ji! Thanks for introducing me to some lovely memorable kalaams!
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2008, 05:21:30 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 30, 2008, 02:26:14 PM
Lalka'rtaa huaa thak gayaa!
Kabhi haartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Rahey bojh itney dimaag pai;
Mein utaarataa huaa thak gayaa!

Kabhi aaye na tum zad-e-deed mein;
Mein nihaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Sunee tum ney meyree sadaa naheen;
Mein pukaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Naheen raat meyree khatam huyee;
Mein guzaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Tah-e-zehn gard-o-gubaar they;
Mein buhaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Rah-e-zeest mein kayee kheyf* they:
Mein sudhaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Kayee khasm-o-khouf-e-khayaal** they;
Jinhain maartaa huaa thak gayaa!

Kahaan jaakey paauun tumhain,'abd',
Mein wichaartaa huaa thak gayaa!

*Daraawaney uubarh-khabarh utaar-chadhhaaw
** Khayaalee dushman wa khouf (dar, bhaya)
        
                   - abd bundeli


Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdbundeli saheb!!

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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2008, 06:05:57 PM »
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Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2008, 10:36:41 PM »
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main likhu koi sher teri tarah
sajid ke sath aaj ghayel bhi thak gaya
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2008, 04:28:31 AM »
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sajid_ghayel ji!
Mein zayeef hoon, thakaa isliye;
Meyree baat aur hai: umra hai!
Ho jawwan tum, meyrey dost nou!
Raho taazah dam, badhho, mat thako!!
                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2008, 05:13:42 AM »
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bohut khoob abd ji Applause

nice sharing rishii ji
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2008, 05:27:52 AM »
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kaushikbhawna008 ji!
Thanks a lot!
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2008, 08:46:38 AM »
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Thanks Everyone N Abidji
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«Reply #12 on: October 31, 2008, 12:59:48 PM »
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main dhoondhhta hun jise vo jahaan nahi milta
nayi zamin naya aasamaan nahii milta

nayi zamin naya aasamaan bhii mil jaaye
naye bashar kaa kahin kuchh nishaan nahi milata

vo teg mil gayi jis se hua hai qatl mera
kisi ke haath kaa us par nishaan nahi milta

vo meraa gaanv hai vo mere gaanvv ke chuulhe
ki jin men shole to shole dhuaan nahi milta

jo ik Khudaa nahi milta to itana maatam kyun
yahan to koyi mera hamzabaan nahi milta

khada hun kab se main chehron ke ek jangal men
tumhaare chehre ka kuchh bhi yahan nahi milata

-Kaifi Azmi
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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2008, 02:45:16 PM »
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Rishii ji!
Thanks for having shared such a lovely gazal!
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«Reply #14 on: October 31, 2008, 03:17:03 PM »
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