mera dard...sheba

by Sheba on April 16, 2010, 02:30:55 AM
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                    na janey kya dekhta hai phooloan ki mehak main,
                    aataa nahin usey maza daulat ki chamak main,

                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main,

                    bann sakaa na woh wafadar kabhi watan ka,
                    na maloom kya kami thee yahan key namak main,

                    'anaa'to itni basi hai insaan main aaj,
                    ho jaata hai qatl khyaaloan key farq main,

                    izzat ki abb kisey parwaah hai yahan sheba,
                    ladtaa hai khaandaan yahan khuli sadak main......!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2010, 05:19:36 AM »
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WAH WAH SABSE BADHIYA, EK DAM SAHI.
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2010, 08:15:48 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut Bahut Khoob Shebaji..Aakhri Ashaar Par To Hazaaro Daad..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2010, 03:43:27 PM »
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                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main,

                  
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Wah Kya kahene ,, Hazaro Dad Hazir hain ,, Sabhi ashar apni hi wazh me .. uper quote kiya howa ashar to bus kya kahiye .. kya hi qoob tarjumani hai halat-a- haziran ki ,, Bahoth umda.. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe..


Duwa Go.

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«Reply #4 on: April 17, 2010, 08:09:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sheba Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 17, 2010, 10:39:53 AM »
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                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main..

                        bohutkhub sheba ji
                   

                 
                   

                   
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2010, 10:53:26 AM »
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Good thoughts and ideas.

Just a little thing, please take goo care of "qafeeya" like namak, ferq, serek...etc. These words must be "humqafia".

Keep up!
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2010, 11:24:19 AM »
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Wah Sheba-ji sunder kalaam hai aapka....
Bade nape tule shabdo main bhoot wajandaar baat kahi hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



Quote from: Sheba on April 16, 2010, 02:30:55 AM
                   

                    na janey kya dekhta hai phooloan ki mehak main,
                    aataa nahin usey maza daulat ki chamak main,

                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main,

                    bann sakaa na woh wafadar kabhi watan ka,
                    na maloom kya kami thee yahan key namak main,

                    'anaa'to itni basi hai insaan main aaj,
                    ho jaata hai qatl khyaaloan key farq main,

                    izzat ki abb kisey parwaah hai yahan sheba,
                    ladtaa hai khaandaan yahan khuli sadak main......!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2010, 10:02:03 AM »
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Quote from: Rover on April 16, 2010, 05:19:36 AM
WAH WAH SABSE BADHIYA, EK DAM SAHI.

thank u rover ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2010, 10:02:39 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 16, 2010, 08:15:48 AM
Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut Bahut Khoob Shebaji..Aakhri Ashaar Par To Hazaaro Daad..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank u khawaish ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2010, 10:03:23 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 16, 2010, 03:43:27 PM
                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main,

                 



Wah Kya kahene ,, Hazaro Dad Hazir hain ,, Sabhi ashar apni hi wazh me .. uper quote kiya howa ashar to bus kya kahiye .. kya hi qoob tarjumani hai halat-a- haziran ki ,, Bahoth umda.. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe..


Duwa Go.

Qadeertoopchi

thank u qadeer sahab
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2010, 10:04:33 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 17, 2010, 08:09:27 AM
Bahut khoob Sheba Ji

thank u rajesh ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2010, 10:30:32 AM »
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Wah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aape Sheba ji.great creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 18, 2010, 05:01:47 PM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai bahot khoob likha Sheba ji. Aajkal ke halaat par bahot bebaki aur khoobsurati se likha hai aapne. Ye do sher mujhe sab se achhe lage:

'anaa'to itni basi hai insaan main aaj,
ho jaata hai qatl khyaaloan key farq main,
izzat ki abb kisey parwaah hai yahan sheba,
ladtaa hai khaandaan yahan khuli sadak main.

Daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2010, 05:13:16 AM »
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Quote from: rayees abdullah on April 17, 2010, 10:39:53 AM
               
                   

                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main..

                        bohutkhub sheba ji
                   

                 
                   

                   

thank u rayees ji
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